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lashawnscott92
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Poetry Contest

This is my first open competition and I have chosen the topic of discussion to be the first time. Meaning poems with a story (true or made up, only you will know) about a made up character or one's first time.
I will choose One winner, plus a runner up.
It will end June 1st.


Have fun and let those creative juices flow

anandosen
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Dear Friend I am running a similar competition about a fictious character these days but the difficulty is that I cannot distinguish between these two competitons. Can you please have a look at mine one called Fictious Character Challenge and explain me how different is yours from me?

PierreTheMad
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Anando,

Lashawn's challenge seems to be specifically about one's first time having sex.

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i'm on it

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young and naive, but my body knowing exactly what it wants
the fear of whats to come plays with my mind
the uncertainty of not being ready but my body flaming for the unknown
you being older are guiding me through this
easing my fears,whispering sweet nothing in my ear

'i'm ready'  i just want to get this fear to fade
you moving slowly on top of me inching my legs apart
looking in those big brown eyes of yours while you ask are you sure?
i love you i want to claim you as mine but you must be ready?
grabbing your face kissing you softly answers all your doubts
your member moves in gently
but your still kissing me tenderly
stroking my head as you move closer in
i gasp from the sharp pain. you stay still until i can breathe
moving slowly the pain is fading i begin to move with your rhythm
enjoying the feeling, both clinging on to each other as you fill me to the hilt
my body feeling so tingly and a feeling i can't explain its new
its overwhelming  i'm arching my back into you begging for more
begging for something i don't know about but needing to find out
my body starts to shake as you pump a little faster
i can't begin to explain what it felt like when my insides started to spasm
grabbing onto you as you claim whats yours.
we tremble together into pure bliss of our orgasm

laying there while your still inside of me feeling content
you whisper i love you as we both fall asleep joined as one

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what a clever idea. i don't know if this compeition is still running, if it is i might give it a go. beatiful pun at the end, i loved it

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[quote]TheBlackRabbit said:
what a clever idea. i don't know if this compeition is still running, if it is i might give it a go. beatiful pun at the end, i loved it


it is he told me it was so go for it

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[quote]TheBlackRabbit said:
what a clever idea. i don't know if this compeition is still running, if it is i might give it a go. beatiful pun at the end, i loved it



Yes it still running. I will be running it until June 1st. Invite others to join the fun

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I remember it like it was yesterday
the nervous feeling, and the ache
His closed eyes, and that cute noise he'd make

Nervous, scared, and confused
But so many questions answered
I remember it like it was yesterday
It happened so fast
His heavy breathing, my hand ran down his chest

Like the perfect song, I could do it again, and again
After, we shared a smile, to this day, still 'just' friends

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Invite friends :)

poet Anonymous

Candid Candace:

A boy with perilous thoughts
thinking about nothing else but sex
all I wanted to do was get in your pants
yes, I know you're a bigger girl
I do like them skinny, but you're the best I can get...

A shallow boy looking at his shiny new big toy
she promised me I could do whatever I wanted
I wasn't her first, and I wouldn't be her last
my virginity was hers for the taking
In the back of my mind I wondered if this was a mistake I was making

A feeling of lust, we were both breathing heavily
back down the hall inside of her bedroom
we kept the door cracked in case we heard her little brother coming
her bed was a piece of shit, it kept falling in
at least she didn't make me wear a condom...

A boy's first time at sexual pleasure
I was honestly too afraid to cum
I did it on my own so many times before
wondering why I couldn't do it, I faked an orgasm
she obviously didn't know any better, because she believed me...

A first love heartbreak, she left me for another boy
and still to this day, she has it in her head
that she holds my virginity
what a laugh!
it belongs to someone else instead
I'm being candid Candace!

 

anandosen
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[quote]PierreTheMad said:
Anando,

Lashawn's challenge seems to be specifically about one's first time having sex.


PTM, Quite strange challenge I will say and competition-wise also I think it wil be a difficult one. I think I have to read some entries first.

zwrites
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If I do chose to write one...where do I send it to and HOw?

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[quote]zwrites said:
If I do chose to write one...where do I send it to and HOw?



just post it on here the same way you just commented, or submit it as poem and in the title put (First time chalenge)

poet Anonymous

Whisky
and birthdays
no party hat this time
just what you want
what I want

take your lips
from off of mine
take your heart and spill it
I've seen it before
I want the inside this time
I want the pleasure and
release

Three o'clock on the clock
Joy Division and a blue light
shining on our faces
on our bodies
on me
on you

a blue light shining

is all I really remember.

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