Darker Erotic

Well since I love writing and also reading darker erotic poems I thought why not make a competition.

No real rules besides make it dark and sexy

I'll start with one of my most darkest of poems

http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/187405-snuff/

Snuff

Another girl another contraption
A simple rod hanging from the ceiling
Attached a young tart that was jogging
Little did she know their being a monster waiting
Inside bushes with a rag of chloroform
She sees my leather mask as I reach for her face
"Night-night princess"
She looks so scared with her blindfold
Must feel the rope around her neck
The chair at the bottom of her feet  
Shivers run through her naked body
She hears my steps “who’s there?”
“Shut up and choke bitch”
I kick the chair out from under her
Watching as she starts to turn blue
Struggles while flailing legs and arms
“I’m not done yet”
Cutting her down, she gasp for air
“Why are you doing this?!”
“Ha! ha! ha!”
I take off the blindfold for she can see my sickness
Grabbing a razor I cut both her wrist
"Bleed for me baby"
As blood runs I insert myself between legs
Fucking her as screams of fear echo
I slap that pretty face and spit on her every time she struggles
“You like that you dirty whore?”
“No!!!”
Guess we will have to try harder than
I drag her from her hair to the shitter
Then push her head down
All I hear is a gargle sounds
Lift her head
“I can’t breathe!!”
I don’t fucking care for your life
Now take it in your tight anal hole while you drown
Push her head back down as I have my thrill
Finally I release my grip only to grab a sexy whip that I covered with blades
“Please no…  Aaaaaahhhh!!””
I whip her over and over as blood sprays out
The warmth of her red liquid turns me on
"Now get on your fucking back"
I ram my dick inside, the feeling a mixture of heaven and hell
Wrapping hands around that whores neck as she fights for her life
“Die you fucking slut!”
Try as she might the punches and kicks have no force
I just continue my hard thrust to the point of her pussy tearing
My cum shoots out as I feel her life slip away

Uhhh … not sure how that qualifies as "sexy" but hey, whatever floats your boat.lol

I may be back for this one

Only if dat bitch has rigor mortis, dem maggots can't cum from somewheres else.lol

Uhhhhhh… I'd rather not

lol, whatever works... Sicker the better

Got something, I think. Any limit on words/entries?

sorry I saw this crap.
You gotta flag this stuff as extreme, guys.

nop

The Drifter -teaser-

         I was looking for some excitement, and she was alone, looking for a ride. She was walking a desolate stretch of dirt road that I often use to avoid the local pigs when I pulled up in my van. And, just like that, she hopped in the passenger seat without even a moment's hesitation, which would prove to be her last stupid mistake.


With a smile on my face I faked for the gearshift and slammed her head into the dash instead. The blow knocked her out cold, like I had hoped. With nobody else around, I wasted no time in retrieving a roll of duct tape from the glove box with which I bound her limbs and covered her mouth to keep her quiet when she regained consciousness, and proceeded to place her in the back beside the spare tire.

EM20XX said:nop

YEP. If the poem in your collection is flagged, you gotta flag any thread you put that same extreme poem on.

the mods already smacked one on this now. TY mod.

I could submit the most horrible torture plan involving corkscrew, cactus and a sharpened goat horn applied to a guy who pisses me off, but I'd rather not give the world any more crazy ideas... especially not curious kids. Your eyeballs would bleed from reading it.

I'm off this thread now.

No rules ?? nothing can be designed without the guidance of rules.Licence is no guide.