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Loves that sucked and rocked

poet Anonymous

(Rocked)

Forbidden Shores

How easily you hold
my imagination captive
within confinements
of sunset and sunrise
 
glinting
     touching
memories linger

 
floating in your arms
like aria of sirens
of unacceptable lovers
on the shores of Troy
 
soothing
       mending
with Nyx whispers

 
I lose careless moments
of undulated reverie
in your bedroom voice
calling my name
 
needing,
     wanting
in tender embrace

 
strengths untouched,
melancholy flesh merge
doused with ripe nectars
of mystical fruits of love
 
sinking
       floating
through storms

 
on rugged terrains
tracing map of wilderness
with the tip of our tongue
carving ancient memories
 
of us,
 with sweat and tear
aligning epochs

 
before the moon
wanes again
retreating to low tides
of the world
 
measuring
     intensity
of our despair
 

contemplating dreams
of common language

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(Sucked)

Worthless Infatuation

Nails dug in alluvium flesh
drawing intricate lines on flamed tissue
the remnants embedded under skin
feeding the coiled twisted membranes
of my infatuation
hopelessly
in love
with your being

Kissing your coveted mouth
I inhale the breath rising from depths of your soul
a concoction of bitter tears and white cells
cleansing the perplexities of my sins
in sacrilegious blasphemy
a dismal endeavor
in futile
desolation

You are the viability of my existence
a mucilage for the mutilated soul
in Babylonian captivity
this crucifixion of neuroticism
stretching tensile flesh to bone
inside the shrine
my temple
of doom

The untamable passion
incessantly running through my veins
unassailable and enigmatic
merely a cloak draped
over my vulnerable heart
to do with
as you wish

Pity!

Your marital vows nothing but a mockery
maggot infested existence
feeding on two women with fractured hearts
for your pleasure
venomously intertwined
forever

Balefulmalevolence
Thought Provoker
United States 6awards
Joined 6th Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 143

"Twirling, twirling away"

She broke me.
I could feel the love
S
  L
     I
        P
        R
        I
        G
        H
         Through my fingers.
The sadness plagued me like
Rain crashing down on pavement.
Devastation took it's course.
As my mind twirled in circles,
I could feel my words lose their force.
It never occurred to me
How delicate I truly was,
Until I was "the lilac
That shed its fragrance on her heel"
As it stepped all over me.
She didn't just break my heart,
She stole it right out of my chest
And made my emotions twirl in circles,
And deprived me of my rest.
The unforgiving realm of shadows,
Draping their blinding veil upon my eyes,
Made it almost impossible
For me to smile.
I felt my bodily structure rust,
As it too, twirled away.
I tried my best to forgive her,
And I begged her to stay....

"There won't be a next time"

I thought all had been lost.
And her mind was made up.
I thought she was happy,
And my emotions were the cost.
I fought everyday,
For her to come back.
And then It just happened,
Like all her thoughts had just snapped.
She told me she loved me,
And she wanted me back.
A dream?
Pinch me.
This can't be real,
I must be dreaming!!!
But this was no dream,
The veil had been lifted,
Not only to smile,
But also to scream.
I love her,
I love her,
I love her so much!
I can't express,
How you left and turned me to dust!
You did betray me,
I'll never forget,
Forgive you I will,
But next time,
You're dead!
You're the strength I need
To move these mountains,
Without you I can't strive.
I love you so much,
Without you,
I might die.




violetsue
jaiamba
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 5th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 11

My lips still burn with your kiss
Your love is a drug and I am your junkie
Fiending after a sensation I can only get with you
Lowering all my defenses to let in a virus
The H1nof you virus that all has come to
When I ache with a desire so strong I sweat
When I moan with a passion so blinding I die
When I breathe in your scent like an animal
I am lost, so lost in my addiction to you

violetsue
jaiamba
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 5th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 11

THis is the good love poem...

How does love find me today?
It finds me quite enraptured I would say.
Completely in awe of the color of his eyes
Totally consumed by his face in my thighs
I linger in paradise a long while today
Letting my reverie lead me into erotic play
I can not help it this body of mine
Has utterly enslaved me to your orgasmic design
The highs and the lows of love are extreme
Just like the intensity of my climax and release to me
So let the future take care of itself
For right now I am absorbed in your presence
God damn it you've ruined me for anyone else!!
love you baby

sapph16
chey_bay17
Thought Provoker
United States 2awards
Joined 24th Jan 2013
Forum Posts: 125

Thank you all for your beautiful submissions

summultima
uma
Dangerous Mind
India 34awards
Joined 3rd Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 1336


 The Clays of Transition in the Politics of Love


I wait for you on the lotusy pond’s secretive side
counting stars to feeling moist gritty clays beneath
spiders hiding in the concentric webs under coolmoon
hints this opportune hunter in similar mindweave
hissing bushes more and more until it silences ear
you stand there, a divine silhouette for destruction
poetic juices splash over as you approach me closer
fatal hormones rushing in the vasculature by glances
I mould the clay beds in our rolling forms until a stamp
that you intake well as what is in much hype, this love
boneless tongue’s baseless words you give in senseless
the upward spirals setting you in a firsttime rocking feel

Is a delusional debut towards the final brittle hard settings

as I still feed on your fragrant beauty
of your gleaming eyes and innocence
slowly, smell in my four flavours of emetic humors
of betrayal and backstabs, of deceits and vengeance
over your delicate nightweave skin in traps
smothering until your core mitochondrial powers
slave you are in the trail of scents I exhale
chains I need not tighten anywhere
that you self-wear in dire-fidelity terms
thrives thus my manipulative maggots
tearing-cracking you to fragments
sucking until-after death  traceless
clinical spotless  breaking clays

the assumptive love of clays
that rocks to sucks to disappear
in the politics of predacious plays



p.s: two poems, combined in a middle transitional line

dalixx
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 25th Jan 2014
Forum Posts: 26

TRUE LOVE

you are my everything
you are my soul
you are the one
makes my heart full

without you here
there is no me
your the reason
my heart can see

you are the fuel
that makes me fly
without your love
I wouldn't even try

you are an angel
with beautiful wings
you are the voice
that my heart sings

I tell you these words
as you come from above
float into my arms
my only true love


ROUGH LOVE

want to sleep
my life away
but gotta keep
liven each day

way I feel
blinded by sight
is this real
always to be night

endless fight
life is rough
for some light
keep my love

case28
Alexander Case
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 16th June 2013
Forum Posts: 2084



[BITTER]


Perfect Loveless


Porcelain lady, sharp divine beauty  
with cold feet for walking over me  
fading pilot light
fingers pointed at self-regarding plane

touching mine
kissing yours
every effort inflicting solace  
secretes into my distaste

your vital touch  
snakes silent spells  
breaking my will  
to linger in my perfect loveless

and when you’re forced to kiss my beard  
in our feeble re-enactment of passion
does the trimmed hairs around my lips  
spike loving thoughts like a sly drug  

rousing tender flashbacks  
to when you held true passion  
between your lips
kissing hers?





[SWEET]


the Winemaker
 
 
the vines have prevailed dry blistering frosts  
and ripened fruit, fraught with sleepless nights  
of looming rain, threatening fungal bloom  
 
pulped forbidden fruit from caressing groves  
plucked tender harvest of my pressing soul  
encapsulated sensations fulfil my glass heart  
 
this offering, my essence bottled in lead crystal  
spells unbound with the romantic rite of cork  
unleashing the flow from my jugular jinni  
 
in velvet plume I bleed and I am blissfully absolved  
outpouring into the sacred chalice with gentle kiss  
of fragile mouths gulping air in pulsating chant  
 
hands held precious flow swirled for an eternity  
arousing scent of passion with every breath  
and taste… the blood of life from lush tannin lips





Written by Alexander Case

poet Anonymous

Thank you Sapph for the honor of runners up and congratulations to JJ-Jay and Ricky.

LobodeSanPedro
Tyrant of Words
Sierra Leone 109awards
Joined 16th Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 3304

This was a great competition with great pieces ... Incredible ink JJJay! Kudos chey_bay for hosting.

summultima
uma
Dangerous Mind
India 34awards
Joined 3rd Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 1336

thankyou sapph16 for giving us wide scope of thoughts to write..congratz Jjjay, Nikki, Ricky n all entrants:)

sapph16
chey_bay17
Thought Provoker
United States 2awards
Joined 24th Jan 2013
Forum Posts: 125

thank you for your entry nikki and Lobonde always nice to know apprieciate the encouraging words and i just wanted to see love and uma all should have range and not be limited thank you for all the submissions and having fun with it :)

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