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SHOES ... sexy, sensational, sassy ... survival.

LobodeSanPedro
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Poetry Contest

Write a poem about life's essential vessel.
Write about SHOES ... and the role they play in your life or the lives of those around you.  Is your closet filled with deadly sexy stilettos ? (guys that question is optional for you) ... Do you have the pair you wore in your first marathon ... How many vintage Jordans do you own? What about your biker's boots or cowboy boots, or are those one and the same? 

Make these poems or prose pieces ... smart - funny - insightful - sexy, however you see it. 

One week - two pieces per writer (new or old) - the ink cannot have won a previous competition ...

"Give a girl the right shoes, and she can conquer the world." ~ 
Marilyn Monroe



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CellarDoor954
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I gotta pair of running shoes
That help me run circles 'round you
See I just insulted you and made a joke too

My sneakers are the best
They boost my confidence
So I can run a long distance and not have to rest
Not an ache in my chest
And I've made my way to athletic success

And it's all thanks to my running shoes
Comfortable and stylish too
I know it sounds girly but it's true
Shoes are what make you
Be able to see your exercise goals through

snugglebuck
Dangerous Mind
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OH BABY!

Baby needs a new pair of shoes
So if you kiss me, I'll kiss you
Throw in a pair of Jimmy Choo's
And I might even give you a quick little screw

LobodeSanPedro
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Our incomes are like our shoes; if too small, they gall and pinch us; but if too large, they cause us to stumble and to trip.
John Locke


Thank you snugglebuck and cellardoor954 for kicking things off.

liz
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                                         Sandles running on the beach
                                         Prada on the runaway
                                         White high heels on your wedding day
                                         Nike running to the sound of the beat
                                         Jordan basketball playing on the streets  
                                         Classic Converse pushes Dora sneakers on a swing
                                         Tactic boots for military fleet
                                          I wear Adidas cause they love me
                                          Now what shoes rock your feet?

poet Anonymous

I am excited, great topic, I shall be back!

Two Pieces correct?

LobodeSanPedro
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BlueRoseLiz ... Great visual structure to your piece.

sw9618 ... Yes, up to two pieces.

CellarDoor954
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Every time I wear my slick blue Brooks
It's always worth the money it took
It's not just the fact they carry me miles
But they catch the girls' attention; make them smile
And all the while I'm getting fit
So it doubles my benefits and I didn't even know it

Be sure to get a stylish pair of shoes
Because girls notice it and we all know it's true

poet Anonymous

Okay LSP, I have both pieces, again great idea. Besides my GF, I am in-love with my Nikes and J's.

Smell of Success

Get down on that bed
girl, know your place,
you’re naked and see
the look on my place
my kicks are on
and you’re my sensual con
open that mouth
and suck in the pleasure
of my Nikes…
Kiss them
Love them
Lick them dry
run your fingers
along the rubber
and rub your clit
my kicks are so fly
no oven mitts—I be like
bitch no hand condoms
bite the laces slowly
take my sneaker off
and swallow the holy scent
and don’t repent
I climb on top of you
and inject my other Nike
inside your portal
the squeaky sounds
of our intercourse
make me want to cum
but I stop and control
no baby we’re not done
keep that Nike Shox over your
mouth and nose and use your tongue
while I tie its laces around your head
your eyes bulge from the union
of my sneaker’s odor
and my sneaker fisting your hole
and you cum, and cum and scream
through the sneaker
I took my shoe out and remove the other from
your face
I take the cum-covered
sneaker and you lick it
off my kick
then you take my sneaker
and as you blow me
to oblivion, you to tie my
sneaker back on my other foot
We both smile
and I say,
Okay babe, go get your sneakers
let’s have some more
fun and relish in the sexy
smell of sneaker success!

_____________________________________________________________________________________


Sound of Success

Birthdays, holidays,
special occasions
my yearn, my need, my want:
sneaker heaven
When Jordans are my feet
and they squeak, I just
glow with delight
I rock these J’s with all my might
and they complement me
and send my confidence
to a roaring height.
The smell of new Jordans—
nothing compares,
non-Jordans, can’t compare
Adidas and Reebok don’t
have a shot
Jordans are so hot
and make my feet
thrive and not rot
Retro 1, 2, 3, 4
Ah Jordans galore
Spizikes black, grey, white
My closet is filled with Jordan might
All who look are in seriously jealous
True, I am overzealous
People stop in streets
Turn around
Stare at my feet with Jordans
As their multi-colored cloud
money ain’t an object with
J’s around
As it squeaks
I cry of joy
That sound only
a pair of J’s can make,
always makes me everything,
but coy.




MadameLavender
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poet Anonymous

Behind Closed Wooden Doors

Mine are all kept behind a set of closed wooden doors
Because they are my gold; my pretty little whores
Always chic, some arrive high-heeled, patent leathered, or pointy toed
Others are content to shimmer; trimmed in gold

Dress is a matter of personal expression
But these are the ones that I want to take to heaven
They are styled in blues, blacks, purple and white
Some have soles soft and squishy, and fit, but are too tight

Casual, hard-working, with removable ties that bind
Each is unique and different; some have outrageous price tags of a different kind
Skipping from one house to another, depending on the season
I sometimes leave all of them home, without any reason

Now some are reserved for a warm summer night’s swim
Shielding, protecting, and allowing my feet to gently skim
Over the rocks, through the woods, some stand tired, after a long hike
And some I throw in the car to show off, when I shop or ride a bike

I can switch one out for another whenever I get bored
And some can be thrown away when they get ripped and torn
Always waiting patiently, some are poised to appear on a cold winter’s day
Others, on a moonless summer night; and some just sit, waiting to come out and play

Barefoot, bobby socks, sexy stockings, what will I choose?  It is whatever the mood
Because they all adorn and compliment me, as they truly should
Clothes make the man, but these are made for a woman
Some think no one should go from one to the other like this, but I know that I should

Tight-fitting, sexy, and always proper and trim
Their sizes never vary, they remain interchangeable on a whim
My taste in shoes, well, it matches me;
They are never kitschy, always cool, which I secretly hope everyone sees

But my favorite pair of all time were tanned and stood tall
Eighteen inches in all, with real leather skin, like a finely sewn football
I glided whenever I let wore them; they made me six feet tall
My 1977 boots, with three inch heels, buckles on the side, I got them at Wilson’s in the mall

With a long zipper on the shaft, I slowly and seductively opened and closed them many times
And when they were on me, I took off toward Heaven ignoring all of the warning signs
They called me a hippie back then; I carried a matching fringed hobo bag on my shoulder
And these boots made me feel invincible, together, they became my armor, I never felt bolder


"Give a girl the right shoes, and she can conquer the world." ~  
Marilyn Monroe


LobodeSanPedro
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It's a habit of mine now, noticing labels, logos, shoes.
Michael Jordan


sw9618 ... Cool ink ... Why do I get the feeling you're one of those guys who waits on line overnight when a new line of Jordans comes out.

LobodeSanPedro
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They went into my closets looking for skeletons, but thank God, all they found were shoes, beautiful shoes.
Imelda Marcos


Madame Lavender and Primogenito ... Imelda would be proud.  Thank you for adding to the collection.

snugglebuck
Dangerous Mind
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SANDAL MENTAL JOURNEY

Marching
Kicking
Stomping
Clicking

Adolf Hitler
Genghis Kahn
Mussolini
Joseph Stalin

They all wore boots

Forgiving
Loving
Healing
Praying

Siddhartha
Moses
Gandhi
Jesus

They all wore sandals

On your journey through life what will you prefer to wear, hobnails of hate, or flip-flops of care?

poet Anonymous

LobodeSanPedro said:It's a habit of mine now, noticing labels, logos, shoes.
Michael Jordan


sw9618 ... Cool ink ... Why do I get the feeling you're one of those guys who waits on line overnight when a new line of Jordans comes out.


Thanks LSP. Haha, I've never actually waited online, but I have been the first to Footlocker/Finishline when new J's or Nikes come out! I really do love sneakers, I have a non-sexual fetish for them, I guess a hobby. Again, great comp, thanks for inspiring my two pieces.

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