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Poetry competition CLOSED 21st February 2014 8:35pm
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snugglebuck
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F*** You Valentine

Austin_Rura
Austin Rura
Thought Provoker
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Joined 6th Dec 2013
Forum Posts: 327

Poetry Contest

I want to see some evil Slim Shady and Kim/ OJ Simpson/ drunken asshole shit about everyones exes. Come on who else is having a shitty Valentines Day?
unlimited entries per participant. three hundred words or under. new material only. you have one week

I'll start it off.

~Extreme Content~
in the beginning you were with me you thought I was winning
but now I can see it in your face that look that looks misplaced,
on the outside your grinning but in your mind our love your rescinding
I don't know what the fuck to do with how I was once in love with you
im angry and honestly a little bit ashamed
that I could let myself sit their while you placed all the blame
you think that lifes a game that people never change and I am just the same.
well now I have grown up but i will admit i was once in love like my young retarded heart would go blow up.
but now I just want to throw up every time I hear your name

ok so I started out tame but that's about to change im drunk as fuck and im about to run inside your home and grab you by your chains. oh is this your new little boy friend whats his name?
SLAM SLAM
aint that ashame? I ran up on your mane, shot him in the rib and in the brain, turned his ass into a stain?
this entire rhyme is adlibs
straight madness
ran up in your crib shootin
hittin your mans up in the tooth and in the rib
then I raided your fridge then stole your tv and headed out the door pulling the peace sign shouting "Deuces! i'll see yall in a minute."

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Pathospassion
c.d.latin
Thought Provoker
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Fuck this bullshit
I loved her but she loved the enticing
Nature of death popping a million pills
To wipe away a million years of pain

I die in the rain again
Coping by silting the throats of those too close
To even hope for basic freedom

I LOVED HER
But what the hell is love in hell's swells
That overtakes my peaceful jail cell

I can not be angry now
Just pissed the hell off
That i fell like i
Am the one who died

Fuck Poseidon's trident that lies
And claims that i will be healed
By water or time
When the divine keeps rewinding the fucking tape
Back to the scene in this movie in which
She denies Awake

Pathospassion
c.d.latin
Thought Provoker
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Forum Posts: 172

a new version of my last post


Valentines Suicide


She was mine
Overtaking my mind with vines
That dug parts of my soul free

She took parts of me
Away with her piano keys
When she popped numerous pills
To extricate herself from this bullshit

She knows not
How murderous and sick she made me
Creating monsters from my demons
That live off the blood of ignorant
Teenage girls pretending to know what pain is

But pain is
When she leaves no note to say
She knew you loved her
And lived in her every movement

But fuck her harmonic soothing
Because i shudder when she rolls in her grave
Made of my bones and brain
That dissolved in her acid rain

Shove your sanity
Up your God-forsaken ass
And twirl it around to find that land
In which it buys you Peace

Where does Peace dwell
Because i think i saw her in hell
Deemed Persephone
Sucking Satan's penis for money
Or freedom
Or something in between
Like heavenly dreams

Just set me free
And let me be alone
While you procreate more future suicides
For future people to cry acid rain about
And close their doors to
Peaceful prostitution
Because they loved your emoticon using daughters
Who did not love them enough to live

This is your education
On one of the fucking reasons
I die slowly while reading my own poetry
Reminding myself consistently
Why suicide is a good thing

I miss her
And i can not be angry
Because dying is always on my mind
Like a song i listened to too many times

Her decaying corpse walks into the room
Just to press rewind
And does not stop to say goodbye
So fuck Valentines

snugglebuck
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 3rd Feb 2014
Forum Posts: 1873

As the story goes, Lucifer, who was a Cherub, was cast out of Heaven for not fulfilling his angelic duties. I've often wondered if he wasn't the only Cherub to meet this fate. Because from my experience, Cupid can be one evil little weevil.

"So Cupid here is my message to you. If your going to shoot me on Valentine's Day, would you please shoot the woman I'm in love with too?"






Pathospassion
c.d.latin
Thought Provoker
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Forum Posts: 172

snugglebuck said:As the story goes, Lucifer, who was a Cherub, was cast out of Heaven for not fulfilling his angelic duties. I've often wondered if he wasn't the only Cherub to meet this fate. Because from my experience, Cupid can be one evil little weevil.

"So Cupid here is my message to you. If your going to shoot me on Valentine's Day, would you please shoot the woman I'm in love with too?"


Wow you get it but i guess i am a coward... too afraid of death to follow her...



dfwtinman
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Joined 20th Oct 2012
Forum Posts: 29

Dupe

dfwtinman
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 20th Oct 2012
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Sorry, wasn't new stuff.   I need to read more closely.

CellarDoor954
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hey bitch, thought you should read this/I'll even blow you a kiss/once you get dissed/and I dismiss you from my presence/I feel resentment towards you because of the way you left me for some fagot/who says he cares, yet hasn't/shown you respect/what do you expect?/I ain't heard you once say yet/ that I was right/you text me every night/saying how great he is/what bullshit is this?/I don't even give a shit, you act like a fucking kid/say everything I ever did was fake/yet I spoke honestly to your face/for God's sake/how many brains does it take/to see all the mistakes you make?/apparently one since you don't have one/I'd ask you for a clue but you have none/It's okay, I'll put you out of your misery with a gun/lay your corpse out in the sun/then fuck it just for fun/I'm the only one who's ever done the shit I've done/and I'm never on the run/I stay til the job is done/and then only half the fun has begun/I know I speak in several tongues/so I'll dumb it down because I know you're young/and can't comprehend everything I'm saying to you/roses are red, violets are blue/just like the colors of your tears when I come for you/because I'll pick apart your body parts and eat them too/you say I lie but what I say is true/and I'll validate the truth with what I do/since promises don't mean shit until you see them through/just know I'm coming at you with a gun and knife/try to enjoy your last night alive and resist the fight/because I'm on my way to put an end to your life/this is my valentine, hope you like/BITCH!!!!

Sar_Val
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 20th Feb 2014
Forum Posts: 18

I thought we were in love
that I was the one for you,
I had fixed your heart
pieced it together for you.

How could I ever imagined
you were to go back to that bitch,
the one who made you dance
in that burning unsettling ground.

who made you sing your lungs out
for the world to hear you love for her,
just to laugh at you
and crush everything you dreamt of.

Now I'm here
putting the pieces of your heart together;
showing you that there's still hope
hope that you can love once again.

And once you're ready to breathe again
you're too scared to sing for me,
as I'm dancing with fire and pouring my heart out
on to this pages that you will never see.

redstar
Dark Angel
Twisted Dreamer
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Forum Posts: 66

The Sweet Taste of Blood

In the beginning there were no feelings
There was no heart from the start
I wanted to play and leave you and you wanted to fuck me and leave me
So we played the game of love and we both lost the battle
We both said I love you and grew insane with passion
You knew I was bipolar and I new you was a gangster
You knew I was crazy and I knew you liked yo fight back
But what right did you have to walk in that fucking door and hit me
You fucking struck me
You laughed at me when the blood slide down the side of me mouth as I lay in pity on the floor
You laughed and spit at me
But for what fucking reason!!

For what fucking reason did I have to tie you down to the bed and have a butchers knife with lemon juice, salt,and hydrochloric acid
You cried and begged me as I sliced through you skin and laughed
I laughed as your blood touched my skin
I laughed as I slit your cheek then licked the trail of blood that followed
I poured lemon juice into your wounds so slowly so that I made sure you felt my pain
I poured the hydrochloric acid on your penis so that you won't use it anymore
What use was it anyway for a dead man
You screamed and as you screamed I laughed
I laughed until the tears I felt slide down my cheeks
You cried for me to stop as I repeatedly stabbed you in you chest, abdomen, and legs
Your finale and most glorious cry was when I slit your throat and your blood...oh your blood squirted out Yellowstone  
I danced and bathed myself in that wonderful blood
When you finally released the last of your will.... I licked your body clean from the luscious fluid
That sweet but bitter fluid

snugglebuck
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 3rd Feb 2014
Forum Posts: 1873

Thank you for the award.  I've come to believe that bittersweet love poetry is far more sincere, and direct from the heart, than all the artificial praises of adulation that Hallmark has on file.

I enjoyed reading all the entries. Once again, thank you.

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