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A letter to Eminem

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Gg78
26
Joined 5th Mar 2011
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Tyrant of Words


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Good idea different!
CellarDoor954
Forum Posts: 25
Twisted Dreamer
1
Joined 25th Jan 2014
Forum Posts: 25
Dear Slim Shady,
Man, your album Recovery was crazy!
It helped me through my dark times
I dig the way you spit your tight rhymes
I loved the song Almost Famous
I heard it and it was perfect
and I thought, 'No one could imitate this!'
I hear it and feel inspired and uplifted
I'm not kidding, man, you're truly gifted!
The way you arrange shit
Is fantastic to say the least
I listen to your songs everyday and think,
'He's a lyrical beast!'
If you had put out cds every year that you didn't
I'd have helped you name them:
The Pro, Fire Marshall, Hustle and In It To Win It
I know I'm not the best rapper in the world
And I see you all the time getting girls
So I'd like to ask you if you could help me out
You're the only one who helps me with my fears and doubts
You go all out and that is attractive
I'd like to meet you if you don't have a lot happenin'
Please respond to my letter Slim
I'm dying to get to see you
You better Eminem
I think I was meant to meet you
Man, your album Recovery was crazy!
It helped me through my dark times
I dig the way you spit your tight rhymes
I loved the song Almost Famous
I heard it and it was perfect
and I thought, 'No one could imitate this!'
I hear it and feel inspired and uplifted
I'm not kidding, man, you're truly gifted!
The way you arrange shit
Is fantastic to say the least
I listen to your songs everyday and think,
'He's a lyrical beast!'
If you had put out cds every year that you didn't
I'd have helped you name them:
The Pro, Fire Marshall, Hustle and In It To Win It
I know I'm not the best rapper in the world
And I see you all the time getting girls
So I'd like to ask you if you could help me out
You're the only one who helps me with my fears and doubts
You go all out and that is attractive
I'd like to meet you if you don't have a lot happenin'
Please respond to my letter Slim
I'm dying to get to see you
You better Eminem
I think I was meant to meet you
1796
moonlightdance
Joined 2nd Nov 2012
Forum Posts: 28
moonlightdance
Lost Thinker

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It's no surprise that I'm a big fan of his work.
So, the things I want to see included in your work is
1) What's your favourite album? And the reason why (detailed description of a particular song and why that song means more to you than any other on the album gives you extra credit)
Fav Album: Recovery
It just was
2) He stopped putting out music for 4 years, so just imagine if an album was brought out for each of those years, and he gave you the chance to title them - What would you call them?
Title One: Darkening of the Light
Title Two: Contemplation
Title Three: Revolution
Title Four: Lotus
3) Write your own 'Stan' piece - doesn't have to be as long as the one he's originally wrote, but has to have the same amount of stanzas.
Wouldn't want to try to be him...I would write as a girl he meets...kinda like the "good girls like bad guys" song by DMX
So, the things I want to see included in your work is
1) What's your favourite album? And the reason why (detailed description of a particular song and why that song means more to you than any other on the album gives you extra credit)
Fav Album: Recovery
It just was
2) He stopped putting out music for 4 years, so just imagine if an album was brought out for each of those years, and he gave you the chance to title them - What would you call them?
Title One: Darkening of the Light
Title Two: Contemplation
Title Three: Revolution
Title Four: Lotus
3) Write your own 'Stan' piece - doesn't have to be as long as the one he's originally wrote, but has to have the same amount of stanzas.
Wouldn't want to try to be him...I would write as a girl he meets...kinda like the "good girls like bad guys" song by DMX
PleasuresOfPain
Joined 7th Mar 2012
Forum Posts: 62
Thought Provoker

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Cellar Door 959,mad props to your piece!!!It flowed perfectly and I really enjoyed it!!Nice job.
CellarDoor954
Forum Posts: 25
Twisted Dreamer
1
Joined 25th Jan 2014
Forum Posts: 25
Thank you!
MrE
C. R. Powers
Joined 3rd Aug 2012
Forum Posts: 170
C. R. Powers
Thought Provoker

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[Need a write out the Stan song? XD]
0913338
Semaj
Forum Posts: 52
Semaj
Thought Provoker
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Joined 9th Dec 2013
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they call me little skittle
cause i'm in the middle
between baby boy and terrible two
got a chip on my shoulder
the size of a boulder
and i'm gonna roll over you
make you flat like a pancake
ain't no booty shaking earthquake
you shake and shimmy in your shoes
when i munch and crunch my cheerios
i'm like a thousand stereos
i thump and bump the roof from da room
give me milk i mellow
take it and i yell though
wah wah wah wah waaaah
so come on up to my crib
i ain't tell you know fibs
but don't you touch my paci
or i gonna get real nasty
yeah come on up to my crib
i ain't tell you no fib
bu don't you touch my diapy
unless you gonna wipy
eww, little skittle
what you do?
dat won't me
dat m&m
his shit the stinky sticky skunk
what?
cause i'm in the middle
between baby boy and terrible two
got a chip on my shoulder
the size of a boulder
and i'm gonna roll over you
make you flat like a pancake
ain't no booty shaking earthquake
you shake and shimmy in your shoes
when i munch and crunch my cheerios
i'm like a thousand stereos
i thump and bump the roof from da room
give me milk i mellow
take it and i yell though
wah wah wah wah waaaah
so come on up to my crib
i ain't tell you know fibs
but don't you touch my paci
or i gonna get real nasty
yeah come on up to my crib
i ain't tell you no fib
bu don't you touch my diapy
unless you gonna wipy
eww, little skittle
what you do?
dat won't me
dat m&m
his shit the stinky sticky skunk
what?
JAITO
Magic poemz
8
Joined 24th Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 171
Magic poemz
Fire of Insight


Forum Posts: 171
Everyone hated your guts when you spit on the mike
Lost your first underground battle,maybe because it was your first time
No one in the world believed that the best rapper could be white
Shady you never cared your skin,you never backed down from a fight
Vicious lyrics,fueled with skill,dark emotion that finally brought light
I love,cleanin my closet,stan,25 to life,Berzek is weird but I too like
I adore all your songs man but THE MARSHAL MATHERS LP 2 is the greatest
Damn you are a Rap god,stronger than I was,love game and more
I listen them all over again and again,my neighbors think im wearied
You don’t even know it but your content is like a sermon a preacher posts
Bruce you finally did Hip hop proud,may you face your worst fears.
im a black guy and trust me you are the voice of the Hood
many rappers love their chains,bitches and cars but you deal with problems and blues
i cant listen to someone calling me a hater with no bitches,that's not trues
whats true is that im in love with the monster,our bond is tight like glue
that's you shady and like Stan,i may spit a verse or two
Hoping one day to be like you or rather get an autograph from you
i got issues with my girl,like you got issues with Kim
you feel she is a bitch but her fucking pussy is sweet
i got a dad but he is a total stranger to me than a freak
i love my mum and i hope you reconcile,because she deserves love from you,her love is real.
Finally EM,Machine gun Kelly,Mac Miller,Action Bronson follow your steps
You laid the foundation now Mac and M.G.K for me you are the best
Rap is not black music,Rap is a planet and a culture
Which you Eminem proved that and made it Nurture...
Lost your first underground battle,maybe because it was your first time
No one in the world believed that the best rapper could be white
Shady you never cared your skin,you never backed down from a fight
Vicious lyrics,fueled with skill,dark emotion that finally brought light
I love,cleanin my closet,stan,25 to life,Berzek is weird but I too like
I adore all your songs man but THE MARSHAL MATHERS LP 2 is the greatest
Damn you are a Rap god,stronger than I was,love game and more
I listen them all over again and again,my neighbors think im wearied
You don’t even know it but your content is like a sermon a preacher posts
Bruce you finally did Hip hop proud,may you face your worst fears.
im a black guy and trust me you are the voice of the Hood
many rappers love their chains,bitches and cars but you deal with problems and blues
i cant listen to someone calling me a hater with no bitches,that's not trues
whats true is that im in love with the monster,our bond is tight like glue
that's you shady and like Stan,i may spit a verse or two
Hoping one day to be like you or rather get an autograph from you
i got issues with my girl,like you got issues with Kim
you feel she is a bitch but her fucking pussy is sweet
i got a dad but he is a total stranger to me than a freak
i love my mum and i hope you reconcile,because she deserves love from you,her love is real.
Finally EM,Machine gun Kelly,Mac Miller,Action Bronson follow your steps
You laid the foundation now Mac and M.G.K for me you are the best
Rap is not black music,Rap is a planet and a culture
Which you Eminem proved that and made it Nurture...
lanooz
14
Joined 21st July 2012
Forum Posts: 240
Twisted Dreamer


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I know this doesn't meet criteria but I wrote it a while back for school, thought you Eminem fans would appreciate it.
infinite possibilities for the youth
of Detroit, sunlight dreams of a
boy on the haunt for shade,
pebbled path missing a mother's
heavenly touch, the poisons of
poverty and hate almost broke
him but instead he reached deep
inside the well and pulled out
magic in sway basements.
stained floors and mics, no sleep
so he dreamt of the days
nightmares and grief exited his
life forevermore, patiently waiting
to loose himself in the moment while
finally breathing and blinding
negativity till it quits and yells
"no more"
if only the world knew the score.
low self esteem cripples and blinds,
self destruction in the hands of mimes
life is a struggle that needs attention
praise the one who can reinvent pain
jewels found deep in the banks of sand
deception in life forms, deception galore.
It's beautiful the way I am
that's all she wrote but
you don't know my name is
Stan and like toy soldiers
Eminem dropped the world.
No love so we made you
go crazy and bezerk,
I need a doctor mockingbird
crack a bottle open and
dream forever just to loose
it . praise the real
Slim Shady's music.
infinite possibilities for the youth
of Detroit, sunlight dreams of a
boy on the haunt for shade,
pebbled path missing a mother's
heavenly touch, the poisons of
poverty and hate almost broke
him but instead he reached deep
inside the well and pulled out
magic in sway basements.
stained floors and mics, no sleep
so he dreamt of the days
nightmares and grief exited his
life forevermore, patiently waiting
to loose himself in the moment while
finally breathing and blinding
negativity till it quits and yells
"no more"
if only the world knew the score.
low self esteem cripples and blinds,
self destruction in the hands of mimes
life is a struggle that needs attention
praise the one who can reinvent pain
jewels found deep in the banks of sand
deception in life forms, deception galore.
It's beautiful the way I am
that's all she wrote but
you don't know my name is
Stan and like toy soldiers
Eminem dropped the world.
No love so we made you
go crazy and bezerk,
I need a doctor mockingbird
crack a bottle open and
dream forever just to loose
it . praise the real
Slim Shady's music.
JAITO
Magic poemz
8
Joined 24th Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 171
Magic poemz
Fire of Insight


Forum Posts: 171
i couldn't believe when i heard cleanin my closet
what a mastermind song that made mothers have problems
they hated your guts for telling the truth
that was Eminem Show,it was good for me part two
I mean Marshal Mathers Lp2 is my best album ever
Headlights finally did give back the mothers favor
it showed forgiveness from you and the song is just hot
its in my phone,ringtone and although all your songs are dope,like Rap god
Marshal Mathers Lp2 does for me the most.
for four years in rehab,the rap game felt hunger
they rapped about heavy chains and how to make bitches suffer
we thought you will never return because of Anger
Thanks for Relapse,you came back with power
and if i was to tittle that album,i will call it"SILENCE IM BACK"
i was being tired of whack rappers who really did suck.
Dear slim i wrote this letter from Kenya
i want to be like you,a lyrical poet with an agenda
But its hard that's why i post this poem on today's calendar
just hoping i would win this trophy,with your name on will be my pleasure.
Dear slim i hope you reply this words
i hope you tell my friend Rick 2015 drifter to give me this award
i just pray to get a reply,maybe an autograph,to me will be worth.
Fuck..will you reply my poem even with a comment
if you ignore this i think you just add my problems
Can i at least get a trophy just to remember your name
I love you slim,your posters in my room explain themselves.
Dear Jaito,Its Eminem writing back to you
i love how you and Drift 2015 are so cool
Honestly maybe you should be a team or work together
I don't know who Ricky would pick for a winner but if it was me it would be you
By the way im a fan of your poems jaito,boy you are good.
what a mastermind song that made mothers have problems
they hated your guts for telling the truth
that was Eminem Show,it was good for me part two
I mean Marshal Mathers Lp2 is my best album ever
Headlights finally did give back the mothers favor
it showed forgiveness from you and the song is just hot
its in my phone,ringtone and although all your songs are dope,like Rap god
Marshal Mathers Lp2 does for me the most.
for four years in rehab,the rap game felt hunger
they rapped about heavy chains and how to make bitches suffer
we thought you will never return because of Anger
Thanks for Relapse,you came back with power
and if i was to tittle that album,i will call it"SILENCE IM BACK"
i was being tired of whack rappers who really did suck.
Dear slim i wrote this letter from Kenya
i want to be like you,a lyrical poet with an agenda
But its hard that's why i post this poem on today's calendar
just hoping i would win this trophy,with your name on will be my pleasure.
Dear slim i hope you reply this words
i hope you tell my friend Rick 2015 drifter to give me this award
i just pray to get a reply,maybe an autograph,to me will be worth.
Fuck..will you reply my poem even with a comment
if you ignore this i think you just add my problems
Can i at least get a trophy just to remember your name
I love you slim,your posters in my room explain themselves.
Dear Jaito,Its Eminem writing back to you
i love how you and Drift 2015 are so cool
Honestly maybe you should be a team or work together
I don't know who Ricky would pick for a winner but if it was me it would be you
By the way im a fan of your poems jaito,boy you are good.
manisha
cyanide kid
7
Joined 29th Sep 2013
Forum Posts: 78
cyanide kid
Thought Provoker


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Give me something to rest on! (EXTREME CONTENT)
Dear slim,
I don't know how to start this shit but its been over ten years that I've decided to write to you
I guess I was a bit nervous after listening to 'the way I am '
just didn't wanted to invade ur personal life
but I feel like you need to know something now about my
fucked up life
you don't know how much I adore you
it all started when my uncle gave me your MMPL1 CD just like your uncle bought the beastie boys record for you
you don't have a clue how that record has changed me
may be not in the good ways , but it has evoked my slim shady out dwag
for example here is an incident from last year
I caught my girlfriend cheating on me
I was like oh jeez
she was kissing this dude
I'd have killed em both if my boy Tushar hadn't stopped me from my pistol
but guess what , the dude is alive but she ain't
I sniffed some Caine
and tied her legs and hung her upside down
and then I slit her throat
I watched her when she was being eaten by her deeds it was'nt easy though
my heart broke
when she screamed
I couldn't stop crying
when she was dying
it looked like my frustrations had a strap around my neck coz it made me walk back and forth like I was its pet
now whats left , its just you and me
probably my version of 99 bonnie and Clyde (laugh)
through out that week I felt like that character Stan from guilty conscience
I felt like dre and you were hitting my eye lids
as it flashed with every blink .
I realised
she has closed her eyes
now what am i supposed to do
I buried her with some strawberries
coz she loved em a lot...
please tell me slim did do wrong?
I was just overdosed you know
yes I'm weird and I act too foolish at times
but I'm not a dumb dude
its just drives me crazy when I wonder whether you even think about a fan who lives a 1000 miles away from you
I might be stupid as fuck but I love you
more than even Ricky and Stan
I even stole some money from my dads friend to catch you in Japan
you are in my closet
I live in your corpses
my cellphone us full of your shit
I got some shit too
I hope we can sit personally and talk about it someday
I hope you get my point, hit me back
please don't let me die like Stan....
Dear slim,
I don't know how to start this shit but its been over ten years that I've decided to write to you
I guess I was a bit nervous after listening to 'the way I am '
just didn't wanted to invade ur personal life
but I feel like you need to know something now about my
fucked up life
you don't know how much I adore you
it all started when my uncle gave me your MMPL1 CD just like your uncle bought the beastie boys record for you
you don't have a clue how that record has changed me
may be not in the good ways , but it has evoked my slim shady out dwag
for example here is an incident from last year
I caught my girlfriend cheating on me
I was like oh jeez
she was kissing this dude
I'd have killed em both if my boy Tushar hadn't stopped me from my pistol
but guess what , the dude is alive but she ain't
I sniffed some Caine
and tied her legs and hung her upside down
and then I slit her throat
I watched her when she was being eaten by her deeds it was'nt easy though
my heart broke
when she screamed
I couldn't stop crying
when she was dying
it looked like my frustrations had a strap around my neck coz it made me walk back and forth like I was its pet
now whats left , its just you and me
probably my version of 99 bonnie and Clyde (laugh)
through out that week I felt like that character Stan from guilty conscience
I felt like dre and you were hitting my eye lids
as it flashed with every blink .
I realised
she has closed her eyes
now what am i supposed to do
I buried her with some strawberries
coz she loved em a lot...
please tell me slim did do wrong?
I was just overdosed you know
yes I'm weird and I act too foolish at times
but I'm not a dumb dude
its just drives me crazy when I wonder whether you even think about a fan who lives a 1000 miles away from you
I might be stupid as fuck but I love you
more than even Ricky and Stan
I even stole some money from my dads friend to catch you in Japan
you are in my closet
I live in your corpses
my cellphone us full of your shit
I got some shit too
I hope we can sit personally and talk about it someday
I hope you get my point, hit me back
please don't let me die like Stan....