Face off...(Time for the real you)
niknshell
4
Joined 5th Nov 2012
Forum Posts: 67
Fire of Insight


Forum Posts: 67
Judgement Day--
The day of reckoning,
the day where all is laid bare,
the moment in which the review of past deeds
does no good.
The space in time when relationships are reflected
off the mirror image of you...
Judgement day...
another day...
look...
struggle...
and in this moments end...
It's my today
The day of reckoning,
the day where all is laid bare,
the moment in which the review of past deeds
does no good.
The space in time when relationships are reflected
off the mirror image of you...
Judgement day...
another day...
look...
struggle...
and in this moments end...
It's my today

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LobodeSanPedro
109
Joined 16th Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 3304
Tyrant of Words


Forum Posts: 3304
I don't play ball anymore
upon my brother's chest
fall the incongruent tears of
what was it the minister called it
oh yeah, that's right
a grateful nation.
I asked my brother once
what do those people look like over there.
they look like us
serenity is surrendered to squalor
respect is held in the curl of my forefinger
honeyed skin is baked ripe for adjudication
all walk a sand silted plank in the delta.
the minister says he died bringing justice to the world
yet his body is dressed and boxed
with the same ceremony as a baseball game
same damn song too
but somehow I've forgotten the words.
upon my brother's chest
fall the incongruent tears of
what was it the minister called it
oh yeah, that's right
a grateful nation.
I asked my brother once
what do those people look like over there.
they look like us
serenity is surrendered to squalor
respect is held in the curl of my forefinger
honeyed skin is baked ripe for adjudication
all walk a sand silted plank in the delta.
the minister says he died bringing justice to the world
yet his body is dressed and boxed
with the same ceremony as a baseball game
same damn song too
but somehow I've forgotten the words.
anna_grin
ANNAN
Forum Posts: 3367
ANNAN
Dangerous Mind
15
Joined 24th Mar 2013
Forum Posts: 3367
what is this a collab or what
KittyFromHell
14
Joined 31st May 2013
Forum Posts: 656
Dangerous Mind


Forum Posts: 656
congrats to cyanide kid for the win!! and thanks for runner up :)
LobodeSanPedro
109
Joined 16th Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 3304
Tyrant of Words


Forum Posts: 3304
Congratulations cyanide kid and kittyfromhell ... Many thanks to our host Dirt for providing this face-off.
LSP
LSP
manisha
cyanide kid
7
Joined 29th Sep 2013
Forum Posts: 78
cyanide kid
Thought Provoker


Forum Posts: 78
it didn't go that interestingly as I thought but a very tough comp indeed ..lots of beautiful entries there man .. thanks for the win my man dirt ... LSP n kfh congrats ... to the rest, y'all are winners too .. keep ur head up y'all

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