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Poetry competition CLOSED 28th February 2014 9:25am
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diddi (StephenPaul Summerscales)
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Ruler of darkness

JWAthepsycho
Thought Provoker
United States 1awards
Joined 17th Dec 2013
Forum Posts: 28

Poetry Contest

Dark poems
I want to see who can write the best dark poems
I want them to be as dark and sadistic a possible
Everyone may submit two poems but no more
No collabs
Here just some topics you can use(don't have to use them)
Cannablism
Homicide
Genocide
Suicide
Serial killer
Riping of limbs
toture
Burning the world
destruction of heaven
Killing of kings
Death to entire village
Etc(you get the general idea)
Make sure to be detailed and as gorey as possible

QueenOfNight
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 21st Dec 2013
Forum Posts: 5

Death To The Light

Leading them forward
Night consumes Light
Queen in the lead
Laughing at the dead
Sinking teeth deep
Clawed fingers shredding
Throats ripped out
The taste of blood tantalizing
More
More
I want more
Leading them forward
Into the night
Laughing at the dread
Spread over faces
Sucking the souls
Drinking their blood
Such refreshing love
To take a life
Laughing at their agony
As I rip out their eyes
Blood spewing all over
From ripped out throats
Blood dripping
From my sharp teethed mouth
Slicing and dicing
Through their hopeless bodies
Blood coating
My whole body
Bathed in everlasting life
Mouths opened
In silent screams
Kissing them deeply
Ripping out tongue with teeth
To my Lord Satan
I give myself
The blood of light
Coating my sword
Pulling me close
Kissing me deeply
Tasting the death
Of the light.

Pravus
Thought Provoker
United States 7awards
Joined 5th Oct 2011
Forum Posts: 206

-Needless Revenge-

I loved her
I really did,
But she betrayed me.
And because she betrayed me,
She has to pay!

I went to her house that dark, dark night
The one night that even the demons from the hell wouldn’t come to earth
It’s the one night that neither the almighty god
Nor the almighty devil can or will touch me
For my fury burns all around me

I went to her house while she was playing with her new boy toy
I slipped into the back yard
And in through the back window with ease
She nor her boy saw or heard me coming for them

Within seconds they are unconscious
I drag their limp bodies down the stairs
Thump, thump, thump
Their heads bounce off the stairs
I tie their hands to the poles in the ceiling
I tie them so that they face each other

I get my knife, set it on the table
I throw ice water onto their bodies
As soon as she sees me her face morphs into inhuman hatred
I look her in the eyes and tell her "watch"
"You should enjoy this"
I grab the knife and throw it at her boy

He screams a scream that the Banshee's would be scared of
I rip the knife down
Nearly ripping his arm off in the process
Blood gushes out and covers my hand and the floor
She looks disgusted, I’m happy, but still hungry for revenge
I cut his bonds
He is still screaming
He looks at me and freezes, and says "w-what are you?"
I say your worst nightmare
I jump on top of him and punch him 1, 2, 3, 10 times in rapid succession
I disembowel his other arm
Rip his legs free from his body
Then I rip out his heart and put it in Her mouth
I cut her down and push her to her knees
I cut off her head, and watch her dead body spasm
I lay down in the red pool of death that I created
I fall into endless dreams of sweet bloody bliss

I love Needless Revenge

blue_angel
Fire of Insight
United States 10awards
Joined 15th Oct 2013
Forum Posts: 173

Skinner by, blue angel

My man brings home dinner
and she's quite the dish
I'm skinner, his little niche

He's hard core
and she's a whore
they enter and I lock the door

I'm starving to start carving
She drips as he makes her strip
complete with sweet puffy lips

Now this is where it starts getting fun
he begins slapping her around some
I show my blade and she is sorely afraid

I smile at her fear and whisper in his ear
"Can I slit her from ear to ear. Can I, can I."
"Of course you can, dear."

"Her smile isn't wide enough, I say
suck my blade you filthy skank."
she opens wide and takes it inside

First slice looks  real nice
her scream is like a wet dream
it makes him bust a seam

It's now a bloody scene
the whore is no more
her guts are all over the floor

With a splatter I served her on a platter
"Dinner is good, Skinner
a breast for you and a breast for me."

Enough fresh meat
to last a week
Mmm, she's a tasty treat...

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diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 42awards
Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1704

The Hall Of The Damned        


The scream of sheer death
it deflates your lungs
and rips out your breath  
it tears apart
the ventricles of your heart
like the demonic sounds
of a fallen angels harp
the evil flame forming faces
howl and burn mental ash traces
that lick your brain with hot pain
which lights up the dark
to show the insane
in their stark underworld  
of plughole down drain .



A soul stealing trident
Satan spiked and hell sent
tri pronged and wrapped  
in a serpent
stands arrow capped  
in an evil dominant
inside are trapped spirits of unrepent
and infinite , expirement
they ache for your
desperate , detriment
and life retirement .



So how can you be here
if your not dead yet
a demon leans near and says
this is what you might get
only fear if you gamble
and lose the bet
your soul so dear
shall be speared in an eternal net .



The hall of the damned
full of gone murderers that hanged  
now they're hell framed
their pictured in pain
forever tortured  
dead and inane
they cry out contorted  
faintly my name
as I leave Satans
emporium of reign
I know after this
that I'll play the right game
and never shall I diss
the lords name ever again
nor dare never shall I speak it
in vain .
 

diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 42awards
Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1704

Cadaver  Re-animate    


Church bells
and pitched roof of slate
in silence after they rang
a train went through a burial gate
a bird broke forth and sang.
tombstones anticipate
the rising of dead man
a rumbling underground  
of shake
the drum begins to pound .



Remnant flesh
begins to stretch  
as ancient sinues
re-connect
repulsive tissue
of thread bare
stuck onto skulls
with wisps of hair  .



Cadaver  re-animate
with a snapping , gristle sound
empty socket skulls awake
boney hands claw the ground
they scratch and scrape
the damp streets late
with gutteral , corpse , throat sound
looking for a life to take
with dragging steps unbound .






PsychicApocalypse
Darker Half
Dangerous Mind
Belize 30awards
Joined 5th Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 1483

Picking The Loveliest Flowers

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Oh, her skin,
so soft,
so smooth,
Her lips,
so red,
so full of youth.

A nibble,
a bite,
just a taste.
No,
don't cry
little one.
I promise
I won't ruin
your
pretty
face.

Just a finger,
or two,
will suffice
my hunger.
I want to savor
your innocence,
Oh my angel,
my little,
flower.

Don't scream,
just whimper
into
your special
gag cloth.
I bought it
just for you,
separated it
from the other ones.

Your tears,
are like Diamonds,
spilling from
forest
green eyes.
The fear,
I saw
was almost,
as strong as mine.

Your eyes,
relate to me,
I dig them out.
I keep them
as souvenirs,
and hide them,
where only I,
know about,
safe and sound.

In a place,
where my other treasures
lie.
Petal-like lips,
to blue eyeballs.
Beautiful hands,
and feet,
that I've collected
from different
flowers.

They lay there,
different withered
flowers,
lifeless with decay.
A basement
under my basement,
I give my flowers,
time to rot away.
So I can plant,
their seeds in
my yard every other
day.

Flowers,
with naive smiles,
pigtails,
and dresses.
I lure them with
sweets,
that's what you're
guess is.

But no,
I'm not pedophile
I'm not a predator,
I'm just an individual,
who just seriously LOVES,
picking the loveliest
flowers.

poet Anonymous

Kid, I hope your mama knows you're asking for violence and gore suitable only for mature audiences.


http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/143482-hammer/


JWAthepsycho
Thought Provoker
United States 1awards
Joined 17th Dec 2013
Forum Posts: 28

I am not a kid, I am 17, In my culture I am man. I killed a bear and took its claw as a symbol of my man hood, my family follows old traditions. Also she already knows I have a fixation on dark things. Btw what lovely entries so far, I love all these dark poems so beautiful I love the way you guys describe them. Keep up the good work guys.

PassionOfVengeance
Jacqueline R
Twisted Dreamer
United States 1awards
Joined 23rd July 2012
Forum Posts: 41

SANE TO BE INSANE

Evoke the power of Satan
Have him use thy body to help succeed in what I want, desperate, need the power
He took their lives, and I shall take his
Slit his throat, cut his heart, show him what has taken thy mind

I am not mad
But to question thy sanity
It is a possibility

He hunts me
But once he finds what he is searching for
The surprise of thy mind shall over power him
Death shall rise, take him over, by my hand

I know I am not mad
But to question thy sanity
I do to much

But the anger over whelms, revenge seeks thy mind
The blood he made fall
Will be replaced by thy hand
His heart beating, pumps blood to the floor
From the wound I made

Knife strikes his throat, blood spurring all over
Still not satisfied
Take the knife
Dismember his arms
His arms that lead to his hands, his hands that murdered
Cuts of hatred to his legs
His legs that lead him to that house, house full of innocent people
Stab his eyes
His eyes that saw, saw them die, yet he feels no sympathy, for let him see, with no pity
Sew his mouth
His mouth that said words, words that lie, to the ones who believed, the ones who trusted
Cut off his ears
His ears that did not listen, that shut out what was right, that never heard anyone but himself
Cut open his brain and mind
His mind that let him, let him do this, that held every detail, ever last thing needed to be done
His mind that showed him, and told him, what it thought was great
His mind that took him, took him there, for his mind is what lead to this

I still know I am not mad
But to question my sanity
You will be next
Hahahahahahaha

flowergirl
Tyrant of Words
44awards
Joined 14th Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 231

OUR WEDDING DAY

all though it's cold outside
I am burning hot inside out
thinking of your sexiness

I lay upon my bed
with you heating up my mind
close my eyes to feel us alive

what the darkness brings
it's our wedding day
smiles adorn our faces

I'm dressed in purple garnished with
skeletons printed on black sheer lace
shinning red rubies as their eyes

you dressed so hauntingly
whisking black cape with a bat bow tie
glowing black eyes and polished fangs

as I walk the graveyard to your waiting arms
my heart races and blood boils
the dead are humming our song

you greet me with a bite on my neck
ceremony to join us begins
king of vampires reads our vows of torment

I purple ghost promise my king to always haunt you
to surrender my neck veins whenever you desire
bleed for you eternally in darkness

I your king promise you my ghost to taunt you
scare you at a moments notice with goriness
drip my blood over you in the coffin

then we were joined together with rings of bones
king and ghost as one soul now haunting
we fly around the graveyard as chanting begins

ghosts are spooking all the dead causing them to rise
bimbos are dying again and crying blood tears
skeletons are rattling music for us to dance

black moon has now summoned midnight hour
we fly in each other's arms to our open coffin
fangs locked and eyes glowing we lay

your claws sinking deep in my skin
fangs ripping flesh off my neck
oh yes rip me apart my luv

sink my fangs into your chest
your heart now in between my lips
tongue flickering wildly lapping up your blood

hotness of you dripping down my throat
burning inside of me like boiling blood
claws now roaming your blood stained skin

I straddle you and sit on your torn face
put my skinless lips on your half eatin shaft
piece by piece I eat your balls off

your fangs biting my clit now so raw
claws digging inside my pussy finding that spot
razor tongue tearing my flesh off my ass

slowly I reverse my position
my throbbing aching pussy a top your bleeding dick
bouncing with all my force to fuck you hard

juices flowing and squirting thru holes in our flesh
we've eatin each other down to nothing but bones
oh my sexy ass king what a night we have shared


flowergirl
Tyrant of Words
44awards
Joined 14th Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 231

HAUNT ME

my midnight sexy luver
how I wait in darkness for you
naked just how you luv me

black moon is shinning
bats are hanging in trees
erie mist covering the graveyard

dead are rising to haunt souls
ghost are spooking the living
scaring them to death

ladies of the night are hungry
looking for fresh flesh to devour
devil himself on prowl for a soul

am shivering from a chilly breeze
straddle you on the bench
you cuddle me in your cape

velvet rose petals floating thru the air
their fragrant scents the dead air
mixing with scent of your rotting flesh

glowing eyes in darkness await
our luv making they wish to survey
peeking with envious jealous dead hearts

devil and demons are evilly chanting
terrorizing all who dare to breathe
adding to sexual haunting between you and me

oh yes my dark luver sink into my skin
bite my flesh off to the bone
suck all the blood from my heart

fuck me so hard your dick snaps my ribs
release all your cum till it flows out my nose
oh yes make luv to me my dark luver

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