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Deathpuppy
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One wish

poet Anonymous

Poetry Contest

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One week
One new entry each

Start with the line

My one wish is------

Then add EXACTLY 25 words to it
So you will have a total of 29 words plus whatever title you choose

Give a title to your piece - title is worth 25 percent of your score!

This one will be judged by mysef and carpe-noctem

One week- no extensions

Inbox me any questions

KEEP LOOKING at m comps, We will oon announce another critiqued comp wherein the entries are read at a spoken word event during break and critique is provided with points to determine the winner (anonymously)
The last one went well

The rest is up to you, have fun

night-star
Rhiannon
Thought Provoker
United States
Joined 11th Oct 2013
Forum Posts: 154

My wish to be loved

My one wish is
To be his
I want him to love me
Like it was ment to be
I might have found my wish

UnknownEmo
Goes Without Saying
Twisted Dreamer
United States 3awards
Joined 10th Oct 2013
Forum Posts: 92

Wishfull Thinking.. but not Enough

My one wish
Is not to be like this
Christmas alone
Feeling cold
Just a sister
And our love grew old
I'm the Scrooge foretold

poet Anonymous

Left behind, comma

My one wish is
to have my fragmented heart
patched with his love
unpunctuated

mended
into orbiting
patchwork planet

with just a period
in the
end

of
never-ending
ends.

sweetdevil
CortneyB
Thought Provoker
United States 4awards
Joined 21st June 2013
Forum Posts: 533

Dearly Beloved

My one wish,
It is but a simple request.
I wish to wake up each day lying beside you,
Wrapped in your arms,
With your love surrounding me.

poet Anonymous

Great so far! Thank you all
I have had good responses to this type of comp in the past, so if anyone hjas the time please let me know your thoughts on doing a comp this way. I think it gives a more equal footing to entrants and I'd like to hear any thoughts on it keep 'em coming DUP

Smoogej1s
Taylor
Fire of Insight
United States 16awards
Joined 15th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 267

Stinging Reality

My one wish is
to be
different,
no more
pain
tears
fear
taking over
anxiety
depression
fake smiles
hidden tears
no grief
misery
free eternally
from a stinging reality

Awakenedsoul
Fire of Insight
United States 9awards
Joined 26th Nov 2013
Forum Posts: 41

Soul trapped in the smoke

My one wish is

off with my head
black smoke evil
suffocating my soul
its toxins are lethal

Black clouds lifted
soul finally living
absorbing life
that's worth breathing

gorryone810
Thought Provoker
Germany 4awards
Joined 27th Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 144

Wings of an angel

My one wish is
for you to see the light at the end of this dark night,
to love you, so that your soul can learn to fly again.

MadameLavender
Guardian of Shadows
United States 87awards
Joined 17th Feb 2013
Forum Posts: 5598

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Ghoulie
Just G
Fire of Insight
10awards
Joined 20th Oct 2012
Forum Posts: 920

Rootless

My one wish is
belonging to the soil
no longer
an orbiting nomad
tracing maps
leaving ghosts

i want to
impregnate the earth
with greedy tendrils
reap the harvest

kissofthedevil
Somebody Useless
Twisted Dreamer
United States 2awards
Joined 20th Nov 2012
Forum Posts: 33

Happiness...
My one wish is to calm the storm in everyone's life so we can truly be happy and free spirited. Free to do what we shall please with no worries

tommielynn
Tommie Lynn
Tyrant of Words
United States 14awards
Joined 27th Mar 2013
Forum Posts: 61

A wish too big


My one wish is too big
it's puffed out before
it's lit, or is it,to be on the
same side of the world
as my one true love

PsychicApocalypse
Darker Half
Dangerous Mind
Belize 30awards
Joined 5th Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 1483

Mortal Wishes

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My one wish
is to be
loved,
cared for,
free
from
society's
pressure.
How about
finding
peace,
within
this mortal
realm.
A place to
belong,
whether living,
or dead.

Arcane_Scribe
Thought Provoker
United Kingdom 1awards
Joined 1st Mar 2013
Forum Posts: 205

My children first

My one wish is..
For my children to be happy
and healthy
For them to find lasting love
and keep it
for them to never end up like me.

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