Poetry competition CLOSED 8th October 2013 8:49pm
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malin69 (malin)
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Erotic Collaboration challenge!

poet Anonymous

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BlackVelvetRose
Ragdoll Raven
Thought Provoker
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Joined 26th Apr 2012
Forum Posts: 86

Rich Women, cheap sex




[b](written by Black Velvet Rose & JohnFeddeler)


seedy hotels.
I'll never understand why rich dames like to screw
in dumps like this.
so I spotted her in Joe's Bar. her ass, planted gently on that deliriously happy stool,
looked very inviting. in that mink jacket, she was as out of place as rhododendron in a
weed garden, & probably just as deadly.

as I was finishing my last smoke, I saw her pull up in her Jaguar. now we'll see what this
dragon lady's got in mind.


dirty whore
i was thinking as i put my Convertible in park
a devilish smile crossing my lips
seeing my wanton treasure leaning against the wall
with one glance at the bar I knew I had to have him
for my one night of wild sexual abandonment
uninhibited erotic fantasies fueling my lustful fire

seeing the glint in his eyes i get out making sure he sees
the hidden mantrap underneath my skirt


as she undressed, it occurred to me that there were a million beautiful things out there
that could break a man's heart & leave him drowning in his own dreams. in this room,
there was only one...


unbuttoned, my shirt feathers from my shoulders, bra unhooked sliding down revealing
firm round breasts, pink kissed nipples seemingly floating on alabaster skin
fingers finding and working my skirt zipper down until it flows like liquid silver to the
floor


when she spread her legs, my tongue suddenly had a mind of its own. most jokers like
me die without ever tasting the juices of a pampered honey-pot like hers. I muff-dived
like I was drilling for oil, & her thighs banging against my ears indicated her fascination.
after a century or two, the buzzing in my head & other throbbing areas told me that
there were other expeditions to be 'mounted', so to speak.


his rod suspended in mid-air above my lips, my tongue traces the tip feeling a slight
shudder, opening I close over the end like a lollipop. licking tasting, milking the
sweetness from the core. hearing him moan I open slightly as he lowers himself, my
tongue moves over liquid gold licking and stroking, sending surges of electricity to every
nerve, quicksilver striking with his every thrust.


while I'm power-rodding her, the sun kinda dive-bombs into the room, bounces off the
walls, burns us to just the right shade of cherry blush, then kisses us goodbye & creams
the juniper sky...

before she swayed elegantly back to her Jag, she put a stack of ben franklins on the
table high enough to kiss the sky, & said, 'my husband can afford it. keep that
jackhammer primed for me, baby.'




JAZZMANOR
Tyrant of Words
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ATTENTION PLEASE PEOPLE!!!!! I just got conformation from Taylor. It is one entry per collaborative authors not one per writer. As long as you write with someone DIFFERENT each time, you can have as entries as you like. Sheesh this thread is starting to read like a soap opera or prom dates! Good night now!

Smoogej1s
Taylor
Fire of Insight
United States 16awards
Joined 15th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 267

Black Velvet Rose & JohnFeddele thanks so much for your submission! :)

Smoogej1s
Taylor
Fire of Insight
United States 16awards
Joined 15th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 267

JAZZMANOR said:ATTENTION PLEASE PEOPLE!!!!! I just got conformation from Taylor. It is one entry per collaborative authors not one per writer. As long as you write with someone DIFFERENT each time, you can have as entries as you like. Sheesh this thread is starting to read like a soap opera or prom dates! Good night now!


thanks for the post JAZZ .. I have updated the rules now .. so for any confusion! write on .. and good luck everyone!

Intricate_B
Fire of Insight
United States 3awards
Joined 7th Mar 2013
Forum Posts: 823

Given the change in the rules, I am willing to take on one more partner!! FYI, IM PRETTY GOOD AT THIS STYLE!!

poet Anonymous

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AlwaysCaliban
Caliban
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 3rd June 2012
Forum Posts: 2408

Anyone want to take a stab at it with me? PM me if so. Females welcome.

I found some takers.

poet Anonymous

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HadesRising
Tyrant of Words
United States 34awards
Joined 8th June 2013
Forum Posts: 1613

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SHE SAID YES [/quote]

Theo, you crack me up!

poet Anonymous

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MadameLavender
Guardian of Shadows
United States 86awards
Joined 17th Feb 2013
Forum Posts: 5594

Still looking for a date--PM me if interested!

HadesRising
Tyrant of Words
United States 34awards
Joined 8th June 2013
Forum Posts: 1613

not sure if this one is for me. never really been good at writing this type of thing.

poet Anonymous

On a side note, where the fuck is Devilish these days? This comp is MADE for her

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