Poetry competition CLOSED 12th January 2013 10:54pm
WINNER
Caged_Raven
Caged_Raven
Suicide Note
I will start us off
Forever Alone
It's cold
I can't see right
I can barley hear
But I know someone is screaming
It sounds like my mother
She must have found me
Laying unconscious in the bathroom
Empty pill bottle in hand
But why?
Why cry for someone like me
I'm unwanted
That's why I did this
I thought no one would care
Maybe I was wrong
But it's to late now
I'm already gone
Lost in the darkness
All alone
Forever
Just how I like it
Forever alone
Forever Alone
It's cold
I can't see right
I can barley hear
But I know someone is screaming
It sounds like my mother
She must have found me
Laying unconscious in the bathroom
Empty pill bottle in hand
But why?
Why cry for someone like me
I'm unwanted
That's why I did this
I thought no one would care
Maybe I was wrong
But it's to late now
I'm already gone
Lost in the darkness
All alone
Forever
Just how I like it
Forever alone
Sweet Dreams To My Dark Angel
I'm sorry to say this but I've taken my own life.
Here are some suggestions on why;
.Did you ever care for me
.Did you notice my pain
.Was I really that stupid
.Now my heart has been broken
.Did I have a purpose anyway
.What was your point in giving me life
.Did you stop an see the darkness consume me
Well these are my final words to the world
I love all those I've dated and I'm sorry but
Goodbye an Sweet Dreams to my only friend
The Dark Angel inside me
I'm sorry to say this but I've taken my own life.
Here are some suggestions on why;
.Did you ever care for me
.Did you notice my pain
.Was I really that stupid
.Now my heart has been broken
.Did I have a purpose anyway
.What was your point in giving me life
.Did you stop an see the darkness consume me
Well these are my final words to the world
I love all those I've dated and I'm sorry but
Goodbye an Sweet Dreams to my only friend
The Dark Angel inside me
Here I lay Me Down To Sleep~
Now that all reasons found are gone,
I cant turn back, I cant go on.
I seek a place where all this wrong
Will fade into a place where I belong.
The Time goes by and all I see
Are painted faces smiling.
We’re full of thoughts that we are free
To be, but we are dreaming hopelessly.
So here I lay me down to sleep,
I beg this ink my soul to keep.
I no longer feel the need
To flee, so don’t you waste your tears on me.
There’s so much Pain and Hate today,
I need to find my hideaway.
I’m tired of this fucking place,
Retracing all these tracks to disarray.
Cant be clean and I cant stay numb,
Afraid to see what I’ll become.
I hope you see where I’m coming from,
My Friends, I’m sorry for the damage done.
Now here I lay me down to sleep,
I beg your Hearts my soul to keep.
Maybe there I’ll find my peace,
So please, don’t you go wasting tears on me.
If I should leave a void behind,
Fill it with Happiness and Time.
Let all the Love we came to find
Unwind, and provide comfort to your mind.
Let memories give joy to cries,
Let Love that’s lost revitalize.
And let my Love for you remind
You that, although I’m gone, I’m by your side,
And everything will be alright.
Now that all reasons found are gone,
I cant turn back, I cant go on.
I seek a place where all this wrong
Will fade into a place where I belong.
The Time goes by and all I see
Are painted faces smiling.
We’re full of thoughts that we are free
To be, but we are dreaming hopelessly.
So here I lay me down to sleep,
I beg this ink my soul to keep.
I no longer feel the need
To flee, so don’t you waste your tears on me.
There’s so much Pain and Hate today,
I need to find my hideaway.
I’m tired of this fucking place,
Retracing all these tracks to disarray.
Cant be clean and I cant stay numb,
Afraid to see what I’ll become.
I hope you see where I’m coming from,
My Friends, I’m sorry for the damage done.
Now here I lay me down to sleep,
I beg your Hearts my soul to keep.
Maybe there I’ll find my peace,
So please, don’t you go wasting tears on me.
If I should leave a void behind,
Fill it with Happiness and Time.
Let all the Love we came to find
Unwind, and provide comfort to your mind.
Let memories give joy to cries,
Let Love that’s lost revitalize.
And let my Love for you remind
You that, although I’m gone, I’m by your side,
And everything will be alright.
Anonymous
LAST LINES
As soon the ground beneath will unfold
Those I loved shall look upon
This body, now free of spirit
As I whisper softly
Remember it, remember it
Remember the ripples in the tide
The woman I was and the child
Ive become in the womb
Of the warm earth
Here I shall await
My rebirth
As soon the ground beneath will unfold
Those I loved shall look upon
This body, now free of spirit
As I whisper softly
Remember it, remember it
Remember the ripples in the tide
The woman I was and the child
Ive become in the womb
Of the warm earth
Here I shall await
My rebirth
Yeah I'd appreciate if you could hide both posts. 
Appreciate that.
For a while there I thought I was getting the silent treatment from everyone for some unknown reason.
W.t.h?? This was suppose to be in response to Opheliac's response and it showed up here? I see that I'm out of practice of posting things here nowadays, or else way to do things on D.U. has changed a lot. Can't recall having this much trouble posting and deleting things before? :/
Appreciate that. For a while there I thought I was getting the silent treatment from everyone for some unknown reason.
W.t.h?? This was suppose to be in response to Opheliac's response and it showed up here? I see that I'm out of practice of posting things here nowadays, or else way to do things on D.U. has changed a lot. Can't recall having this much trouble posting and deleting things before? :/
I say goodbye
My time is up and i am glad
Throughout my life my life has been sad
My pain at night shows i was alive
through cuts and scrapes i know its time
to end it all and take my sleep
as the time goes on i feel it creep
i ask for it soon to be at peace
the death i seek puts me at ease
i want it to end with me in sleep
to be in a dream and be at ease
all i ask before i go
is to say goodbye
and be no more.
My time is up and i am glad
Throughout my life my life has been sad
My pain at night shows i was alive
through cuts and scrapes i know its time
to end it all and take my sleep
as the time goes on i feel it creep
i ask for it soon to be at peace
the death i seek puts me at ease
i want it to end with me in sleep
to be in a dream and be at ease
all i ask before i go
is to say goodbye
and be no more.
Anonymous
There's nothing left to smile at,
So I won't give you the satisfaction of my grin,
You tell me to stop and smell the roses,
But when I do all they smell like is blood,
Satin petals can decorate my long dark hair,
Silk dresses could lay upon my skin,
But false beauty can do nothing to me,
To hide these deadly sins,
And so I bid to thee goodbye,
I hope you decide to smile,
For soon you will never have to worry,
About what I've done when I'm here,
Because I'll already be gone.
So I won't give you the satisfaction of my grin,
You tell me to stop and smell the roses,
But when I do all they smell like is blood,
Satin petals can decorate my long dark hair,
Silk dresses could lay upon my skin,
But false beauty can do nothing to me,
To hide these deadly sins,
And so I bid to thee goodbye,
I hope you decide to smile,
For soon you will never have to worry,
About what I've done when I'm here,
Because I'll already be gone.
From my head to toes, it won’t stop hurting
My mind is racing with ghosts and demons of the past
My eyes are sore from all the sobbing at night
My arms laid out blood running down from a razor’s edge
My heart is broken from the lies and promises
My stomach in knots from the bottle I’ve been hitting
My legs from the constant running from the taunting
If the world would have just let me be myself
If those kids would have stop bullying and kicking my ass
If I had something to come home to other than a fight
If you were there for me you could’ve saved me
But here I am alone again tonight
With only a razor and a bottle of jack
and I know when all is said and done
I will be free and there will be
NO MORE PAIN
My mind is racing with ghosts and demons of the past
My eyes are sore from all the sobbing at night
My arms laid out blood running down from a razor’s edge
My heart is broken from the lies and promises
My stomach in knots from the bottle I’ve been hitting
My legs from the constant running from the taunting
If the world would have just let me be myself
If those kids would have stop bullying and kicking my ass
If I had something to come home to other than a fight
If you were there for me you could’ve saved me
But here I am alone again tonight
With only a razor and a bottle of jack
and I know when all is said and done
I will be free and there will be
NO MORE PAIN
