DARK CORNERS IN THE MODERN WORLD
harlequin
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Poetry Contest Description
DARK CORNERS IN THE MODERN WORLD Last night my daughter and a friend were mugged, assaulted and robbed outside a night club.
DARK CORNERS IN THE MODERN WORLD ..........
Men pretending to be ~ Security ~ asked to search their bags. Once the bags were offered up and opened these (men?) ripped the bags from their arms and after an unpleasant altercation ran away.
If you would like to recount any experiences you know of that would help paint a picture of these dark corners that lurk in our modern world then your entries are most welcome
paolajane16
PKR.virus
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PKR.virus
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Devils from within...
They were stuck in a frightening situation,
Feared by their thoughts and shadows of themselves...
Stirred mind walking in great passion...
Demons of hell, shouting thy name,
"Hail the master of evil!"
They scream until they get insane...
They were like vampires, craving for the blood of the master evil...
They suck, they crave and they sip for they thirst...
They tried to unleash their burdens...
They tried to unshackle themselves but they failed to conquer the thoughts of hell...
As they wipe the pain of hatred and deceive the people of the master were killed
by the devils from within....
this is my old poem way back 2009, it doesn't have any connection with the title of your competition but the meaning conveys something; somehow related to it. We (HUMANS) are in a world full of evil. We crave for material things and we ended up doing evil things.. But in the end; after we realize everything, it's too late, there's no turning back.. we've been killed by our own demons... :(
They were stuck in a frightening situation,
Feared by their thoughts and shadows of themselves...
Stirred mind walking in great passion...
Demons of hell, shouting thy name,
"Hail the master of evil!"
They scream until they get insane...
They were like vampires, craving for the blood of the master evil...
They suck, they crave and they sip for they thirst...
They tried to unleash their burdens...
They tried to unshackle themselves but they failed to conquer the thoughts of hell...
As they wipe the pain of hatred and deceive the people of the master were killed
by the devils from within....
this is my old poem way back 2009, it doesn't have any connection with the title of your competition but the meaning conveys something; somehow related to it. We (HUMANS) are in a world full of evil. We crave for material things and we ended up doing evil things.. But in the end; after we realize everything, it's too late, there's no turning back.. we've been killed by our own demons... :(
harlequin
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Forbidden ~ Thank you, this comp title may be interpreted in any way a writer wishes. Thank you for giving this comp a life. well done
diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
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StephenPaul Summerscales
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Epitaph For The World
Avalanches of time rocks gather
in ancient lime state flocks
as the violin sky unlocks
releasing its corrosive weather .
The spinning , burning
flaming , war fire ring
how long
before its man kinds last rite song
how long
before the final analogue dong
the sound of the eastern gong .
Oil, ticking
the toil
starts slicking
mad Colonels are sickening
upon this rock
we just wait for the wave of shock .
Separatists
terrorists
hostage holding
rebel fists
religious
unindigenous
fundamentalists
sunburst colours crash through the mist
desert soldiers lie dead in the dust .
Broken bricks
burnt out wicks
a child stands crying in the eclipse
a world sits sighing
at TV's of blitz .
Vacant baby eyes
of sufferage
no yule tide surprise
at the orphanage .
An abandoned teddy bear
against a blood smeared kerb
a distant unclear
perturbed, smouldering Serb .
Artillery fire balls burning the air
in a glare
to sadden
Armistice or Armageddon
could it end or will it happen .
Freedom fighters
IRA bombers
semtex lighters
standing outside Harrods .
No more seas
and weathered rocks
ageing trees or building blocks
theres just the stagnant shattered faces
of a world and its dead clocks .
Avalanches of time rocks gather
in ancient lime state flocks
as the violin sky unlocks
releasing its corrosive weather .
The spinning , burning
flaming , war fire ring
how long
before its man kinds last rite song
how long
before the final analogue dong
the sound of the eastern gong .
Oil, ticking
the toil
starts slicking
mad Colonels are sickening
upon this rock
we just wait for the wave of shock .
Separatists
terrorists
hostage holding
rebel fists
religious
unindigenous
fundamentalists
sunburst colours crash through the mist
desert soldiers lie dead in the dust .
Broken bricks
burnt out wicks
a child stands crying in the eclipse
a world sits sighing
at TV's of blitz .
Vacant baby eyes
of sufferage
no yule tide surprise
at the orphanage .
An abandoned teddy bear
against a blood smeared kerb
a distant unclear
perturbed, smouldering Serb .
Artillery fire balls burning the air
in a glare
to sadden
Armistice or Armageddon
could it end or will it happen .
Freedom fighters
IRA bombers
semtex lighters
standing outside Harrods .
No more seas
and weathered rocks
ageing trees or building blocks
theres just the stagnant shattered faces
of a world and its dead clocks .
harlequin
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Diddi, I’m honoured, thank you for your entry.
diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
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StephenPaul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
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You're welcome
lepperochan
CraicDealer
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CraicDealer
Guardian of Shadows
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April
what kind of eyes
can look at a child at play
and see anything but a small child playing.
that's the thing about eyes like that
wicked warped eyes
be aware they come in many a slick guise
with equally slick mouths
to do their bidding.
http://www.independent.co.uk/news/uk/crime/police-lose-hope-of-finding-missing-april-jones-alive-as-mark-bridger-is-arrested-on-suspicion-of-murder-81
what kind of eyes
can look at a child at play
and see anything but a small child playing.
that's the thing about eyes like that
wicked warped eyes
be aware they come in many a slick guise
with equally slick mouths
to do their bidding.
http://www.independent.co.uk/news/uk/crime/police-lose-hope-of-finding-missing-april-jones-alive-as-mark-bridger-is-arrested-on-suspicion-of-murder-81
harlequin
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Lepperochan, many thanks for your entry
LeColonel
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Fire of Insight
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Crimson Balkan Snow
As I lie on my back, glancing up, I see the flakes
Falling like downy feathers, blanketing everything
Feeling the warmth of my friends beside me, I smile
Remembering winter playgrounds of our youth, till ...
Looking down I see the flow, warm and scarlet pooling everywhere
Melting the snow all around me, all around us school girls
Suddenly I am back here, to this moment, to this hate
The smell of cigarettes and gunpowder burns my nose, sulphur
Silently I lament my crushed innocence, plundered womanhood, torn and trampled, why me, why this ethnic cleansing
My life the last thing to be taken away from me, drip by drip
Fleeting thoughts, sensations, where is my little sister
To never know love's sweeping passion, marriage, a daughter of my own
Drinking, shouting, laughter from my violators, formerly friends and neighbors
Reveling in my defilement, our desecration, dirty Muslim whores
Closing my eyes, I keep very still, hold my breath
Finally, I am overlooked, dare to inhale, though I know it is too late, total numbness
Rolling over on my side, I start to cry, then I notice my pretty shoes
All covered with mud, I curl up, frantically wipe them clean
Graveling sound, the shovels fill, tossed one by one
Over me, over everything that I am, an earthen blanket, peaceful slumber
(Inspired by my discovering a mass grave in Kosovo back in November 2000)
As I lie on my back, glancing up, I see the flakes
Falling like downy feathers, blanketing everything
Feeling the warmth of my friends beside me, I smile
Remembering winter playgrounds of our youth, till ...
Looking down I see the flow, warm and scarlet pooling everywhere
Melting the snow all around me, all around us school girls
Suddenly I am back here, to this moment, to this hate
The smell of cigarettes and gunpowder burns my nose, sulphur
Silently I lament my crushed innocence, plundered womanhood, torn and trampled, why me, why this ethnic cleansing
My life the last thing to be taken away from me, drip by drip
Fleeting thoughts, sensations, where is my little sister
To never know love's sweeping passion, marriage, a daughter of my own
Drinking, shouting, laughter from my violators, formerly friends and neighbors
Reveling in my defilement, our desecration, dirty Muslim whores
Closing my eyes, I keep very still, hold my breath
Finally, I am overlooked, dare to inhale, though I know it is too late, total numbness
Rolling over on my side, I start to cry, then I notice my pretty shoes
All covered with mud, I curl up, frantically wipe them clean
Graveling sound, the shovels fill, tossed one by one
Over me, over everything that I am, an earthen blanket, peaceful slumber
(Inspired by my discovering a mass grave in Kosovo back in November 2000)
harlequin
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Colonel ~ Thank you for supporting this comp
Anonymous
...
Smoke lingers...
Fire dancing...
Dorment cinders...
Souls crying...
The roost of the infernal
cemetary to every lost mind
a dark doom eternal
the laugh of the fiend
hell...
Smoke lingers...
Fire dancing...
Dorment cinders...
Souls crying...
The roost of the infernal
cemetary to every lost mind
a dark doom eternal
the laugh of the fiend
hell...
harlequin
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Victor ~ Thank you for your entry
CruelHandedWriter
Jamie Rhodes
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I was thinking about this today.
Mainly how I was meant to jot something down
about the woman who had made my baguette.
Nothing exciting, just tuna mayonnaise with
sweetcorn, lettuce and cucumber
on brown... please darling.
She was blonde had the makings
of an attractive woman in her fourties.
Sadly both her eyes were heavily bruised
and her lips torn ragged.
Stress had aged her badly.
The sandwich was okay,
but it tasted different from the one the other day.
Just tonight, walking home with a colleague,
I had to explain to her why, even I,
wouldn't walk home with my headphones in.
She told me the music was never too loud,
so I asked her to stop talking.
She couldn't hear my footsteps.
I showed her the place where a girl was dragged
from a busy night on the town
and raped no more than 50 yards from the high street.
I'd keep all my senses open, is what I said.
I hate to end the evening on a dark note,
but everything from the bicycle gangs
and the lack of real love
is starting to kill me a little.
Protect yourselves... And the best way to do that
is reduce how easy you look.
Don't wilt to these fuckers.
Keep your face
in these dark times
as influence doesn't offer alternatives
to break the flow,
but instead panders to the greater numbers.
The greater numbers of cunts.
Mainly how I was meant to jot something down
about the woman who had made my baguette.
Nothing exciting, just tuna mayonnaise with
sweetcorn, lettuce and cucumber
on brown... please darling.
She was blonde had the makings
of an attractive woman in her fourties.
Sadly both her eyes were heavily bruised
and her lips torn ragged.
Stress had aged her badly.
The sandwich was okay,
but it tasted different from the one the other day.
Just tonight, walking home with a colleague,
I had to explain to her why, even I,
wouldn't walk home with my headphones in.
She told me the music was never too loud,
so I asked her to stop talking.
She couldn't hear my footsteps.
I showed her the place where a girl was dragged
from a busy night on the town
and raped no more than 50 yards from the high street.
I'd keep all my senses open, is what I said.
I hate to end the evening on a dark note,
but everything from the bicycle gangs
and the lack of real love
is starting to kill me a little.
Protect yourselves... And the best way to do that
is reduce how easy you look.
Don't wilt to these fuckers.
Keep your face
in these dark times
as influence doesn't offer alternatives
to break the flow,
but instead panders to the greater numbers.
The greater numbers of cunts.
harlequin
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Thought Provoker
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Joined 4th Jan 2012Forum Posts: 149
Panama ~ My thanks to you for taking part in this comp
Anonymous
DARK CORNERS IN THE MODERN WORLD - WILL EDUCATION SAVE YOU?
Congratulations graduates
You finally made it
You got your degree
Even if you faked it
Now what do you do?
HP just announced so many jobs it will lose
Every week some company decides
People are too expensive to hire
The banks replaced their tellers in the 1980s
You get to talk to a stupid machine
Who cannot do power-of-attorney banking
When you phone any business
You get a choice of 1,2,3
Then a choice of A, B, C, D
Then a voice telling you
Please go to website www.confusion.com
What makes you think you are better than a computer?
They do not need insurance and other benefits
Computers never phone in sick
They have no sick children or sick old parents
As a human, hiring you – is a major inconvenience
So as you throw your cap in the air
Remember how few jobs there are out there
Where did the jobs go....overseas and Mexico
Where workers toil in filth and long hours
No unions, no rights, sleep in dormitories
Many just kill themselves, they cannot go on
There will be a few who get a job
The workplace has changed, NO SECURITY
A hundred people want YOUR job
Willing to do anything to you, steal it
Those TV shows about the cosy workplace
Have omitted the knives, the spies, the lies
So welcome to the world of work
You young and idealistic person
Come back and visit with me in ten years
If you still have YOUR job, if you still have A job
If you are temporarily unemployed
If you have been replaced
By a computer
Or someone, nasty, young and scheming
I will hold your hand and counsel you
Leave the land of NO OPPORTUNITY!