Poetry competition CLOSED 27th August 2012 11:12pm
WINNER
LeColonel
View Profile Poems by LeColonel
trophy

Go to page:

Fear of Sex

LeColonel
LeColonel
Fire of Insight
United States
14awards   profile   poems   message
Joined 5th July 2012
Forum Posts: 230

MarekMonster said:[quote-121804-LeColonel]What Strikes at My Heart with Fear

Do I dare share with you my love this secret    
The thing above all else that fills me with fear at this moment    
   
Leaves me feeling so petrified and frightened    
Like the little boy I once was so very long ago    
   
Would it make you lose respect, think me weak    
Cause me to fall from esteem in your eyes    
   
I'm sure you could try to guess, figure it out    
Maybe it was going to war, surrounded by danger    
   
Perhaps you would go with failure, being unmasked    
Revealing all of this self-doubt and uncertainty    
   
Wrestling with my own mortality, the stalking of death    
Wondering if my life had purpose or that God would approve    
   
Then again it could be losing a loved one    
Or falling out of love or being discarded for another    
   
While all good hunches, none are the truth    
You see it's something happening more often than you think    
   
It is the moment after bliss, while I am still coupled with you    
As I feel my strength, my manhood soften, la petite morte    
   
For then I am naked, vulnerable, and scared    
Lying helpless in your arms, overwhelmed    
   
Drowning in feelings and sensations that I normally tamp down    
Now a swim in a great ocean of emotionality, fighting heaving waves    
   
Thankfully you are always there with me, holding me tight    
Gently caressing my back and shoulders, soothing me    
   
It is only just now that it dawns on me, goosebump realization    
That you have known this all along and even love me deeply for it



Wow this is an amazing work ! [/quote]

Thanks. Glad you liked it!

Firebyrd
Firebyrd
Dangerous Mind
United States
18awards   profile   poems   message
Joined 29th Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 200

MarekMonster said:[quote-121804-LeColonel]What Strikes at My Heart with Fear

Do I dare share with you my love this secret    
The thing above all else that fills me with fear at this moment    
   
Leaves me feeling so petrified and frightened    
Like the little boy I once was so very long ago    
   
Would it make you lose respect, think me weak    
Cause me to fall from esteem in your eyes    
   
I'm sure you could try to guess, figure it out    
Maybe it was going to war, surrounded by danger    
   
Perhaps you would go with failure, being unmasked    
Revealing all of this self-doubt and uncertainty    
   
Wrestling with my own mortality, the stalking of death    
Wondering if my life had purpose or that God would approve    
   
Then again it could be losing a loved one    
Or falling out of love or being discarded for another    
   
While all good hunches, none are the truth    
You see it's something happening more often than you think    
   
It is the moment after bliss, while I am still coupled with you    
As I feel my strength, my manhood soften, la petite morte    
   
For then I am naked, vulnerable, and scared    
Lying helpless in your arms, overwhelmed    
   
Drowning in feelings and sensations that I normally tamp down    
Now a swim in a great ocean of emotionality, fighting heaving waves    
   
Thankfully you are always there with me, holding me tight    
Gently caressing my back and shoulders, soothing me    
   
It is only just now that it dawns on me, goosebump realization    
That you have known this all along and even love me deeply for it



Wow this is an amazing work ! [/quote]
I much agree this is Beautiful MAN!

LeColonel
LeColonel
Fire of Insight
United States
14awards   profile   poems   message
Joined 5th July 2012
Forum Posts: 230

Firebyrd said:[quote-121806-MarekMonster][quote-121804-LeColonel]What Strikes at My Heart with Fear

Do I dare share with you my love this secret    
The thing above all else that fills me with fear at this moment    
   
Leaves me feeling so petrified and frightened    
Like the little boy I once was so very long ago    
   
Would it make you lose respect, think me weak    
Cause me to fall from esteem in your eyes    
   
I'm sure you could try to guess, figure it out    
Maybe it was going to war, surrounded by danger    
   
Perhaps you would go with failure, being unmasked    
Revealing all of this self-doubt and uncertainty    
   
Wrestling with my own mortality, the stalking of death    
Wondering if my life had purpose or that God would approve    
   
Then again it could be losing a loved one    
Or falling out of love or being discarded for another    
   
While all good hunches, none are the truth    
You see it's something happening more often than you think    
   
It is the moment after bliss, while I am still coupled with you    
As I feel my strength, my manhood soften, la petite morte    
   
For then I am naked, vulnerable, and scared    
Lying helpless in your arms, overwhelmed    
   
Drowning in feelings and sensations that I normally tamp down    
Now a swim in a great ocean of emotionality, fighting heaving waves    
   
Thankfully you are always there with me, holding me tight    
Gently caressing my back and shoulders, soothing me    
   
It is only just now that it dawns on me, goosebump realization    
That you have known this all along and even love me deeply for it



Wow this is an amazing work ! [/quote]
I much agree this is Beautiful MAN![/quote]

Thanks so much! Glad you liked it too.

HannahRose
HannahRose
Lost Thinker
United States
5awards   profile   poems   message
Joined 8th Aug 2012
Forum Posts: 34

hate to fit a stereotype,
Yet I know, it's true but sad,
I've turned into one of those girls,
Who marries somebody just like their dad.

Just like him, I know where you stand,
And I want nothing but your attention.
Though I'll try to be brave, and do as you say,
There's one thing about me I should mention.

I hoard what I got, I have to!
There's so little that I can call mine.
Not your love, a few clothes,
Some memories, and lots&lots of time.

You're so like me that I bare to you,
My very pulsing heart,
Trustingly, all of my thoughts,
And dreams of a brand new start.

And you are my master,
A game out of control,
I started the game, yes,
But you never stopped playing your role.

Everything I have you indulge in,
And that's how it should be, of course.
What I get you are welcome to,
But I must remember what's yours is yours.

What do I have left, after you assault,
Only one thing, do you see?
The part of me that keeps you around,
What's mine is my own pussy.

Don't worry, I'm weak,
But you know this, your predators eyes are alight,
You'll make me yours, if it's all that you do,
You're prepared to put up with my fight.

And i know you'll just take me,
You do whenever you please,
But maybe be gentle, start slow?
Smile at me, as you part open my knees,
And where you're not welcome, go.

c-mo
c-mo
Lost Thinker
United States
  profile   poems   message
Joined 30th July 2012
Forum Posts: 1

Awesome

Go to page:
Go to: