Beautiful
HannahRose
5
Joined 8th Aug 2012
Forum Posts: 34
Lost Thinker


Forum Posts: 34
"Kevin"
Heroin is poison,
It would make me lose my teeth.
And meth would clog my pores right up,
I'd look disheveled, wouldn't eat.
Not sleeping gives my baggy eyes,
And crazy, frazzled hair.
You run the streets for nights on end,
Still gorgeous, it isn't fair!
So darling, know you're something else,
Think of the life you live.
Then look into a mirror, love,
And think what other men would give...
For your green eyes, shoot beams of sun,
When light's high in the sky,
So it makes me blush and look away,
When you stare at me, call me "shy".
Your shoulders wide and arms, so toned,
To keep me warm at night,
With tattoos, illustrated biography,
Inked trophies from the fight.
And chest to meet, my weary head,
When days are long and life is tough,
A six-pack to catch my tears,
When I swear I've had enough.
Beauty, shocking, from your skin,
Despite your wicked ways.
I pray you will see this poem,
And know you're worth someday.
Heroin is poison,
It would make me lose my teeth.
And meth would clog my pores right up,
I'd look disheveled, wouldn't eat.
Not sleeping gives my baggy eyes,
And crazy, frazzled hair.
You run the streets for nights on end,
Still gorgeous, it isn't fair!
So darling, know you're something else,
Think of the life you live.
Then look into a mirror, love,
And think what other men would give...
For your green eyes, shoot beams of sun,
When light's high in the sky,
So it makes me blush and look away,
When you stare at me, call me "shy".
Your shoulders wide and arms, so toned,
To keep me warm at night,
With tattoos, illustrated biography,
Inked trophies from the fight.
And chest to meet, my weary head,
When days are long and life is tough,
A six-pack to catch my tears,
When I swear I've had enough.
Beauty, shocking, from your skin,
Despite your wicked ways.
I pray you will see this poem,
And know you're worth someday.
bloody_ashe
Ashe
2
Joined 11th Aug 2012
Forum Posts: 44
Ashe
Lost Thinker


Forum Posts: 44
I'm sorry sister,
So devastatingly beautiful,
Yet none will turn there head towards you,
Without disgust or pity laced in,
You cant see the looks,
If only you knew how they look at you.
Your so beautiful.
You don't deserve it,
You were born this way,
The doctors cant fix you,
I swore I would protect you,
You were a beautiful baby,
Especially when you smiled at me,
If only you knew.
Your so beautiful.
You can hear our words,
Understand them,
Yet you wont ever respond,
You say meaningless noises,
You don't understand.
Your so beautiful.
People will bully you,
People will try to hurt you,
Others wont understand,
They refuse to see,
Refuse to see then even in difference,
You can be human too,
Your so beautiful.
Your eyes sparkle,
Unseeing,
Your smile enchanting,
Unknowing
Your face,
Its the most beautiful thing to me,
You can put a blue rose to shame.
Your so beautiful.
The doctors told me you couldn't ever see,
Or think right,
Autism they told me,
And blind too,
They told me I would have to say with you,
And I will,
Your so beautiful.
I sing for you melodies,
And you listen,
Its all you can do,
You do it beautifully,
Your like a doll in the moonlight,
So perfect,
We look to the stars on this night,
You cant see them,
But you aspire to be me.
Your so beautiful.
I shed a silent tear,
You look at me and you know,
You reach your hand over,
And gently wipe at it,
You miss,
And try again,
More tears fall,
I cry out.
'You will never be loved!..
No one can see you like I do'
Your so beautiful.
For you,
I want to give you my eyes,
So that you can see your beauty,
For you,
I would take your mid so that you can find love.
For you,
I would take your place so you can be free.
Your so beautiful to me.
Your sister,
Ashe
So devastatingly beautiful,
Yet none will turn there head towards you,
Without disgust or pity laced in,
You cant see the looks,
If only you knew how they look at you.
Your so beautiful.
You don't deserve it,
You were born this way,
The doctors cant fix you,
I swore I would protect you,
You were a beautiful baby,
Especially when you smiled at me,
If only you knew.
Your so beautiful.
You can hear our words,
Understand them,
Yet you wont ever respond,
You say meaningless noises,
You don't understand.
Your so beautiful.
People will bully you,
People will try to hurt you,
Others wont understand,
They refuse to see,
Refuse to see then even in difference,
You can be human too,
Your so beautiful.
Your eyes sparkle,
Unseeing,
Your smile enchanting,
Unknowing
Your face,
Its the most beautiful thing to me,
You can put a blue rose to shame.
Your so beautiful.
The doctors told me you couldn't ever see,
Or think right,
Autism they told me,
And blind too,
They told me I would have to say with you,
And I will,
Your so beautiful.
I sing for you melodies,
And you listen,
Its all you can do,
You do it beautifully,
Your like a doll in the moonlight,
So perfect,
We look to the stars on this night,
You cant see them,
But you aspire to be me.
Your so beautiful.
I shed a silent tear,
You look at me and you know,
You reach your hand over,
And gently wipe at it,
You miss,
And try again,
More tears fall,
I cry out.
'You will never be loved!..
No one can see you like I do'
Your so beautiful.
For you,
I want to give you my eyes,
So that you can see your beauty,
For you,
I would take your mid so that you can find love.
For you,
I would take your place so you can be free.
Your so beautiful to me.
Your sister,
Ashe
AlmostDead0909
Joined 26th Aug 2012
Forum Posts: 26
Lost Thinker

Forum Posts: 26
Angel Of Hell
I lie silent upon the grass
But I am not alone -
An angel has befallen me,
From heaven he has flown.
His light it is so blinding,
That it hurts to see,
I look away, until he lands,
Standing in front of me.
This angel he stood proudly,
With allure and with grace,
The definition of perfection,
Painted on his face.
His eyes were such a hazel,
I had to tear my own away,
A glitter shone there beautifully,
With words he could not say.
And O! Behind him I saw,
Feathered wings of white,
Captivating and oh so soft to touch,
Emanating light.
They spread like an eagle,
His beauty is profound
He rises slightly and I see,
He is just a foot above the ground.
I stare in awe at this sight,
Of pure elegance
I see his soul, so white and pure,
I am almost in a trance.
His beauty hurt to look, and
My head began to spin,
I looked into his eyes
And felt a tingling in my skin.
Then the breath was knocked out of me,
I felt my lungs would never heal,
My chest was aching just to hold,
This being, so unreal.
But lo! His wings began to blacken,
His eyes dark with hate,
And even before he touched me,
I already knew my fate.
He laughed as he heard me scream,
From his wings feathers fell,
They were shredded and torn away,
And I knew he came from hell.
And yet as his evilness emerged,
My heart carried on to ache,
His beauty remained more than anyone,
Though his eyes were that of a snake.
And then he became his true form,
Lucifer at best,
I gasped as he reached for me,
And ripped my heart out of my chest.
299 words
I lie silent upon the grass
But I am not alone -
An angel has befallen me,
From heaven he has flown.
His light it is so blinding,
That it hurts to see,
I look away, until he lands,
Standing in front of me.
This angel he stood proudly,
With allure and with grace,
The definition of perfection,
Painted on his face.
His eyes were such a hazel,
I had to tear my own away,
A glitter shone there beautifully,
With words he could not say.
And O! Behind him I saw,
Feathered wings of white,
Captivating and oh so soft to touch,
Emanating light.
They spread like an eagle,
His beauty is profound
He rises slightly and I see,
He is just a foot above the ground.
I stare in awe at this sight,
Of pure elegance
I see his soul, so white and pure,
I am almost in a trance.
His beauty hurt to look, and
My head began to spin,
I looked into his eyes
And felt a tingling in my skin.
Then the breath was knocked out of me,
I felt my lungs would never heal,
My chest was aching just to hold,
This being, so unreal.
But lo! His wings began to blacken,
His eyes dark with hate,
And even before he touched me,
I already knew my fate.
He laughed as he heard me scream,
From his wings feathers fell,
They were shredded and torn away,
And I knew he came from hell.
And yet as his evilness emerged,
My heart carried on to ache,
His beauty remained more than anyone,
Though his eyes were that of a snake.
And then he became his true form,
Lucifer at best,
I gasped as he reached for me,
And ripped my heart out of my chest.
299 words
Myheartdiesforyou
Mysa
Forum Posts: 325
Mysa
Fire of Insight
7
Joined 29th June 2012
Forum Posts: 325
Beauty within
But not without
Eyes electric and green
But blind, never seeing
Perfect ears
Straight nose
But neither could she smell
Or hear
Plush lips neither pink nor red
And teeth straight and white
A mute she was
And will forever be
True beauty
Is not physical
But never speaking
Seeing
Or hearing of evil.
But not without
Eyes electric and green
But blind, never seeing
Perfect ears
Straight nose
But neither could she smell
Or hear
Plush lips neither pink nor red
And teeth straight and white
A mute she was
And will forever be
True beauty
Is not physical
But never speaking
Seeing
Or hearing of evil.
Icuduseahugritenow
WallFlower
3
Joined 1st Aug 2012
Forum Posts: 108
WallFlower
Thought Provoker


Forum Posts: 108
His Beauty
I see him through
The eyes of another
He is a icon
Of a Handsome young chap
But i see
Something else
Through the Cheeky eyes
And the amazing hair
A glimpse of pure beauty
It's a moment
Of unplanned
Natural
Out of control
Smile
Between the moment
When he smiles to
The transfer into a laugh
Right before he covers his mouth
It's perfect...
This smile
Wow this smile
It's powerful
Fills a room
All eyes on him
He has no idea
The beauty of this
And how it make me feel
I want to make that smile
Give him something to laugh about
Tell him to smile more
And hope
One day
I can be the reason for this smile
I believe 130 words
I see him through
The eyes of another
He is a icon
Of a Handsome young chap
But i see
Something else
Through the Cheeky eyes
And the amazing hair
A glimpse of pure beauty
It's a moment
Of unplanned
Natural
Out of control
Smile
Between the moment
When he smiles to
The transfer into a laugh
Right before he covers his mouth
It's perfect...
This smile
Wow this smile
It's powerful
Fills a room
All eyes on him
He has no idea
The beauty of this
And how it make me feel
I want to make that smile
Give him something to laugh about
Tell him to smile more
And hope
One day
I can be the reason for this smile
I believe 130 words
Kou_Indigo
Karam L. Parveen-Ashton
70
Joined 15th Sep 2011
Forum Posts: 2808
Karam L. Parveen-Ashton
Tyrant of Words


Forum Posts: 2808
Congratulations, Alex! You did excellent winning this contest. Congratulations also to both Naked Satirist (freddwzz) and HannahRose who did well also!