Poetry competition CLOSED 29th August 2012 11:32pm
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wanderer (Faceless)
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A write for the one above!

poet Anonymous

Hi Violet...I hope I did not violate the rules, but Magdalena's poem was just so sweeeeet that I had to reciprocate.
Sorry and Thanks, Strider

violet
Vi
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That's no problem


Since this would mean you'd both be written about twice.. The next poet should write about Autumn.

Gg78
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Me ill take autumn just give me a bit. I have to think this one out

poet Anonymous

Im thinking people!

I cant write on the spot :P

MrAlptraum
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If I jump in now do I get to do Autumn? Poetically of course.

Gg78
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I'm at work so I need time. Claimed her mr a :-p

violet
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Whomever gets in there first with Autumn's poem will be accepted. . Whoever that is, will be written about by the next person and so on so forth :)

poet Anonymous


violet
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Hurry up you guys!


Jestalessa
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you guys are just editing your reserved space posts, right? soooo, Gigi can write about Autumn in one of her reserve spots?

cuuuuz, i got one for Gigifish:  
(is that ok?)


Sleepy brown eyes
lips edible plush

Daring you resist
her high heel sway

Writes gentle
knocks straight

No apology
no need

--

Safe sometimes
behind breezy smiles

Forgetful pleasure  
bedroom hair/body/eyes

Hypnotic
sleepy brown eyes


(edit: yes, modified. sorry... i'm a total tweaker)

violet
Vi
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That's hit the spot Jesty!

Thank you!!

Gg78
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Jestalessa said:you guys are just editing your reserved space posts, right? soooo, Gigi can write about Autumn in one of her reserve spots?

cuuuuz, i got one for Gigifish:  
(is that ok?)


Sleepy brown eyes
lips edible plush

No resisting that sway
in high heel boots

Writes gentle
hits straight

No apologies
no need

--

Safe sometimes
behind perfect smiles

Sense of fun  
bedroom hair/body/eyes

Hypnotic
sleepy brown eyes


Oh wow I'm in love! I luv you jestafish <3

Jestalessa
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Gg78 said:

Oh wow I'm in love! I luv you jestafish <3


woot! luv you too, fishy ... clearly, i have a crush on your eyes and lips. <3

Gg78
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Jestalessa said:[quote-116578-Gg78]

Oh wow I'm in love! I luv you jestafish <3


woot! luv you too, fishy ... clearly, i have a crush on your eyes and lips. <3 [/quote]

I'm honored a beauty like you! It's truly an honor. I'd tap that haha thank you again

Gg78
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Ok autumn don't kill me :-p


Autumn 

They say never judge a book by it's cover 
I never believed that until I met 
Autumn 

Such a beauty, 
the look of innocence on her face 
You'd think she's dumb as post 
Caring just about her looks 

No not our autumn 
She's more then that 
The girl will give Shakespeare a run for his money 
Without a bat of a lash 
I bet she'd tell him, 
"Romeo was a fool"
For Juliet was just another loose whore 

Can't blame her can we
And everyone should love her for it 

She has the guts to be who she is 
A pretty girl with a mind of her own
Hate on her if you like 
She just won't care 
Only the weak give a fuck 
She doesn't give two fucks 
What's that tell you there? 

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