Poetry competition CLOSED 22nd July 2012 6:57pm
WINNER
Magdalena (Spartalena)
Magdalena (Spartalena)
RUNNER-UP:
ThePintSizdSlasher
IF I DONT SEE YOU AGAIN
Poetry Contest Description
You know you are going to die tomorrow, but no sure just in case, what poem sweet, would you leave for some one you really love.
-new poem.
-sweet.
-lovely.
-1 post per poet.
-TITLEL THE POEM , "IF I DONT SEE YOU AGAIN"
-OTHER POETS ARE GOING TO VOTE ON A SCALE FROM 1-5. GOOD LUCK EVERY ONE.
SENA
-sweet.
-lovely.
-1 post per poet.
-TITLEL THE POEM , "IF I DONT SEE YOU AGAIN"
-OTHER POETS ARE GOING TO VOTE ON A SCALE FROM 1-5. GOOD LUCK EVERY ONE.
SENA
Cuando te veo a los ojos en verdad no soy yo quien te ve, sino mi alma, mi alma, que estaba sola, y se alegra porque exista una persona como tu, que quiere que se real la historia y no mentira, y mi alma solo quiero lo mejor de lo mejor para mi, porque me dice que, ella ha sufrido, y no quiere seguir en eso, quiere darme otro chance, para enamorarme, pero sino es asi, te juro que no habra otra oportunidad, por eso, te veo asi, te veo con miedo, solo eso. te quiero mucho.
"Si vuelves a nacer, por favor pide nacer en el Morgan, para asi, por lo menos verte desde otra incubadora. Y poder enamorarme de ti, desde ahi..."
"Te amo, igual.. aveces, cuando te beso, no es sexo, es como que me conecto contigo, y amor es lo que siento.. que te quiero penetrar todo el tiempo, no miento, pero tampoco cuando digo que te amo, cuando digo que quiero estar contigo, toda mi vida. Necesito cambiar algunas cosas en ti, quisas, como tu en mi, pero sino se puede te quiero asi, y te lo he dicho, porque por ti, hare cualquier sacrificio, te lo juro,"
"Te amo, igual.. aveces, cuando te beso, no es sexo, es como que me conecto contigo, y amor es lo que siento.. que te quiero penetrar todo el tiempo, no miento, pero tampoco cuando digo que te amo, cuando digo que quiero estar contigo, toda mi vida. Necesito cambiar algunas cosas en ti, quisas, como tu en mi, pero sino se puede te quiero asi, y te lo he dicho, porque por ti, hare cualquier sacrificio, te lo juro,"
I hope you understand that when someone does something you dislike is probably because you do not let other choice ... All I ask is to talk to you and you just run away like a coward.
"eres lo mejor que me ha pasado , ante muchas cosas, que me cambiaron, y me jalaste, antes de caer al precipicio, te amo. y no puedo dejar de decirlo.y fallarte es lo que menos quiero. te necesito en mi vida. ma."
"eres lo mejor que me ha pasado , ante muchas cosas, que me cambiaron, y me jalaste, antes de caer al precipicio, te amo. y no puedo dejar de decirlo.y fallarte es lo que menos quiero. te necesito en mi vida. ma."
Chances Are
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If I die before I wake
My heart, you may take
Save your tears
Ignore those fears
I know goodbye
Today I die
Beauty killed the beast
I cared not
To the very least
I've told you time and time again
What I feel
You know, its real
But we can not let this get out of hand
Dreams of happiness and winter gift giving
I wish it had happened while I was living
Too bad
So sad
Time for us to understand
Fairytales are meant to dream
So ignore my death
Even as I scream
I never had the courage to say THIS
I love you
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If I die before I wake
My heart, you may take
Save your tears
Ignore those fears
I know goodbye
Today I die
Beauty killed the beast
I cared not
To the very least
I've told you time and time again
What I feel
You know, its real
But we can not let this get out of hand
Dreams of happiness and winter gift giving
I wish it had happened while I was living
Too bad
So sad
Time for us to understand
Fairytales are meant to dream
So ignore my death
Even as I scream
I never had the courage to say THIS
I love you
If my tomorrows see their end
remember my soft whispers
when the words "I love you"
breathed against your bare skin
Inhale my sweet aromas in the air
remembering the flavour of my lips
as they pressed against your soul
stirring the depths that reached eternity
If I don't see you again remember when
I cried into your palms as you collected
my tears to drink them into your heart
so you could hold some of my suffering
And remember my darling if I die tomorrow
you touched my heart like no other ever did
you loved me in a beautiful way and filled me
completely with everything that was missing
Remember
when my heart stops beating
it will still always belong to you
*
Poison
Every time I see your face
my stomach feels out of place
Once we were so close
now its a lethal dose
The poison so cold
and yet I take it so bold
Now you have betrayed my trust
so now I will take it, I must
This is to you with love and spite
and now i see a light
My time has come to leave
to you I bid goodbye, do not grieve
You broke my heart
don't you know your words hurt?
I loved you and what did I get?
painful memories and suffering, I wish we never met
Now that I am leaving,
the only thing I have left to say is...
FUCK YOU
Every time I see your face
my stomach feels out of place
Once we were so close
now its a lethal dose
The poison so cold
and yet I take it so bold
Now you have betrayed my trust
so now I will take it, I must
This is to you with love and spite
and now i see a light
My time has come to leave
to you I bid goodbye, do not grieve
You broke my heart
don't you know your words hurt?
I loved you and what did I get?
painful memories and suffering, I wish we never met
Now that I am leaving,
the only thing I have left to say is...
FUCK YOU
After I'm Gone
Please don't grieve long
Life goes on
Continue living life after I'm gone
Achieve all the happiness life has to offer
The story of our love tell the world you're the author
My spirit lives in you
It wasn't buried in the grass
My legacy will continue
This too shall pass
Remember the laughs
The tears we've shed
The blood we've bled
The life we've led
The things we've said
They all had meaning
I can only imagine the pain you'll be feeling
The hurt on your face
But keep this in mind
I'm in a better place
You'll see me next lifetime
So until we meet again
Remember this is not the end
Please don't grieve long
Life goes on
Continue living life after I'm gone
Achieve all the happiness life has to offer
The story of our love tell the world you're the author
My spirit lives in you
It wasn't buried in the grass
My legacy will continue
This too shall pass
Remember the laughs
The tears we've shed
The blood we've bled
The life we've led
The things we've said
They all had meaning
I can only imagine the pain you'll be feeling
The hurt on your face
But keep this in mind
I'm in a better place
You'll see me next lifetime
So until we meet again
Remember this is not the end
i leave you this
thought of mine
just in case
i might not be here
tomorrow, on
please listen
to what i have to say
unlike you did before
i know that im not
your number one
or even on that list
because i am just
a tool to you
and for you to use
please hear my voice
in this letter
please pay attention
atleast this once
i need to tell you something
thats been weighing
on my mind
ever since i met you
you seem so certin
of my feelings
but ou never thought
to listen
so i wanted you to listen
just this once
so you will see
what i really felt for you
i just want you
to understand
because i always thought
that you could
and no one else
could compare to you
are you ready?
i finally get to tell you
okay . . .
i dont love you
i never did
i always hated you
but you didnt care to notice
thought of mine
just in case
i might not be here
tomorrow, on
please listen
to what i have to say
unlike you did before
i know that im not
your number one
or even on that list
because i am just
a tool to you
and for you to use
please hear my voice
in this letter
please pay attention
atleast this once
i need to tell you something
thats been weighing
on my mind
ever since i met you
you seem so certin
of my feelings
but ou never thought
to listen
so i wanted you to listen
just this once
so you will see
what i really felt for you
i just want you
to understand
because i always thought
that you could
and no one else
could compare to you
are you ready?
i finally get to tell you
okay . . .
i dont love you
i never did
i always hated you
but you didnt care to notice
Anonymous
If I died tomorrow
I want you to know
I never loved another man
As much as I loved you
I remember the good times
The trips down south
The times we never got out of bed
The heat between us was fire red
You were the kindest man I knew
The most beautiful too
Character and looks together
Made us "birds of a feather"
You are crying so much
And I relish your tender touch
Maybe we will reincarnate again
For you have been faithful until the end.
So I'm right here,
in your red-knit jumper
with the copper-pen you leant me, back then, for your number.
I've seen you suited and booted,
Bob-Dylan-esque
then your hair's been matted
and you spat when we chatted
but your still so far the best
that I ever had
or all I wanted?
You can even choose.
but I hope your sad
and so very haunted
I’m sorry please excuse.
You know I love you, this and that
and the hardest part to script
fell flat.
I bet that hit you in the face
like my
preliminary response to your taste in renaissance,
but that's off task.
I don't think this is time to question the afterlife
but if there's god
or good
you can trust that I’ll have them against the nearest clouded wall
just like that Asda employee that said I "wanted it all".
What's so wrong with that?
I'll come find you
like the cough-sweet streetlights found flies
and gnats,
then they found us a place to start
now a place to end
and that is that.
You were so very pretty,
and if it was the ripe of your cheek
or the soft in your speak,
In a way I was with you forever
and that thought makes me so very weak.
I can already see that wrinkly nose
that scrawled when you were angry
and pleaded
when you cried,
but I hope you remember I was right there in that jumper
with your perfect fucking pen
when I died.
in your red-knit jumper
with the copper-pen you leant me, back then, for your number.
I've seen you suited and booted,
Bob-Dylan-esque
then your hair's been matted
and you spat when we chatted
but your still so far the best
that I ever had
or all I wanted?
You can even choose.
but I hope your sad
and so very haunted
I’m sorry please excuse.
You know I love you, this and that
and the hardest part to script
fell flat.
I bet that hit you in the face
like my
preliminary response to your taste in renaissance,
but that's off task.
I don't think this is time to question the afterlife
but if there's god
or good
you can trust that I’ll have them against the nearest clouded wall
just like that Asda employee that said I "wanted it all".
What's so wrong with that?
I'll come find you
like the cough-sweet streetlights found flies
and gnats,
then they found us a place to start
now a place to end
and that is that.
You were so very pretty,
and if it was the ripe of your cheek
or the soft in your speak,
In a way I was with you forever
and that thought makes me so very weak.
I can already see that wrinkly nose
that scrawled when you were angry
and pleaded
when you cried,
but I hope you remember I was right there in that jumper
with your perfect fucking pen
when I died.
"if i don't see you again"
if i die tomorrow...
i rather take you with me,
than to see you cry;
but were am going to
you cant come.
so you see this is my last good bye,
before i die,
i want to have a good time.
so this is what i want to do;
call you up
and talk to you.
pick you up,
and take you out.
yes i want you...
baby what are you going to do?
take this time
make it last.
hug me,
please me.
all night...
say that you want me,
that you need me,
kiss me.
am gone
if i die tomorrow...
i rather take you with me,
than to see you cry;
but were am going to
you cant come.
so you see this is my last good bye,
before i die,
i want to have a good time.
so this is what i want to do;
call you up
and talk to you.
pick you up,
and take you out.
yes i want you...
baby what are you going to do?
take this time
make it last.
hug me,
please me.
all night...
say that you want me,
that you need me,
kiss me.
am gone
Anonymous
If I Don’t See You Again
Plowing through the fields of life
we lived the last of our best days
at war’s end, and though I realize
you have always been my brother
I never thought of you as my friend,
. . .till today.
So I will take these instances of regret
and etch them like a eulogy in stone,
my dying heart, it hurts to depart
from this life we fought in together, and
to never repeat itself, we shall die in poetic infamy.
So, until we meet again,
take care, and
journey well. . .my friend.
Plowing through the fields of life
we lived the last of our best days
at war’s end, and though I realize
you have always been my brother
I never thought of you as my friend,
. . .till today.
So I will take these instances of regret
and etch them like a eulogy in stone,
my dying heart, it hurts to depart
from this life we fought in together, and
to never repeat itself, we shall die in poetic infamy.
So, until we meet again,
take care, and
journey well. . .my friend.
