Poetry competition CLOSED 15th July 2012 12:42pm
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Kou_Indigo (Karam L. Parveen-Ashton)
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Grace
IDryad
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Poetry Contest

Read the title and the short poem below
Grant me forgiveness
Grant me peace
Grant me O God
An escape from this eternity
Of un-absolved repentance!


1: Read the title above and the short poem and write your own version of it.
2: Poems should not be more than 200 words and adhere to the requirement.
3: Please put a title to your poem.

Inviting all DUP friends and family to join in the competition.

marielavoue
Gypsy Red
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Lord, of the blood of the lamb, I am in need.



Lord, I have seen worlds of pain,
my heart has ached mightily for things I cannot change,
I have wept many tears of unabashed shame,
carry the stain of things I did not prearrange.
How, oh Lord, to you, do I raise my sight
while I carry the weight of what I have not done right?  
Lord, of the blood of the lamb, I am in need.

Lord,I call on you for strength,
liberate me from prideful defiance.
My duty let me bravely perform,
even as I stand in the eye of the storm.
Might does not always make right
I pray let me be righteous in your sight.

Father don’t abandon me now,
I fight humanity’s created battles,
trying not to lose the compassion
you charged us with, in all our actions.

Father! Please have mercy on my retched soul,
at your feet I humbly lay my troubles and woes,
I bear to you the conflict in my heart,
I know I cannot do this alone.
Can you hear this sinner lord? My heart in my hands,  
heal me for things I have done at the order of a man
I beg you, take me away from this strife
and let me walk always in your light.


Grace
IDryad
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Gypsy Red, wow!! thank you for entering your poem in this competition.

goodest
Dangerous Mind
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"My Humble Prayer"
by:  Eric L. Boddie

Oh Heavenly Father, I beg of Thee
To Grant my Soul Peace and Tranquility
If it's in Your Will Please Forgive me for my sins
And Grant me the wisdom to correctly advise a needy friend
In times when I am wrong, Please Show me the error of my ways
And Protect my heart from greed on every one of these todays
Give me the courage needed to help exercise Your Will
So that on Judgement Day, my name will be in The Book Of Life instead of the fire's meal
In Your Holy Son's Name, I do Pray
Amen And Thank You God For The Blessing Of A New Day....

Grace
IDryad
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Goodest, thank you so much for the entry.

poet Anonymous

THE LONELY GRAVE

There is a lonely grave

In central Europe

That no-one has visited

The person died

Alone

Abandoned

O GOD grant me forgiveness

For this heresy

I could not visit you before

The land had so much blood

I could not venture there

Only un-absolved repentance

Made me take the dare

So now I stand at your graveside

Bringing pebbles and planting flowers

In this countryside

Oh GOD grant me forgiveness

Oh GOD grant me peace

God protect me from my enemies

An escape from this eternity

Of hatred and deceit.


Grace
IDryad
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Thank you Kitty for your participation.

morrissey
Lost Thinker
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De Profundis - A prayer after loss

It was for Christ I did all these things -
His life; not my own.
Though a mother may forsake her child,
I would never stand alone.

But He has now left; and his followers, too.
Was this God or a just a man - bloodied and bruised?
My supplications mock and ring hollow as I pray:
De profundis clamavi, ad te Domine.

I seek forgiveness for this sin-
Though not mine, it is my lot;
I too am marked for crucifixion;
And fulfillment of the law –
Every last tittle and every last jot.
The hope I have carried shall be revealed to me at last,
It is a vanity men tell to hide the darkness of their past.
This is my escape and my mercy; my final absolution:
To close my eyes in the peace that there shall be no redemption.

drivelicious13
alon aLion
Dangerous Mind
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Integrity Found

too painful to contemplate
in this tug of war
of gravity
i know theres little mass
in my entity
compared to the VAST
Weight
of Responsibility
when Commited
to Nurture from Seed
to Semi-Complete


i know all too well
that in the shadow
of such Immediacy
i am but one cell
an amoeba
a paramecium
a spec
in the coliseum
where Determined Gladiators
take on The Fates
while Clinging to Their Backs
Their Babes

no!

i will not reduce the Dimension
of such Precious Lives
to obscure lines
written by minstrel
turned mime
though wisps in my cypher's
experience informs
they are the Epitomes
of the D e e p e s t
SUBLIME

how dare i  waste
their Mother`s Time?

 
I Pledge
I`ll continue to RAGE
at EVERY Stage
to Ensure
theres a Place
at ANY Age
to allow US
to turn the page
from In-Between
matrimonial cage
to a molasses
a painfully slow Coalescence
into a True
Soul-Matian Phase


You`ve Witnessed
a Renaissance
Sparked by an Incredible Friend
stumbling to express
all I could muster
was stutter
til my Mocha Muse
Who Paid Her Dues
Naturally Exuded
to Cure my defect
made me feel Included
in a World of Individuals
Each of Unique Worth
and Quality

this Goddess of Truth
Delivered a Sense
of WORTH
to my Being

Her Wisdom
Unleashed
my Freedom of Speech

Knowing
She Loves Me
Delivers
Instant Integrity


Grace
IDryad
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Thank you drivelicious and morrissey for taking part in the competition.

drivelicious13
alon aLion
Dangerous Mind
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"Supplicate"

  is one of my fave words.

 Problem is , many "Civilians" dont understand its meaning.

Danii
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God,
Where hath thee been?
I cry thy name to thy sky
Thy name is bitter on thine tongue
No answer to my weak and hopeless cries
I curse the skies
If you hear me now
Grant me strength and peace
I want to feel alive again
Before I had taken over by sin
God, grant me courage
To live once more

marcella1
Fire of Insight
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If you look inside
you will find
nothing new,
nothing to do:

just you!

Grace
IDryad
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marcella1, so good of you to be here.

Grace
IDryad
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drivelicious13 said: "Supplicate"
is one of my fave words.
Problem is , many "Civilians" dont understand its meaning.

Drivelicious13: Thank you. My bad.
supplication
1. the act of supplicating
2. a humble entreaty or petition; prayer



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