Poetry competition CLOSED 1st May 2012 1:59am
WINNER
Anonymous
Anonymous
RUNNERS-UP:
diddi
and Devilish
DU love!
Poetry Contest Description
Write a poem to someone here on DU that has inspired you, in whatever way you feel. Whether they inspired your lust or your love, just write it out!
RULES;
- 2 entries per poet
- Under 300 words, pleeeease
- All poems must be titled
- No commenting on poems
- 2 entries per poet
- Under 300 words, pleeeease
- All poems must be titled
- No commenting on poems
For the Irish of HaZing.. Eamon...
Theres something
about you.
That
drives
me
crazy.
I log in
to sin..
With
the irish
of
hazing..
I follow your threads..
like
i'm
being
fed..
and swallow the notion
of love sick
devotion...
My body in knots..
a
full
throttle
sweat..
On how many ways ..
i'd get you in bed..
And
.
.
.
I fuck you like crazy..
All
day
in
my
head..
Just so you know.
Theres something
about you.
That
drives
me
crazy.
I log in
to sin..
With
the irish
of
hazing..
I follow your threads..
like
i'm
being
fed..
and swallow the notion
of love sick
devotion...
My body in knots..
a
full
throttle
sweat..
On how many ways ..
i'd get you in bed..
And
.
.
.
I fuck you like crazy..
All
day
in
my
head..
Just so you know.
Cloudy Moons Rising to 9
So you want to bounce
around the room
let it all out
under the moon ,
you're the lunar lady
reflective , confectionary ,
the lion tamer
who really gets to me ,
an avid gamer
writing in pictionary ,
a depression slayer , elevation maker
organical , natural , lover of all animals ,
the lunar leaper
sattelite streaker
hope enchancer
cloud of nine , step dancer ,
I hope you like this
Miki the blissful miss .
If I could , I'd drain the sea
so the planet shrunk
then closer you would be .
So you want to bounce
around the room
let it all out
under the moon ,
you're the lunar lady
reflective , confectionary ,
the lion tamer
who really gets to me ,
an avid gamer
writing in pictionary ,
a depression slayer , elevation maker
organical , natural , lover of all animals ,
the lunar leaper
sattelite streaker
hope enchancer
cloud of nine , step dancer ,
I hope you like this
Miki the blissful miss .
If I could , I'd drain the sea
so the planet shrunk
then closer you would be .
Midnight Stalker
When I look
into the night ,
it's you I feel
my outer layers peel
telescopic minds
they zoom through times ,
I close my eyes you walk
my midnight skies ,
telepathic talk
it goes the flow for miles ,
you negate the dark
make Mona Lisa smile ,
then you take a shark
brush up his teeth so white ,
invent new parks
in the mind of child ,
then you strike bright sparks
to where all light had died .
I visualise
what you epitimise ,
a beautiful lady
sat on strawberry ice ,
mentality sailing
over all high tides ,
with a golden , flaming , tailspin
baking love
into pies .
When I look
into the night ,
it's you I feel
my outer layers peel
telescopic minds
they zoom through times ,
I close my eyes you walk
my midnight skies ,
telepathic talk
it goes the flow for miles ,
you negate the dark
make Mona Lisa smile ,
then you take a shark
brush up his teeth so white ,
invent new parks
in the mind of child ,
then you strike bright sparks
to where all light had died .
I visualise
what you epitimise ,
a beautiful lady
sat on strawberry ice ,
mentality sailing
over all high tides ,
with a golden , flaming , tailspin
baking love
into pies .
Let's Roll It Up
Can we roll it up
the sky , the clouds
then take a puff ,
blowing out , airborn sounds ,
let's , not give a fuck
as we stand out proud ,
plucking bad luck
from our eybrows .
Swirl for me
in flowered hair ,
in a girly free
candle wax glare ,
with you it seems
I dare , I'm not scared
ocular beams
they shake like a snare .
Lie down with me
in this tiny existance
I want to be
your to death , assistant
your last breath , consistant
a good self , persistant .
Can we roll it up
the sky , the clouds
then take a puff ,
blowing out , airborn sounds ,
let's , not give a fuck
as we stand out proud ,
plucking bad luck
from our eybrows .
Swirl for me
in flowered hair ,
in a girly free
candle wax glare ,
with you it seems
I dare , I'm not scared
ocular beams
they shake like a snare .
Lie down with me
in this tiny existance
I want to be
your to death , assistant
your last breath , consistant
a good self , persistant .
Anonymous
Diavolo.
When i combine those pretty letters,
I feel like a begging knight
to a martyr, about to die.
The words drip like an elixir,
filling the small gaps between the lines
with brutal fatality
and i become lost in that forbidden land
that is created from your mind
and exits from your wicked tongue
though i have a feeling, dear girl,
that the adventures
have only truly just begun.
When i combine those pretty letters,
I feel like a begging knight
to a martyr, about to die.
The words drip like an elixir,
filling the small gaps between the lines
with brutal fatality
and i become lost in that forbidden land
that is created from your mind
and exits from your wicked tongue
though i have a feeling, dear girl,
that the adventures
have only truly just begun.
Anonymous
Bro/Hoe.
He is the night watchman.
The defender.
The wise words subtly spoken
who misses nothing -
not a second,
and often proves me wrong.
He is not easily threatened,
or marred,
but laughs all the same.
And i don't really know what to say
other than thank you
for seeing past Missy's one track brain
and seeing there's just simply a girl
begging to write
to make sense of the pain.
He is the night watchman.
The defender.
The wise words subtly spoken
who misses nothing -
not a second,
and often proves me wrong.
He is not easily threatened,
or marred,
but laughs all the same.
And i don't really know what to say
other than thank you
for seeing past Missy's one track brain
and seeing there's just simply a girl
begging to write
to make sense of the pain.
Anonymous
Entry Withdrawn...thank's :-)
mikimoondancer said:
With love to S.P. Summerscales-
It's MY turn, LOL
You existed in a riddle
Across a puddle
You called it the sea..
I thought it funny.
Geography can be friend or foe
I always embrace both you know.
I did not know...
Your songs were real
On an epic Journey
and in my own mind
I heard the yearning
and guitar string's burning...
I realized in time
that late at night
you sat up too-
to write the lines.
in your own design-
To guitar from mind.
Still, I did not know...
I sent you a message
A little critique
Wished you well
and meant it indeed!
You responded and then again-
I thought maybe you needed a friend
and as I am a friendly sort
so many nights we sat and talked...
Still, I did not know...
Then one day you wrote me a poem-
I was really moved-I wasn't sure how to show it-
I was inspired and dazed
and suddenly entered in a race
With little girl whines
and sarcastic rhymes-
I enjoyed it though
Psychology is mine.
I knew at this point...
After finding some clarity
and seeing what was there
in enormity-
It seemed to be-more than
conformity-how you got me.
Seems like months, feels like years
Now spending nights
laughing in tears
Expelling the fears
Building the positive
Re-creating the horrid.
So brilliant in your truer form
more than any lover scorned
more than wispy whims of delight
I love who exists inside.
We refuse to play mindless games-
We rise above and cause the change-
In stage nights now-
I may play Jimmi-
But always dedicate those
songs to Diddi....
In shallow waters-
They will never see
What it really took
for you-and me.
To Be
A We.
For once in my entirity , I am speechless ,
thankyou minxter lady xxxx
With love to S.P. Summerscales-
It's MY turn, LOL
You existed in a riddle
Across a puddle
You called it the sea..
I thought it funny.
Geography can be friend or foe
I always embrace both you know.
I did not know...
Your songs were real
On an epic Journey
and in my own mind
I heard the yearning
and guitar string's burning...
I realized in time
that late at night
you sat up too-
to write the lines.
in your own design-
To guitar from mind.
Still, I did not know...
I sent you a message
A little critique
Wished you well
and meant it indeed!
You responded and then again-
I thought maybe you needed a friend
and as I am a friendly sort
so many nights we sat and talked...
Still, I did not know...
Then one day you wrote me a poem-
I was really moved-I wasn't sure how to show it-
I was inspired and dazed
and suddenly entered in a race
With little girl whines
and sarcastic rhymes-
I enjoyed it though
Psychology is mine.
I knew at this point...
After finding some clarity
and seeing what was there
in enormity-
It seemed to be-more than
conformity-how you got me.
Seems like months, feels like years
Now spending nights
laughing in tears
Expelling the fears
Building the positive
Re-creating the horrid.
So brilliant in your truer form
more than any lover scorned
more than wispy whims of delight
I love who exists inside.
We refuse to play mindless games-
We rise above and cause the change-
In stage nights now-
I may play Jimmi-
But always dedicate those
songs to Diddi....
In shallow waters-
They will never see
What it really took
for you-and me.
To Be
A We.
For once in my entirity , I am speechless ,
thankyou minxter lady xxxx mikimoondancer said:
With love to S.P. Summerscales-
It's MY turn, LOL
You existed in a riddle
Across a puddle
You called it the sea..
I thought it funny.
Geography can be friend or foe
I always embrace both you know.
I did not know...
Your songs were real
On an epic Journey
and in my own mind
I heard the yearning
and guitar string's burning...
I realized in time
that late at night
you sat up too-
to write the lines.
in your own design-
To guitar from mind.
Still, I did not know...
I sent you a message
A little critique
Wished you well
and meant it indeed!
You responded and then again-
I thought maybe you needed a friend
and as I am a friendly sort
so many nights we sat and talked...
Still, I did not know...
Then one day you wrote me a poem-
I was really moved-I wasn't sure how to show it-
I was inspired and dazed
and suddenly entered in a race
With little girl whines
and sarcastic rhymes-
I enjoyed it though
Psychology is mine.
I knew at this point...
After finding some clarity
and seeing what was there
in enormity-
It seemed to be-more than
conformity-how you got me.
Seems like months, feels like years
Now spending nights
laughing in tears
Expelling the fears
Building the positive
Re-creating the horrid.
So brilliant in your truer form
more than any lover scorned
more than wispy whims of delight
I love who exists inside.
We refuse to play mindless games-
We rise above and cause the change-
In stage nights now-
I may play Jimmi-
But always dedicate those
songs to Diddi....
In shallow waters-
They will never see
What it really took
for you-and me.
To Be
A We.
You go girl.... lol.. Beautiful.. it flowed like water...
With love to S.P. Summerscales-
It's MY turn, LOL
You existed in a riddle
Across a puddle
You called it the sea..
I thought it funny.
Geography can be friend or foe
I always embrace both you know.
I did not know...
Your songs were real
On an epic Journey
and in my own mind
I heard the yearning
and guitar string's burning...
I realized in time
that late at night
you sat up too-
to write the lines.
in your own design-
To guitar from mind.
Still, I did not know...
I sent you a message
A little critique
Wished you well
and meant it indeed!
You responded and then again-
I thought maybe you needed a friend
and as I am a friendly sort
so many nights we sat and talked...
Still, I did not know...
Then one day you wrote me a poem-
I was really moved-I wasn't sure how to show it-
I was inspired and dazed
and suddenly entered in a race
With little girl whines
and sarcastic rhymes-
I enjoyed it though
Psychology is mine.
I knew at this point...
After finding some clarity
and seeing what was there
in enormity-
It seemed to be-more than
conformity-how you got me.
Seems like months, feels like years
Now spending nights
laughing in tears
Expelling the fears
Building the positive
Re-creating the horrid.
So brilliant in your truer form
more than any lover scorned
more than wispy whims of delight
I love who exists inside.
We refuse to play mindless games-
We rise above and cause the change-
In stage nights now-
I may play Jimmi-
But always dedicate those
songs to Diddi....
In shallow waters-
They will never see
What it really took
for you-and me.
To Be
A We.
You go girl.... lol.. Beautiful.. it flowed like water...
