Poetry competition CLOSED 16th April 2012 5:09am
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siphondarkness (Levi)
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disney characters turn bad

firedaughter
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Poetry Contest

Describe a disney character and present him/her with an evil persona
I am well aware that this is a little odd and very different.. but i think it might get some creative juices flowing! XD

-post as many times as you'd like
-must have a title
-can be as long as you want

Enjoy!
MUST be in poetic form

firedaughter
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Snow White

Snow White you run
with an apple in your hand..
Because you were found guilty
of being fairest of the land..

Destined to bring her fury
down to a bittersweet end..
No love left to give
No heart left to lend..

Snow White you stand
with an army behind you..
You plan on bringing blood,
and taking her head too?

How you seemed so innocent,
sweet, pure, and kind..
No one would've guessed
you lost your little mind..


mikeben2012
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Mickey pimps out minnie on the stip in las Vegas got her hooked on crack and meth drinking fourtie ounces

firedaughter
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mikeben2012 said:Mickey pimps out minnie on the stip in las Vegas got her hooked on crack and meth drinking fourtie ounces


I do believe this has potential, but the rules are stated clearly at the top..If you should wish to be a winner, then follow those guidlines please and thank you! XD

                     X_X,
                     
                      KristanyD

BleedingInferno219
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A Ready-Made Disaster

Cursed upon birth,
avoiding all prophecy.
Shunned to the forest
as a child, unconciously.

No fairy tales,
for the golden-haired queen.
Closeted up,
losing faith in her dreams.

One day, she snapped.
Bit the big one, hit the sheets.
Under that love spell,
she wept all through her dreams.

A kiss drenched in sweat,
fluttered wide the baby blues.
Blade kept under her pillow,
just waiting for the cue.

She destroyed that prince,
she destoyed herself.
The closeted princess,
who lived through hell.

Now she's gone,
it's been nearly fifty years.
Still sits a castle,
to keep her in your fears.

**I'm aware this isn't that great, whatever though.

firedaughter
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BleedingInferno219 said:A Ready-Made Disaster

Cursed upon birth,
avoiding all prophecy.
Shunned to the forest
as a child, unconciously.

No fairy tales,
for the golden-haired queen.
Closeted up,
losing faith in her dreams.

One day, she snapped.
Bit the big one, hit the sheets.
Under that love spell,
she wept all through her dreams.

A kiss drenched in sweat,
fluttered wide the baby blues.
Blade kept under her pillow,
just waiting for the cue.

She destroyed that prince,
she destoyed herself.
The closeted princess,
who lived through hell.

Now she's gone,
it's been nearly fifty years.
Still sits a castle,
to keep her in your fears.

**I'm aware this isn't that great, whatever though.


Dont doubt your abilities..they far exceed what you think.. XD as for the poem, I was so freaking hoping that you would post to this XD now if I can only get the other two..I LOVE this one kristyn.. magnificent <3

BleedingInferno219
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XD what other two?

firedaughter
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Devilish and Imaginary Fiend.. It would be great just to have all 3 of these people on here..well now I guess it's only two ^.^ ..hahaha!

siphondarkness
Levi
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The Lion that ate the lamb

Orphaned young
fell in with the wrong crowd
Now he abuses his title
his crown

He is Scar's
little pawn
fell right into his trap
darkness without dawn

Akuma matata
is where he lives
The dark king
is what he now is

The jungle is now
a playground for a hyena
What happened to you,
Simba?


firedaughter
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I love it!!!!

siphondarkness
Levi
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firedaughter said:I love it!!!!
thanks this competition was a little harder than I thought

firedaughter
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siphondarkness said:[quote-73239-firedaughter]I love it!!!!
thanks this competition was a little harder than I thought[/quote]

I just thought it might be a little more interesting.. I've yet to hear regular occurences of disney characters gone bad.. and I thought it'd be cool! .. XD

siphondarkness
Levi
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It is harder for me because a lot of disney movies are fairy tales and I have already twisted them before in this book of 27 or so poems for someone so coming up with something new was a little hard

firedaughter
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No worries, post as many as you'd like.. they can be old or new..doesn't matter XD just as long as they meet above said rules and quotas >.<

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Levi
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Thing is I could post that whole book if I could remember where I saved that file

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