Poetry competition CLOSED 17th November 2011 6:59pm
WINNER
Leila_Selene
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best 8 lines.....

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Dangerous Mind
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nice selection la....interesting coming from a gal....lol

poet Anonymous

Biblical Loophole

Leafing gently through the Gutenberg’s pages
looking back over the ages
white gloved, trembling hands
reading passages of the Masters plans
finally locating the message which he’d come to garner
“in the world, a submissive woman shall abide in every corner”
caused the joy and laughter to burst forth at the wisdom he’d found
knowing now which only He knew then: that the earth is round.

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Dangerous Mind
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tornado you just made it in time & that was an outstanding display of 8 mind boggling lines.....

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Dangerous Mind
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alas the time has come
for 1 of the most difficult things i have ever done
to pick a winner between you all
not a single effort was close to small
but in the end it can only be 1
who took this challenge so far beyond
& in my mind that person has to be
no1 but leila....your words really touched me.....

CONGRATULATIONS

poet Anonymous

Cool! Way to go leila! Congratulations!

Leila_Selene
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Thank you so much! This is the first competition I've ever entered on here so I'm shocked I won! Great job to every one else who posted :D

Grace
IDryad
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Leila_Selene!! You won! Yay...congratulations! *claps*

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Karam L. Parveen-Ashton
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Excellent work, Leila! Your entry was indeed fantastic writing.

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