best 8 lines.....
goodest
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Dangerous Mind
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nice selection la....interesting coming from a gal....lol
Anonymous
Biblical Loophole
Leafing gently through the Gutenberg’s pages
looking back over the ages
white gloved, trembling hands
reading passages of the Masters plans
finally locating the message which he’d come to garner
“in the world, a submissive woman shall abide in every corner”
caused the joy and laughter to burst forth at the wisdom he’d found
knowing now which only He knew then: that the earth is round.
Leafing gently through the Gutenberg’s pages
looking back over the ages
white gloved, trembling hands
reading passages of the Masters plans
finally locating the message which he’d come to garner
“in the world, a submissive woman shall abide in every corner”
caused the joy and laughter to burst forth at the wisdom he’d found
knowing now which only He knew then: that the earth is round.
goodest
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Dangerous Mind
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Joined 22nd Aug 2011Forum Posts: 3007
tornado you just made it in time & that was an outstanding display of 8 mind boggling lines.....
goodest
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Dangerous Mind
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Joined 22nd Aug 2011Forum Posts: 3007
alas the time has come
for 1 of the most difficult things i have ever done
to pick a winner between you all
not a single effort was close to small
but in the end it can only be 1
who took this challenge so far beyond
& in my mind that person has to be
no1 but leila....your words really touched me.....
CONGRATULATIONS
for 1 of the most difficult things i have ever done
to pick a winner between you all
not a single effort was close to small
but in the end it can only be 1
who took this challenge so far beyond
& in my mind that person has to be
no1 but leila....your words really touched me.....
CONGRATULATIONS
Anonymous
Cool! Way to go leila! Congratulations!
Leila_Selene
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Twisted Dreamer
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Joined 8th Oct 2011Forum Posts: 9
Thank you so much! This is the first competition I've ever entered on here so I'm shocked I won! Great job to every one else who posted :D
Grace
IDryad
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IDryad
Tyrant of Words
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Leila_Selene!! You won! Yay...congratulations! *claps*
Kou_Indigo
Karam L. Parveen-Ashton
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Karam L. Parveen-Ashton
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 15th Sep 2011Forum Posts: 2804
Excellent work, Leila! Your entry was indeed fantastic writing.