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A twisted Sonnet

TeeTeeAlyriAh0764
TeeTeeAlyricAh0764
Twisted Dreamer
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So mine is kinda like not what you specifically wanted huh?😞 Me sorry...it's Tight though right?😎☺️

Rew
Fire of Insight
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I don't suppose it matters. It just won't score high.

Grace
IDryad
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Rew said:Thank you Grace (Stardusts) for your deep, heartfelt entry but lovely though yours is I am hoping for Sonnets.
No worries. sorry.

wallyroo92
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Modern Day Caligula

(a sonnet)  
   
He is a modern day Caligula  
Ranting how he should be back on the throne  
Screaming loud you can see his uvula  
As the orange paint doesn’t match the tone  
   
His deception game has quite the brilliance  
Something's wrong, one can see it in his eyes  
He’s been able to hypnotize millions  
Followers swallow bukkakes of lies  
   
It’s sad when masses heed to a mad man  
It passes for normal without disdain  
It’s a plain train wreck waiting to happen  
But the senseless idiot has gone insane  
   
It’s a risky political twister  
When people try to elect a grifter
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Rew
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" swallow...of lies " bril

Rew
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Thanks to Josh for the contribution.

ajay
Dangerous Mind
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Related submission no longer exists.

Rew
Fire of Insight
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thanks for contributing ajay

MadameLavender
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Read (past tense)  the Directions

To know the rhyme scheme of a sonnet      
I must perhaps use Google, to find it,      
then, by search, when I  happen upon it,      
I'll see the rhyming and then will mind it.      
     
The English form is three stanzas of four      
lines that rhyme "ABAB", then two "G's".      
Each line has syllables of ten, no more      
rhyming lines, C, D, E, F, in between.      
     
The Petrachan form is beyond my scope      
of what else I can stuff inside my brain.      
It's overpacked now, and I cannot cope--      
dear Lord, some motrin, please for all the strain!      
     
Rew asked for sonnets, obliged her, I tried;      
I'll shut up now, before more brain cells die.      
     
😁      
 
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Rew
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It's a good un (shame 'bout the brain cells but, we have billions )  bonne chance Madame

PAR
PAULO ACACIO RAMOS
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Rew
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Perhaps PAR would like to shave this down to the sonnet the competition asked for?
It will make a good one, I'm sure.

AnonymousBystander
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The Man Who Murdered Milosevic

I thought about the man who had to look
after Milosevic.  How hard
to care, while thinking of the lives he took.
Keeping him healthy just to disregard
the court. Watching the trial seem to slip
out of the hands of the prosecutor.
Prescribing drugs for him to have the zip
to change from the accused to tormentor.
Another drug to contraindicate,
to stop his heart, stop the trial, the lies
and pain.  The justice of it would placate
his mind.  -- Another butcher to despise,
a trial which found the guilt of Karadzic
but, the innocence of Milosevic.
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Rew
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I shall have to look up Karadzic
to see the relationship to Milosevic.
The latter I've heard of. Thanks for
the entry AnonymousBystander.

Rew
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deleted a delete just to clear the deck

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