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Grace (IDryad)
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Being too good

billu1109
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Poetry Contest

Diabetes

Being too good,
is bad for friendships
and for (relationships),
just like eating too much,
sugar can lead to diabetes.

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Grace
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Sugar Sweet Suicide

 

ice cream and chocolates
moist fruitcakes, marzipan
creamy topped puddings
cinnamon and meringue

cheese pizzas
sugar powdered doughnuts
fried chicken and pie
hamburgers
and different flavoured soda

delicious sweetness
pushing me down
gently and sweetly
into the ground.
Written by Grace (IDryad)
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Hi Bilal KHOGYANI is your competition about " being too good" or about " diabetes? "

billu1109
Seul Billu
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Being too good is like diabetes is dangerous for health

billu1109
Seul Billu
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Super

Jordan
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The Danger to the Health of the Starving Child Near Death

or  
   
Seriously Low Blood Sugar Levels on Skipping All Meals a Full Year  
   
"Most every human's nature is sweet in tooth and bear claws."  
-- the worldwide deadly diabetes to die for  
   
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So few have any appetite for being too upright --  
the sugar highs full leaving each yet somewhat less than bright.  
   
*  
   
a dedication of Respect  
for  
the Pain of the baby whose candy  
greediness diseased still steals with ease  
   
a revolving helios couplet menippean satire on  
severe brain freeze    
on wolfing a starbucks frappuccino iced, blended coffee    
topped with whipped cream and cinnamon dolce syrup  
   
august, 2023 -- yet countless starving children getting not one spoonful of sugar  
to help the alprazolam tranquillizers go down in a most desperate attempt to keep
the Pain sedated
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I still haven't a clue and inexplicably got a trophy for...???

Grace
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Interesting. Where's the entry?

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There isn't one.

lepperochan
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Lads and ladies.... If you run a comp, READ THE ENTRIES before you pick a winner. If a person posts a comment on a comp thread he/ she will be included in the choice to pick as a winner

tsk tsk

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The winner of this competition and any runners up were decided by public vote.

Thank you to the following members for voting:

Kinkpoet, dimpy, Northern_Soul, ajay, PAR, robert43041, WillowsWhimsies, MidnightSonneteer, Phantom2426, ReggiePoet, Tallen

Grace
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Thank you so much for the honour. Humbled 🌹

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Grace said:Thank you so much for the honour. Humbled 🌹

wow, already winning trophies. well done l, lady

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Yeah, 114, already

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