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The thirteenth day of Christmas

Posted: 30th November 2022 2:23pm
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There is the twelve days of Christmas. In some traditions there are 13.... YOURS is the 13th and it falls on a Friday
Poems up to 50 lines.  Makes it gross, bloody, whatever.  No porn, please.

Posted: 30th November 2022 10:51pm
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Related submission no longer exists.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/467570-manifestations-untold-of-the-divine/

Posted: 1st December 2022 2:07pm
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............and good luck in the comp.

Posted: 2nd December 2022 9:22pm
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Related submission no longer exists.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/467722-run-run-rudolph-a-rondeau/

Posted: 3rd December 2022 1:09am
Wafflenose
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The thirteen days of Christmas

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Posted: 3rd December 2022 2:17am
Edited: 3rd December 2022 2:26am - edited 3 times
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Love this, Ellie! You have encapsulated the true, well, if not true, but realistic feel of modern-day Xmas, Lol! Say, why don't we just march right on down to Tesco & buy our 'Tesco Value' Christmas Jumpers? I'm so damn tempted, I tell ya!

Posted: 3rd December 2022 8:17am
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Ha ha, thanks! I wanted the rhythm and sound of the original, with a realistic and vaguely nightmarish twist.

Also... I REFUSE to wear a Christmas jumper, ever. I hate stupid made-up 'traditions'. We have Advent calendars and will buy a tree and decorate. I won't wear Christmas clothing, waste money on Christmas Eve boxes or faff about with elves on shelves!!

Posted: 3rd December 2022 2:11pm
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Gory and spooky.  I like

Posted: 3rd December 2022 2:13pm
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Cute. And a good laugh.   Regards, Robert.

Posted: 9th December 2022 10:16am
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When I recover from Covid, I'll sing and record this!

Posted: 24th December 2022 11:31pm
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The winner of this competition and any runners up were decided by public vote.

Thank you to the following members for voting:

moroccanpoet, robert43041, ReggiePoet, Billy_Snagg, nutbuster, Tallen, JiltedJohnny, lepperochan, Phantom2426, monovox128, olivia, MadameLavender, Razzerleaf

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