Poetry competition CLOSED 27th June 2022 9:43pm
WINNER
wallyroo92
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RUNNER-UP: Razzerleaf

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Unusual Perspectives

Razzerleaf
Fire of Insight
United Kingdom 27awards
Joined 15th Sep 2019
Forum Posts: 525

Leftovers

They were only half dead,  
infected by bark beetles.    
Together they gathered    
like zombies,      
a riverside cluster    
torn and dismembered    
shuffled to a random array.    
     
Each day someone walks past    
they ignore the un-miraculous,      
avoid the dark exterior    
no one wants to be bitten.    
     
I need the bite    
offering a throat
to be ripped out   
I embrace the group,    
take my place      
but all I find is their grace    
as we feed on the last supper.    
 
Written by Razzerleaf
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Jordan
D.O.C.
Twisted Dreamer
United States 13awards
Joined 4th May 2022
Forum Posts: 245

Jordan
D.O.C.
Twisted Dreamer
United States 13awards
Joined 4th May 2022
Forum Posts: 245

Wafflenose
Ellie
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 21awards
Joined 1st Aug 2021
Forum Posts: 1214

Thank you for your entries, everyone.

TrueLover
Meganne
Thought Provoker
1awards
Joined 18th Feb 2018
Forum Posts: 16

A letter to suicide

You crave souls because you're greedy,
 
You take souls because you're needy.
 
You claim to be starving,  
 
So you sit and watch as people grab their razors and start carving.
 
You are nothing more than a cowardly fool,
 
Watching the innocent souls seeking death makes you drool.
 
You sit and wait for the the mental pain to get out of control,
 
When souls leave their bodies you swallow them whole.
 
Some feel you are an escape but you are no Friend,
 
You'll never be a helping hand.
 
You are like a loaded gun shooting bullets through the air,
 
All the lifeless bodies hit the floor and you just sit and stare.
 
You're a theif,
 
You laugh at the family tree as you steal another leaf.
 
You also steal time from their life clock,
 
This is murder but in this case the bodies wont be outlined with chalk.
 
All I can do is pray that you fail over and over again.
 
Knowing you is like dragging around a ball and chain.  
Written by TrueLover (Meganne)
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Wafflenose
Ellie
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 21awards
Joined 1st Aug 2021
Forum Posts: 1214

This has taken me a few days, because I was so torn!  I really loved them all, and they definitely made me think.  The prize winner and runners-up were chosen because they managed to turn some kind of image on its head and really make me see things in a different way.  It was an incredibly difficult decision!  I will endeavour to leave everyone a nice bit of feedback soon.

wallyroo92
Tyrant of Words
United States 154awards
Joined 11th July 2012
Forum Posts: 1873

There were so many awesome entries in this comp. Congratulations to Razzerleaf and Northern_Soul for standing on the podium on this one. Thank you Ellie for the honor in this comp. I know judging is always difficult, but I am humbled by your comments. I appreciate it very much.

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