Poetry competition CLOSED 24th June 2022 7:32am
WINNER
Strangeways_Rob
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RUNNERS-UP: Razzerleaf and NANCY_RDZ_STORIES

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LISTEN , Water brings a message

Rianne
Rianne
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Thank you much Dream for your entry!!!

NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
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THE WRITER'S MIND

Swimming in the deep depths of tales
A place where writers sometimes go
In urgent need to find themselves
To envision again the writing flow

A place where words swim like fish
Many are like sirens that sing in bubbles
that carries their voices in bliss
Hiding their beauty in the trenches tunnels

All glow shining with inscriptions within
Giving ideas that can create
A plot for your mind to confine in
That exploit to initiate.

As you go deeper into the abyss of its body
It gets darker, colder
Luring you to it's embody
Time is growing older
As getting closer yet feeling bolder
Enthralled in its ebony shadows shoulder

Now alone with a blank mind
No one can save you this time
It's up to you on how to evade the mine.
It wants you there
Now trapped and soon in need of air
You're falling into despair
It's calling you but ostensibly to not bear!!!

Swimming through is a murky cast
It swims in, at full blast
Stalks you like a shark
Can't see well it's too dark!!!
Freshly still like a simple bass
It's way too sharply fast
As hoping that good fate
Comes to make it pass
Or make you it's intent bait
Maybe even to occasion a special date.

It comes...... It comes!!!


Then silence fills to surround
Yet there's nothing around
With not a speck of sound
What has happened?
This is all so rapid...
Am I dead in the oceanic's shroud?

Then a source of swirling light
Endows my presence
A feeling so unique in essence
giving me a sense of no fright
Darkness and fear is now evanescence
What never was to result in a bad bite.
Now my hands are inspired
to naturally write
For the seas, stories had conspired
To paint in black ink
Giving a talent with passion
So there's no way for them to sink
But to float like jellies
With pink flopping bellies
Giving them a sensual attraction
Almost like ballerinas on a stage
That dance with grace
To the seas gravity with no name or age
Love how well they rhythm at the same pace

It's all now coming to me...
And I can see and do I proudly see
In a sweet art masterpiece
That I made it be...
I want to feel it's dew
It's meadow harmony that arches in peace
In the profound beauty of it's blue
The skill I carried and always knew
Was never far from me
I had to get prompted starting at new
Hey you got this don't worry
Now get on and write your story...
Written by NANCY_RDZ_STORIES (WRITER LYRICIST ARTIST)
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Rianne
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Wob you really have cooked up some magical verses there, superb write!!! The ending is truly magical.
Your Welsh magical ink is really a window to the water worlds!!!
Razzer and Nancy, very good works, I liked the multi facetted quality of both your works each very different in style and approach.

THANK YOU ALL fellow members for joining me in the competition
shine on all of you crazy diamonds!!!!
blessings
R

Razzerleaf
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Congrats to Rob for the win and Nancy for the runner up and a big thank you to Rianne for the deep centered muse

Rianne
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Most welcome Razzeleaf, I enjoyed reading your entry!!!

Strangeways_Rob
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Not being rude, I only just seen this! Truly flattered. Many thanks for the kind comment Ri and congrats to beauty of all entries. Wob

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