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Brutalist Architecture & The Bleakness of Life

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Razzerleaf
Fire of Insight
United Kingdom 26awards
Joined 15th Sep 2019
Forum Posts: 487

London town

Scrubbing nylon brushes  
scratch the backs of dirty streets.  
Outside the shops
with sagged oak beams,  
untold news is gagged with string.  
Rubbish crushed by talking trucks  
reverse away a day of waste,  
underground she groans awake  
on gyroscopic legs.  

Quiet queues that crave Chai Latte,  
commune on phones with robot thumbs.  
Wired heads are sealed by force-fields  
that keep in the morning dead.  
The shelter tells its guests to go,  
slow limbs dress out of place  
and trace the steps they've come to know,  
handed out with backstreet grace.  
 
Styles hang without conclusion,  
collars fold against the old,  
track suits tuck inside cross trainers,  
while winkles pick Italian soles.  
Traffic fills like grain to silos,  
till the volume stems the flow,  
 
Moving faster watched by time,  
tunnels belch the crowds in lines,  
non-stop feet reveal the smart,  
the tough, the cocky stronger harder stuff,  
the map readers, the pigeon feeders,  
the lunch time sitters, the park keep-fitters,  
the slightly mad, the latest fads  
the single parent working dads,  
the bus riders without a seat,  
all proudly rock to London's beat.
Written by Razzerleaf
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PoeticInjustice
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 21st Nov 2017
Forum Posts: 9

Best Interests

All hail this capitalist perversion.
Where everything has it's price.
Consume it all and don't think twice.
It's all part of the diversion.

So frail, this democratic delusion.
Where people vote to have a voice.
Believing that they have a choice,
But it's all just an illusion.

For sale, is a nation in division.
Where politicians tell their lies,
With hopes that you won't realize
That it's never your decision.

It wont be safe to drink the rain,
Or use the plants from fruited plains.
They'll own the water and the food
And soon enough,
They'll own you too.
Written by PoeticInjustice
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slipalong
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 41awards
Joined 1st Jan 2018
Forum Posts: 822

Broken utopia

The modern gothic withering
 sun that shines, on its pox ridden skin.  
B movie moonlight  
from slightly bent streetlights.  
Patchwork of potholes,  
silently waiting for the unwilling wheel  
the IED that can cripple steel.  
Parading graffiti, artist's fading handle  
long gone, on his BMX bikes saddle,  
like some Chinese lettering  
identity smudged and degrading.  
 
Impudent weeds grabbing a foothold,  
the victory of thorns freehold.  
 Brown rust eked on by the trash cans,  
thoroughfares in desolation and envy,  
Prostitutes and pimps,  
cracked red lanterns glint,  
the ATM where desire lays pinned.  
Clink the lights from the liquor store  
A sign on the church, it hangs  
"Faith is the ever giving hand"  
 chained and padlocked,    
pigeons its only flock.  
 
 Smell of fast food, Doner's stuck on wooden skewers,  
 fat burgs choking Up the sewers.  
Aspirations of the 1970 mall,  
waiting for the wreaking ball.  
Architecture its esteem  
decay, as time worms, its ragged frieze.  
Dirty finger nails of existence,  
and hope, sipped from a brown paper bag.  
Commerce is the grunt and thrust.  
The crumbling edges blurred  
come, black crows that peck the cracking kerb

The ghetto sits like a tattered hobo
just small change in its begging bowl
Written by slipalong
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Northern_Soul
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Tyrant of Words
England 31awards
Joined 10th Jan 2021
Forum Posts: 5601

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_feral
Fire of Insight
United Kingdom 11awards
Joined 23rd Jan 2021
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javalini
Fire of Insight
United States 15awards
Joined 4th Apr 2019
Forum Posts: 201

HERITAGE

windows boarded
and roofs caved in
 
this  town
choked on itself decades ago,
resistance a thorn in its musty craw,
that southern sheen of kindness
hiding a cancer hot and roiling under its pale skin,
its history dark, bloody, and proud
and goddamn if i couldn't feel its sickness
rising through the concrete
and smell it at every turn,
us proud southern boys
still waving our stupid flags
our poor ol' fathers' fathers
shackled by the same strange hubris
willing to die for a planter's cause
thus as much a slave as any
only white,
relishing their privilege
but standing just a hair's breadth
from the whipping post,
a heritage
better forgotten
Written by javalini
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wallyroo92
Tyrant of Words
United States 147awards
Joined 11th July 2012
Forum Posts: 1757

The Throwaways

 
Another block of new luxury homes just went up
As the farms are getting further and further away
And the freeway overpasses are getting pretty large
The city seems to be expanding every single day

The rental buildings around here go on for miles
I’m guessing some folks are raking in a lot of cash
America, one of the richest nations in the world
As I watch the homeless search through the trash

The nice cars pull out of the nicer neighborhoods
While the destitue walk aimlessly in the boulevard
Pushing their carts with all their belongings
Some hungry, some high and some mentally scarred

Somewhere in every city and every town in the nation
Secret labs are cooking up their crank
And the addicts fall deeper into the spiral
While politicians worry more about what’s in their bank

Call it an eyesore, call it sad, it should make you mad
The imbalance in the system is destroying many lives
While homes and buildings go up every single day
The throwaways of society are helplessly trying to survive
Written by wallyroo92
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Calamityofgin
Fire of Insight
United States 5awards
Joined 10th May 2020
Forum Posts: 149

Eureka Springs Arkansas

This one wears  
A Victorian smirk  
Like layers of an uppity bitches petty coat  
 
(Idk if they wore petty coats in the whole Victorian scene, Idc either. This place seems like that, is what I’m saying.)  
 
I cannot imagine  
The resources  
Vs. the undertaking being anything other than ..  
a whole Marie Antoinette kinda vibe  
 
But fuck it’s pretty  
Fuck it gathers them in  
 
All the pedestrian people come to dig the scene  
Get lost in the bricks  
Pry them up with bored and exhausted fingers  
 
I served food to an elderly couple celebrating a 42 year anniversary today and a newly wed couple on their first night out since their baby was born.  
 
I gave both couples Jell-O shots and Sea salt caramel cake on the house.  
The house band was playing Turn the page by Bob Seger.  

 
It was  magical  
 
I let them eat cake  
 
It was magical for them for a moment..  
tomorrow they go home.  
 
To comfort and concrete  
Or dirt roads that seem endless in some God forsaken town, Texarkana or some place where their cousins go noodling (google it, it happens, I’ve done it, it’s terrifying)  or their Moms side of the family is Pentecostal (also a little terrifying)  
 
But the streets are familiar..  
and home.  
And they can recall moments that kinda mattered at every corner.  
 
The corners around me, new to me. And as I described, present an uppity bitch vibe.  
 
I’m finding my home here though  
 
The scene looks hip to me  
 
 
 
Written by Calamityofgin
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