OFFICIAL DUP Glo/NaPoWriMo 2021 Competition
brokentitanium
k.
Forum Posts: 1168
k.
Tyrant of Words
10
Joined 18th Nov 2015Forum Posts: 1168
#16
Suggestions
The suggestion has been made
that I tend to ignore details I find inconvenient
in my naïve pursuit of a better world…
“But what about the future?”
“That’s not how things work.”
“No one thinks that way.”
“We just can’t afford it.”
But I do see details – if they’re important -
I just don’t fabricate imaginary barriers;
so much of what people value
and cling to keep in their half-empty glass
is ultimately meaningless anyway.
The details I choose to see show me
that the better world is already here
for those with the eyes to see it:
in steadfast friends talking eye-to-eye,
in the old country church welcoming refugees,
in the youth, full of compassion and fire for justice,
in the weathered old man feeding hungry birds.
So my counter-suggestion is
that the glass is not half full –
it’s full to the brim and overflowing
with abundant love and grace for all,
if only we have the courage to let it in
and then share with the neighbour beside us.
Suggestions
The suggestion has been made
that I tend to ignore details I find inconvenient
in my naïve pursuit of a better world…
“But what about the future?”
“That’s not how things work.”
“No one thinks that way.”
“We just can’t afford it.”
But I do see details – if they’re important -
I just don’t fabricate imaginary barriers;
so much of what people value
and cling to keep in their half-empty glass
is ultimately meaningless anyway.
The details I choose to see show me
that the better world is already here
for those with the eyes to see it:
in steadfast friends talking eye-to-eye,
in the old country church welcoming refugees,
in the youth, full of compassion and fire for justice,
in the weathered old man feeding hungry birds.
So my counter-suggestion is
that the glass is not half full –
it’s full to the brim and overflowing
with abundant love and grace for all,
if only we have the courage to let it in
and then share with the neighbour beside us.
Sex_on_the_Joe
Joe-D
Forum Posts: 274
Joe-D
Fire of Insight
13
Joined 18th Sep 2018Forum Posts: 274
16/30
Broken
I am chipped,
Worn around the edges
Energy stripped
Tarnished to my liking
My pen is dry
Poor and brittle
Soft, yet smooth
Lacking motivation
My thoughts are overweight
In dire need of exercise
On the fritz of exploding
My eyes fight to stay open
My subconscious is numb
Operating on fumes
Feeding its misery
I can’t shake this slump
Broken
I am chipped,
Worn around the edges
Energy stripped
Tarnished to my liking
My pen is dry
Poor and brittle
Soft, yet smooth
Lacking motivation
My thoughts are overweight
In dire need of exercise
On the fritz of exploding
My eyes fight to stay open
My subconscious is numb
Operating on fumes
Feeding its misery
I can’t shake this slump
Zazzles
Broomie
Forum Posts: 1781
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
24
Joined 23rd Nov 2013Forum Posts: 1781
17/30
NaPo/GloPoWrimo Competition blues
Burnt out, burnt all the way out
Bur________________nt
Ou________________t
just burnt ...
the only thoughts I’m having are second
yup I am, my brain is flat as a pancake
I got no syrup in the house, I am the tin man
I don’t think I care about the trophy
even though it is super cute
i cant go on, i don’t have it in me
this comp, It’s making my brain bleed
but on the other hand, inspired a short story
but im cooked, stick a fork in me
i’m way past well done
63 unique word
90 total words
NaPo/GloPoWrimo Competition blues
Burnt out, burnt all the way out
Bur________________nt
Ou________________t
just burnt ...
the only thoughts I’m having are second
yup I am, my brain is flat as a pancake
I got no syrup in the house, I am the tin man
I don’t think I care about the trophy
even though it is super cute
i cant go on, i don’t have it in me
this comp, It’s making my brain bleed
but on the other hand, inspired a short story
but im cooked, stick a fork in me
i’m way past well done
63 unique word
90 total words
16/30
Reluctant Greenskeeper
Do you think I am unaware
that my wild lawn needs mowing?
or that my straight edges
are partially concealed
by encroaching, creeping
ungoverned grass?
you’re disapproving,
armor piercing glare
screams, get off your ass
and start working!
Be assured
my intentions are pure
for small season
withholding the hungry mower
keeping steel blade
from lush verdant ones
bespangled throughout
with colorful wildflowers
encouraged by rays of Sun
nurtured by Spring showers
Was there some conclave
of ancient landscapers
that sat in judgement of seeds
these will surely yield good plants
those undesirable weeds
Why subject nature’s
breathtaking medley to order
or the spread of new growth
to borders.
Unique words: 96
Reluctant Greenskeeper
Do you think I am unaware
that my wild lawn needs mowing?
or that my straight edges
are partially concealed
by encroaching, creeping
ungoverned grass?
you’re disapproving,
armor piercing glare
screams, get off your ass
and start working!
Be assured
my intentions are pure
for small season
withholding the hungry mower
keeping steel blade
from lush verdant ones
bespangled throughout
with colorful wildflowers
encouraged by rays of Sun
nurtured by Spring showers
Was there some conclave
of ancient landscapers
that sat in judgement of seeds
these will surely yield good plants
those undesirable weeds
Why subject nature’s
breathtaking medley to order
or the spread of new growth
to borders.
Unique words: 96
SatInUGal
Kumar
Forum Posts: 930
Kumar
Dangerous Mind
24
Joined 31st Dec 2015Forum Posts: 930
16/30
STARSHINE
A pale imitation
Embedded in kinetic sand
And putty the kids play with
Or the sparkles on your eyelids
Your sweater and handbag
The day we met
Adornments meant
To draw the eye
And stoke whatever embers
There may be
But I recognize the real stuff
Deeper in your irises
Your pupils
The nigh upon endless
Sand at the beach
The moon on the water
Not the glow of the city
But the holes punched
In the far away sky
Portals to what is
And ever was
STARSHINE
A pale imitation
Embedded in kinetic sand
And putty the kids play with
Or the sparkles on your eyelids
Your sweater and handbag
The day we met
Adornments meant
To draw the eye
And stoke whatever embers
There may be
But I recognize the real stuff
Deeper in your irises
Your pupils
The nigh upon endless
Sand at the beach
The moon on the water
Not the glow of the city
But the holes punched
In the far away sky
Portals to what is
And ever was
Misfitpoet89
Forum Posts: 151
Twisted Dreamer
4
Joined 25th Mar 2018Forum Posts: 151
16/30
No More
Away with you! Get away from my life
Don’t you think you’ve caused me enough fear and strife
You played my emotions and now you want more
If I let myself loose I’ll just settle the score
You haven’t changed your colors though I can see
Trying to hide your words with sugar, sweet as can be
This time I’m smarter, this time I’m wiser
You can’t gaslight me any more with your lies or
Any trick that would have worked on me in the past
Just remember that the last time was the last
Unique words: 68
No More
Away with you! Get away from my life
Don’t you think you’ve caused me enough fear and strife
You played my emotions and now you want more
If I let myself loose I’ll just settle the score
You haven’t changed your colors though I can see
Trying to hide your words with sugar, sweet as can be
This time I’m smarter, this time I’m wiser
You can’t gaslight me any more with your lies or
Any trick that would have worked on me in the past
Just remember that the last time was the last
Unique words: 68
silent_sound
Forum Posts: 49
Twisted Dreamer
1
Joined 21st May 2020Forum Posts: 49
16/30
..there and back..
up above vast stretches of dusty rose quarts
roads of powdered amethyst for as far the eye could see
rivers of moving turquoise
take the zipper and peel it back
exposing a peek into the realm of nebula
a bath in star dust before returning back to the desert
the rocks glowing contrasted by the darkest nights sky
a woman dark hair, red dress, crown of roses
lays a tarot spread
she's on our side
a whale breaches at the dock around the bend
i let all my breath out and sink to middle earth
the alarm clock goes off
wait.. where am i
84 UWC
..there and back..
up above vast stretches of dusty rose quarts
roads of powdered amethyst for as far the eye could see
rivers of moving turquoise
take the zipper and peel it back
exposing a peek into the realm of nebula
a bath in star dust before returning back to the desert
the rocks glowing contrasted by the darkest nights sky
a woman dark hair, red dress, crown of roses
lays a tarot spread
she's on our side
a whale breaches at the dock around the bend
i let all my breath out and sink to middle earth
the alarm clock goes off
wait.. where am i
84 UWC
Thetravelingfairy
Forum Posts: 278
Fire of Insight
14
Joined 12th July 2017 Forum Posts: 278
16/30
Thunderscape
This girl, this beam of bright
As if born of the sun
Could tread where she pleased
Into sand, over moors and grasslands
A perfect landscape
That kept growing faster
With every soft step
Skin of a rose, strands overgrown like ivy
The dye of orchid
Talon nails to mark her territory
No fences, she had zero bounds
If the elements infringed the law
Of blooms she grew, of trees she climbed
Like wind seizes a leaf, there was no chance
Of being tamed
So as the clouds rolled in
As the rain began
She grinned, she laughed
“Let lightning break.”
Her kingdom of light was transformed
Into a hurricane
This was her thunderscape
Thunderscape
This girl, this beam of bright
As if born of the sun
Could tread where she pleased
Into sand, over moors and grasslands
A perfect landscape
That kept growing faster
With every soft step
Skin of a rose, strands overgrown like ivy
The dye of orchid
Talon nails to mark her territory
No fences, she had zero bounds
If the elements infringed the law
Of blooms she grew, of trees she climbed
Like wind seizes a leaf, there was no chance
Of being tamed
So as the clouds rolled in
As the rain began
She grinned, she laughed
“Let lightning break.”
Her kingdom of light was transformed
Into a hurricane
This was her thunderscape
AspergerPoet56
Forum Posts: 1878
Tyrant of Words
30
Joined 4th Dec 2018Forum Posts: 1878
#17 of 30
Modern Biology
those microscopic cells
replicating
multiplying
biological building blocks
genetic coding
every sinew
muscle growing
forming naturally
the wonder of nature
human birth
medical miracles
beyond science's understanding
labs working overtime
for new discoveries
furure cures
mankind against nature's law
prolonging life
fighting diease
creating vaccines
immortality always a step closer
Unique word count 50
Total word count 50
Modern Biology
those microscopic cells
replicating
multiplying
biological building blocks
genetic coding
every sinew
muscle growing
forming naturally
the wonder of nature
human birth
medical miracles
beyond science's understanding
labs working overtime
for new discoveries
furure cures
mankind against nature's law
prolonging life
fighting diease
creating vaccines
immortality always a step closer
Unique word count 50
Total word count 50
Razzerleaf
Forum Posts: 515
Fire of Insight
26
Joined 15th Sep 2019 Forum Posts: 515
17/30
I haven’t got a Cluedo how I got here
Heavy rain washed over the wiper blades
the car juddered to a halt, steam rising
from the radiator like a Roman spa.
As I looked around for any sign of help, lightening
flashed across the silhouette of large
foreboding house set back from the road.
I started the 60-yard dash, coat over my head.
The solid oak of the front door gave a dense thud
as I banged three times. It opened before the fourth
“come in Reverend” said a well-placed butler
“We’ve been expecting you”, I was about to say
you have me mixed up with someone else,
when I saw my reflection in a large ornate mirror,
I run my finger inside the white collar
that had appeared around my neck.
I was ushered into the Library
sat down on an old chesterfield.
“May I take your coat” asked the butler
exchanging if for a large silver dagger.
“My cars broke down” I said in a distant voice
looking at my reflection in the blade.
“Can I introduce you to Mrs. Peacock”
he said as he left the room.
She strutted in, all her finery and
feathers interlaced with her dress,
“hello reverend how lovely to meet you again”,
I saw the candlestick behind her back,
her eyes burning with a dark madness.
In a flash she lunged towards me,
candlestick high above her head.
I instinctively stood up and raised my arms
causing her to run onto the dagger.
Its sharp blade sliding into her torso,
as the madness drained from her eyes
she tried to tell me something.
I collapsed at the sight of blood
and came-round in thin white room
that smelled like a dusty old envelope
with just the dagger and a sign that said Library.
As I scanned the walls, trying to find a door
I began to panic.
I could hear voices outside
giant footsteps each one called out by its number
I could hear names, rooms and weapons
being listed in different orders.
Then someone mentioned the dagger,
its blade glistened as it spun round
standing on its tip in perfect balance.
Next the Library sign jumped to attention
as if waiting for further instruction.
Then I heard the words “Reverend Green”
the paper-thin walls of the room
fell apart in a blinding white light
and I was stood outside again
back with my car in the pouring rain
blood dripping from my shaking hands.
I haven’t got a Cluedo how I got here
Heavy rain washed over the wiper blades
the car juddered to a halt, steam rising
from the radiator like a Roman spa.
As I looked around for any sign of help, lightening
flashed across the silhouette of large
foreboding house set back from the road.
I started the 60-yard dash, coat over my head.
The solid oak of the front door gave a dense thud
as I banged three times. It opened before the fourth
“come in Reverend” said a well-placed butler
“We’ve been expecting you”, I was about to say
you have me mixed up with someone else,
when I saw my reflection in a large ornate mirror,
I run my finger inside the white collar
that had appeared around my neck.
I was ushered into the Library
sat down on an old chesterfield.
“May I take your coat” asked the butler
exchanging if for a large silver dagger.
“My cars broke down” I said in a distant voice
looking at my reflection in the blade.
“Can I introduce you to Mrs. Peacock”
he said as he left the room.
She strutted in, all her finery and
feathers interlaced with her dress,
“hello reverend how lovely to meet you again”,
I saw the candlestick behind her back,
her eyes burning with a dark madness.
In a flash she lunged towards me,
candlestick high above her head.
I instinctively stood up and raised my arms
causing her to run onto the dagger.
Its sharp blade sliding into her torso,
as the madness drained from her eyes
she tried to tell me something.
I collapsed at the sight of blood
and came-round in thin white room
that smelled like a dusty old envelope
with just the dagger and a sign that said Library.
As I scanned the walls, trying to find a door
I began to panic.
I could hear voices outside
giant footsteps each one called out by its number
I could hear names, rooms and weapons
being listed in different orders.
Then someone mentioned the dagger,
its blade glistened as it spun round
standing on its tip in perfect balance.
Next the Library sign jumped to attention
as if waiting for further instruction.
Then I heard the words “Reverend Green”
the paper-thin walls of the room
fell apart in a blinding white light
and I was stood outside again
back with my car in the pouring rain
blood dripping from my shaking hands.
Josh
Joshua Bond
Forum Posts: 1748
Joshua Bond
Tyrant of Words
40
Joined 2nd Feb 2017Forum Posts: 1748
17/30
FIRST ROAD
There is a window staring back at me …
from before I was born it sat and watched
how I bargained with the elder tree
for lessons easier learned … later scotched
down the road in earth’s physic dimension
the question of illness loomed on the scene,
that pin-prick which grabs all your attention
in an illusion — but what does it mean?
Then starts the bargaining with God and let’s
not pretend illusions can’t be scary,
we make rash promises and tangled bets
in fear of life … death — the ordinary
Is it about those left behind, alone,
their onward soul-journeys when you are gone?
FIRST ROAD
There is a window staring back at me …
from before I was born it sat and watched
how I bargained with the elder tree
for lessons easier learned … later scotched
down the road in earth’s physic dimension
the question of illness loomed on the scene,
that pin-prick which grabs all your attention
in an illusion — but what does it mean?
Then starts the bargaining with God and let’s
not pretend illusions can’t be scary,
we make rash promises and tangled bets
in fear of life … death — the ordinary
Is it about those left behind, alone,
their onward soul-journeys when you are gone?
Anonymous
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17/30
BALANCE BEAMS
Trying to stay steady on rocky balance beams
Many of days it feels like I'm losing my steam
Never dreamed that living a be so challenging
Taking body blows and head shots in the ring
Waiting for the bell's ding to bring me rest
From fighting but I'm standing up to the test
Some things I can't digest or even consume
Like police killings sending many to their tomb
Gloom and doom keeps hovering in the clouds
The sounds are deafening and extremely loud
But I'm still sticking around until my time is up
May get knocked down a bit but I'm no chump
BALANCE BEAMS
Trying to stay steady on rocky balance beams
Many of days it feels like I'm losing my steam
Never dreamed that living a be so challenging
Taking body blows and head shots in the ring
Waiting for the bell's ding to bring me rest
From fighting but I'm standing up to the test
Some things I can't digest or even consume
Like police killings sending many to their tomb
Gloom and doom keeps hovering in the clouds
The sounds are deafening and extremely loud
But I'm still sticking around until my time is up
May get knocked down a bit but I'm no chump
JohnnyBlaze
Forum Posts: 5573
Tyrant of Words
23
Joined 20th Mar 2015Forum Posts: 5573
EPISODE 17/30
The Nasty Ghoulies inchwormed there way up side of the Musty Mountain, flaming swords in hand. DUGlo, Satin, and the Dark Knight feverishly climbed higher.
In desperation, DUGlo reached for The One Poem ™ hanging from the neck chain tucked underneath his shirt. He seriously considered reading it aloud. Was not the power to tell the Poemwraiths to Back off! at his very fingertips? Would he not become their Master ..?
"Don't you even think about it!" said Satin Gamjeez. "The Poem is pure EVIL!"
"He's right," said the Dark Knight. "The satisfaction of having that power will only be fleeting. Then it will turn your brain into a poe-tayter-tot! Only MOAR!ON is capable of weilding the wretched thing."
DUGlo sighed, reaching for a cliff rock instead. They retreated further up the mountainside, but soon would be able to climb no higher without being seen by the Eye of DUPon!
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
Larry the Werebadger was about to reach into the waterlogged cell for the first handful of Dwarves to become appetizers when a lone, miniature Donkey strolled in from the woods. It was garnished with a pair of tasty looking Frogs duct taped to its saddle!
"Ohh!" exclaimed bucktoothed Barry. "I call dibbles on the Froggies!"
But when he reached for the panic stricken duo, John Ronald bolted between his hairy legs. Harry shoved his cousin aside and chased the Donkey around the cauldron to no avail until he was out of breath. Smuggle and Duggle were queasy with motion sickness.
No matter how hard the Werebeasts tried, they could not get their clawed paws on the Frogs. John Ronald was too quick and clever for them. And then a curious thing happened as the sun came up: they turned back into the little Animal-Folks they were normally were during daylight hours! Off into the woods scampered Badger, Beaver, and Groundhog.
"Whatever in the world did you whisper to the Donkey?" asked Ahavarwen.
"I only told him to find the Dwarves," replied Jaragorn. "I never expected him to act like such an ass."
Everyone cheered! at their sudden change of fortune, until the reality that they were still imprisoned settled in. The Frog brothers were still duct taped, leaving the Fellowshippers to a fate of hypothermia.
Twenty minutes of brainstorming up an escape to no avail passed when an Ent named Treenuts walked by. He stopped dead in his tracks, horrified at what he saw.
"Many of these trees were my friends!" he cried out in anguish and began tearing apart the dam with his bare branchy hands. Or were they handsy branches ..? "A Werebeaver should know better!"
"Everyone, hold onto your butts!" shouted PRadriel as the swelled up river was suddenly unleashed upon the hillside.
JohnnyBlaze
Forum Posts: 5573
Tyrant of Words
23
Joined 20th Mar 2015Forum Posts: 5573
17/30
[ Dreamscapes And Nightmares ] One Person's Trash . . .
We see our slumbering selves
as wheeled vehicles with parking
brakes applied going nowhere
nothing being accomplished
Problems are as if bank accounts
compounding interest all the while
devil's work is done by idle hands
Solutions to simple and complex
situations presenting themselves
in your dreams often overlooked
for two reasons:
nightly, you don't invest
a few minutes insisting
you will recall what is dreamt
daily, you do deposit
another garbage truck load
of fresh thoughts to contend with
into the vault
The only thing for certain is
you've a wealth of poetry
at your disposal
[ Dreamscapes And Nightmares ] One Person's Trash . . .
We see our slumbering selves
as wheeled vehicles with parking
brakes applied going nowhere
nothing being accomplished
Problems are as if bank accounts
compounding interest all the while
devil's work is done by idle hands
Solutions to simple and complex
situations presenting themselves
in your dreams often overlooked
for two reasons:
nightly, you don't invest
a few minutes insisting
you will recall what is dreamt
daily, you do deposit
another garbage truck load
of fresh thoughts to contend with
into the vault
The only thing for certain is
you've a wealth of poetry
at your disposal