Poetry competition CLOSED 6th March 2021 12:43pm
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slipalong
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RUNNERS-UP: anna_grin and The_Silly_Sibyl

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Grace
Grace
Idryad
Guardian of Shadows
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cloventongue89 thank you for your entry.

slipalong
slipalong
Fire of Insight
United Kingdom
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A posy of lavender

Come rescue me, find in me a troubadour
a verse upon the strings of lute
an apparition rise and be disposed
and clothed so pure without dispute
 
The gilded lark to reach her ear
and carry my proposal in its beak
just for love, lovelorn in despair  
lavender its power so unique
 
Vain hope to clutch at empty straw
will she grasp the posy that I toss
the beating heart wings so it soars
or will the shutter close, and all be loss
 
Hold the herbs of love close to her nose
in frame and glass its picture plain  
its essence gain a foothold in her soul
melt her image, haughty, caught in bold distain
 
My couplets ring and be sublime  
repeat my song how many times
the taste the pleasure of her kiss  
not vinegar but wine, if I persist
 
will she use semaphore, guess my demands
colour of her robes will I see revealed  
a dress of red or blue so cortisaine
or virgin white, as I gasp relieved
 
Written by slipalong
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Leethal
Leethal
Lee Melvin Jr.
Lost Thinker
United States
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YoUturn two sender... Unrequited love challenge

Pomp and spin Circumstance;
Stomp stamP ENd circumstance
Know She abused sew Lee accused the muse of "unrequited love"
 She could careless less much two hushhhh one quiet love...
 Why get hug width the pats on the back..?
Eye'm knot the Patriot's Brady oar the patriach's baby sew what's that?!?
You perp trying two burp me or hurt me..?
Maybe this just is my justice desserts that's why my baby just did desert me on a dusty desert
eYE LLand solo spacious bro show Oasis

*Show faces faces opposite

tHE LLast man voted on the eYE LLand
I guest eYE'LL cop a sit; plop a shit; cop a bic then drop a quick "Dear Joan" letter topic two whoever better kneeds two read this butt never ever receive this before we leave kiss of bliss or death two a salesman or a male man who actuallee handles the mail man...

*Leethal reshapes the words he recreates then unfolds them out of the trash pale can then makes a pelican end the shape of origami verses versus poor big dummy curses fore the crash test dummy courses of course id's inside jokes; sin lied folks
know Facebook win space took
*pen hide pokes; then pride chokes
eyE Dew is wed ed backwards
Run-a-WEIGH Train on twin bride spoke track words
Multiple cracks heard that curvEd her midnight train two Georgia on my miiind
Oval tracks or noble facts
Or duh on my line
Rescending sublime
Resending; rub rhyme
Dub Mi'mE
Enter;
kNOW ear two lend her
Of "stay girl!"
Love Playgirl Playdough parts
eYE Pretender untiL EyE bend her
Broken💔he/art threw blender
Go fuck myself<>knew gender
Ewww burn 🔥
True render
YoUturn two sender...
Pad mess;
Add dress eye DOn't reMEmber
Had stress bleeding sea hues
Ass read spread
Leaving me clues; grieving B. B.LUEs
Faking soft; butt Breaking off tree, free dead plumbs
Shaking
*coUGH
LEaving mE bread crumB.S....
Head cums win the lead drums...
Looking intwo mirrors dead sees REaD sees "Redrums"
Lead strums from sum smaller 🎻 violin...
The more ex-whore explore next door;
The Taller eye flow pen
Sly show grin width know zipcode win my drip flowed and eye rip ode
Know address butt no add dress
Shaped lead naked truth; fly stripped clothes...
Lipped oaths dipped in mythed codes
Her phonics don't have to flaunt it she's hooked on platonics like my page write is plagued like bubonic like you don't want bic; knew "Chronic"
Just a critic picked quick fore the "friend zone"
Her grin styled a thin smile been shown
I guess that fake hate make us "penpals" eye guest you'll miss me win this pen gone...


Leethal 2.6.2021


~~✂~~Cutting Room Floor~~✂~~~

Know fire and desire; sun sea fry it; FUCK!
Gun see riot; thug...
Hun; she fight it cause she got this
Unrequited love...
Nun rewrite it lust; sum see lighted bug

Smug ass a slug in a jug like Mason Jar
Facin' star like night end day spacin' far
Pen Stains insane pains; membrane the same on drugs
Ink fills my quills win shrink steals my feels

One man's garbage is won man's garage if you drop the "B"
Her luggage now her baggage; sew deep she mop the see

YoUturn sea two journ knee two sender
Written by Leethal (Lee Melvin Jr.)
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Idryad
Guardian of Shadows
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slipalong, thank you for your entry.

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Idryad
Guardian of Shadows
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I wish to thank all the participants in this competition for your brilliant works. I had a hard time determining the winners. As usual I have roped in other non-DU people to help and they have graciously done so, and these are the results.
1 A posy of lavender by Slipalong
2. set you free (come back to me) by Anna_grin
3. Unrequited by The_Silly_Sibyl
Thank you again for bestowing me the honour of reading your poems and please be with me again in my next competition.

anna_grin
anna_grin
ilchruthach
Dangerous Mind
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mate well done

still think mine was better 🤫

slipalong
slipalong
Fire of Insight
United Kingdom
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well maybee  if you judge, others thought otherwise: A feather least expected against high quality, numerous entries Respect SLIP

dizzzzzzy
dizzzzzzy
Nunaya
Dangerous Mind
United States
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