Poetry competition CLOSED 25th February 2021 10:07pm
WINNER
Anonymous
Anonymous
RUNNERS-UP:
wallyroo92
and Razzerleaf
Through New Eyes
Just_Me_
Joined 2nd Feb 2021
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Lost Thinker
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Poetry Contest Description
I am hoping for light hearted new insight that causes a smile. Write about if you were an insect/ bug , how life may be. Experiences, smells, and feelings for example.. It would be nice if you choose an insect by using the third letter of your name..
Just have fun...
Enjoy..
I'm excited!!
Enjoy..
I'm excited!!
Anonymous
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Just_Me_
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Lost Thinker
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I really love the way you created your title... Clever
Anonymous
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Just_Me_
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Lost Thinker
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Thank you!! Adventurous!
Razzerleaf
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Fire of Insight
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(ke 'I' th).........Imago
The cocoon burst too soon,
from a leaf-hung grip I slipped,
snatched as an adult,
wet winged on a blighted breeze,
flightless over summer gardens,
color clinging to a sugar-stealers drift.
He found me touching tips of coupled bliss,
then left me to lay patterns on lush, low leaves.
They will age as an idea of hunger
while I sip moisture and dream of
drinking nectar with the gods.
from a leaf-hung grip I slipped,
snatched as an adult,
wet winged on a blighted breeze,
flightless over summer gardens,
color clinging to a sugar-stealers drift.
He found me touching tips of coupled bliss,
then left me to lay patterns on lush, low leaves.
They will age as an idea of hunger
while I sip moisture and dream of
drinking nectar with the gods.
Written by Razzerleaf
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wallyroo92
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Tyrant of Words
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Joined 11th July 2012Forum Posts: 1867
Interview with a Leaf Mantis
David: I’m David Attenborough
and today we will be conducting
an interview with a Leaf Mantis
Leaf Mantis: Thank you for having me
By the way, I loved you in Star Wars
David: That was Sir Alec Guinness
Leaf Mantis: Oh, Sorry
I loved you in Bridge On The River Kwai
David: That was a young Alec Guinness
And he passed away some time ago
Leaf Mantis: My condolences
David: We were not related
Leaf Mantis: Oh, but I loved you in Jurassic Park
David: That was my brother Richard
Leaf Mantis: The Great Escape?
David: That was also my brother Richard
When he was young and he’s passed away too
Leaf Mantis: I must get my five eyes checked
My condolences
David: Thank you
Leaf Mantis: So where do I know you from?
David: Well, I have done dozens of documentaries
on nature and the planet. I studied Natural Sciences
At Cambridge and have travelled the world to meet
creatures like you. But this interview is about you
and your interesting species.
Leaf Mantis (blushing): Oh Geez, thanks Mr. Attenborough
What would you like to know?
David: Well, I think our viewers would be curious
in knowing in what goes on in the daily life of a Leaf Mantis
Leaf Mantis: So you want me to tell you about my life?
David: Yes, that is what I do, I collect the stories of
the animal kingdom and they are shown on the BBC
Leaf Mantis: I think you’ll need a lot of video tape
David: We do everything digital now so we have
plenty of recording material so that’s not a problem
Leaf Mantis: You followed me to this tree
David: I supposed we did, the camera crew saw you
and we thought you were interesting,
is this tree where you live?
Leaf Mantis: No, it’s just a tree
But I was waiting for you on this tree
I was watching you watching me
Then you began to speak
David: Well lucky for me
Leaf Mantis: Perhaps lucky for both of us
David: You said you were waiting for me
Wait, are you? Did we just recite the lines to
Interview with a Vampire?
Leaf Mantis: Haha, you caught me David
I was just messing with you
David: So Mantises have a sense of humor
Leaf Mantis: Yes David, we do
But what I said about me waiting for you
in the tree, it’s really true
This green camouflage let’s me hide
amidst the plants to catch my prey
David: Fascinating
Leaf Mantis: But I just like to chill and wait
Watch the other insects pass and fly by
because most of the time they don’t notice me
but that’s OK, because I got me a date
David: A Date?
Leaf Mantis: Yeah. See I don’t really get out much
but I heard there is this girl mantis
who lives a couple of trees from here
I heard the girl is a freak
So I can’t wait to go out with her later today
David: But…
Leaf Mantis: Yeah, she got that butt too you know
a couple of my other friends went out with her
but I haven’t seen them in a while
so, it just means there’s more of me for her
If you know what I’m sayin’
David: Yes, however…
Leaf Mantis: Look David, I know that the life-span
of you humans is like eternal compared to us Mantises
but this girl Mantis is like hot to trot and I can’t wait
so, I’ma cut this interview short but thank you for stopping by
Just let me know when your BBC special airs
so I can watch myself
maybe you can even record me in action
If you know what I’m sayin’
Talk to ya’ll later
Peace!
David (to his crew): Someone should tell him
David (to the camera): This has been
An Interview with a Leaf Mantis
for A Perfect Planet, I’m David Attenborough
Good Night
Written by wallyroo92
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slipalong
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Dangerous Mind
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Viceroy butterfly (daVid)
For my pretence the grandiose
my wings to spread
in hues to match the undergrowth
in autumn shades
For the less well informed
mistaken for an admiral
a lepidoptera shrunk or just deformed
summers short days do fly
When in the earth as chrysalis curled
just like a teenager, lied in bed
escape the cold and winters snows
awaiting spring, transformed in that advent
The junk food of a cow pat
my elegance survived intact
a willow leaf where raindrops sat
my perch; your glance not pass me by
Wings of orange marked with black
the briefest dance
enchantment all of my life so span
the promenade its wish and song
Harlequin of the senses
my wings to spread
in hues to match the undergrowth
in autumn shades
For the less well informed
mistaken for an admiral
a lepidoptera shrunk or just deformed
summers short days do fly
When in the earth as chrysalis curled
just like a teenager, lied in bed
escape the cold and winters snows
awaiting spring, transformed in that advent
The junk food of a cow pat
my elegance survived intact
a willow leaf where raindrops sat
my perch; your glance not pass me by
Wings of orange marked with black
the briefest dance
enchantment all of my life so span
the promenade its wish and song
Harlequin of the senses
Written by slipalong
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Ljdynamic
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Dangerous Mind
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Joined 18th Aug 2017Forum Posts: 374
Well shoot. Looks like I missed it by 10 minutes. This was an interesting competition.
Anonymous
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Just_Me_
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Lost Thinker
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Thank you!
Razzerleaf
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Fire of Insight
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Joined 15th Sep 2019 Forum Posts: 525
Well done everyone, I have enjoyed reading all the submissions, special thanks to just_me_ for letting us lay the eggs, and big congrats to RiAN for the winning poem.
Ljdynamic
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Dangerous Mind
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Congrats RiAN.
MimiDi
Mimi Di
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Mimi Di
Strange Creature
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Ants! I love this. I makes me want to paint something to go along with your words
wallyroo92
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Tyrant of Words
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Joined 11th July 2012Forum Posts: 1867
Congrats to RiAN on the win and to Razzerleaf for runner up. Thank you to our host for the honorable mention. It was certainly a fun and interesting competition.
Hope everyone is well.
Hope everyone is well.