Poetry competition CLOSED 25th February 2021 10:07pm
WINNER
Anonymous
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RUNNERS-UP: wallyroo92 and Razzerleaf

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Through New Eyes

Just_Me_
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 2nd Feb 2021
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Poetry Contest

I am hoping for light hearted new insight that causes a smile. Write about if you were an insect/ bug , how life may be. Experiences, smells, and feelings for example.. It would be nice if you choose an insect by using the third letter of your name..
Just have fun...
Enjoy..
I'm excited!!

poet Anonymous

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Just_Me_
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 2nd Feb 2021
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I really love the way you created your title... Clever

poet Anonymous

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Just_Me_
Lost Thinker
United States
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Thank you!! Adventurous!

Razzerleaf
Fire of Insight
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(ke 'I' th).........Imago

The cocoon burst too soon,
from a leaf-hung  grip I slipped,  
snatched as an adult,  
wet winged on a blighted breeze,  
flightless over summer gardens,  
color clinging to a sugar-stealers drift.  
He found me touching tips of coupled bliss,  
then left me to lay patterns on lush, low leaves.  
They will age as an idea of hunger  
while I sip moisture and dream of    
drinking nectar with the gods.  
Written by Razzerleaf
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wallyroo92
Tyrant of Words
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Interview with a Leaf Mantis

 
David: I’m David Attenborough
and today we will be conducting  
an interview with a Leaf Mantis
 
Leaf Mantis: Thank you for having me
By the way, I loved you in Star Wars
 
David: That was Sir Alec Guinness

Leaf Mantis: Oh, Sorry
I loved you in Bridge On The River Kwai
 
David: That was a young Alec Guinness
And he passed away some time ago
 
Leaf Mantis: My condolences
 
David: We were not related
 
Leaf Mantis: Oh, but I loved you in Jurassic Park
 
David: That was my brother Richard
 
Leaf Mantis: The Great Escape?
 
David: That was also my brother Richard
When he was young and he’s passed away too
 
Leaf Mantis: I must get my five eyes checked
My condolences
 
David: Thank you  
 
Leaf Mantis: So where do I know you from?
 
David: Well, I have done dozens of documentaries
on nature and the planet. I studied Natural Sciences
At Cambridge and have travelled the world to meet
creatures like you. But this interview is about you
and your interesting species.
 
Leaf Mantis (blushing): Oh Geez, thanks Mr. Attenborough
What would you like to know?
 
David: Well, I think our viewers would be curious
in knowing in what goes on in the daily life of a Leaf Mantis
 
Leaf Mantis: So you want me to tell you about my life?
 
David: Yes, that is what I do, I collect the stories of
the animal kingdom and they are shown on the BBC
 
Leaf Mantis: I think you’ll need a lot of video tape
 
David: We do everything digital now so we have
plenty of recording material so that’s not a problem
 
Leaf Mantis: You followed me to this tree
 
David: I supposed we did, the camera crew saw you
and we thought you were interesting,
is this tree where you live?
 
Leaf Mantis: No, it’s just a tree
But I was waiting for you on this tree
I was watching you watching me
Then you began to speak
 
David: Well lucky for me
 
Leaf Mantis: Perhaps lucky for both of us
 
David: You said you were waiting for me
Wait, are you? Did we just recite the lines to
Interview with a Vampire?
 
Leaf Mantis: Haha, you caught me David
I was just messing with you
 
David: So Mantises have a sense of humor
 
Leaf Mantis: Yes David, we do
But what I said about me waiting for you
in the tree, it’s really true
This green camouflage let’s me hide  
amidst the plants to catch my prey
 
David: Fascinating
 
Leaf Mantis: But I just like to chill and wait
Watch the other insects pass and fly by
because most of the time they don’t notice me
but that’s OK, because I got me a date  
 
David: A Date?
 
Leaf Mantis: Yeah. See I don’t really get out much
but I heard there is this girl mantis
who lives a couple of trees from here
I heard the girl is a freak
So I can’t wait to go out with her later today
 
David: But…
 
Leaf Mantis: Yeah, she got that butt too you know
a couple of my other friends went out with her
but I haven’t seen them in a while
so, it just means there’s more of me for her
If you know what I’m sayin’
 
David: Yes, however…
 
Leaf Mantis: Look David, I know that the life-span
of you humans is like eternal compared to us Mantises
but this girl Mantis is like hot to trot and I can’t wait
so, I’ma cut this interview short but thank you for stopping by
Just let me know when your BBC special airs  
so I can watch myself
maybe you can even record me in action
If you know what I’m sayin’
Talk to ya’ll later
Peace!
 
David (to his crew): Someone should tell him
 
David (to the camera): This has been  
An Interview with a Leaf Mantis
for A Perfect Planet, I’m David Attenborough
Good Night
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slipalong
Dangerous Mind
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Viceroy butterfly  (daVid)

For my pretence the grandiose
my wings to spread
in hues to match the undergrowth
in autumn shades

For the less well informed
mistaken for an admiral
a lepidoptera shrunk or just deformed
summers short days do fly

When in the earth as chrysalis curled
just like a teenager, lied in bed
escape the cold and winters snows
awaiting spring, transformed in that advent

The junk food of a cow pat
my elegance survived intact
a willow leaf where raindrops sat
my perch; your glance not pass me by

Wings of orange marked with black
the briefest dance
enchantment all of my life so span
the promenade its wish and song

Harlequin of the senses
Written by slipalong
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Ljdynamic
Dangerous Mind
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Well shoot.  Looks like I missed it by 10 minutes.  This was an interesting competition.

poet Anonymous

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Just_Me_
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 2nd Feb 2021
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Thank you!

Razzerleaf
Fire of Insight
United Kingdom 27awards
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Well done everyone, I have enjoyed reading all the submissions, special thanks to just_me_ for letting us lay the eggs, and big congrats to RiAN for the winning poem.

Ljdynamic
Dangerous Mind
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Congrats RiAN.

MimiDi
Mimi Di
Strange Creature
United States
Joined 26th Feb 2021
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Ants! I love this. I makes me want to paint something to go along with your words

wallyroo92
Tyrant of Words
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Forum Posts: 1867

Congrats to RiAN on the win and to Razzerleaf for runner up. Thank you to our host for the honorable mention. It was certainly a fun and interesting competition.

Hope everyone is well.

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