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angry women

anna_grin
ANNAN
Dangerous Mind
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thank you kitkat and lj!

Valeriyabeyond
Dhyana
Dangerous Mind
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Ballistic Therapy

Dark scales sloughing off
the edge of my skull
Bloody remnants of the cold
hard steel you used to bash
through bone and brain matter
  
"I love you" the words that
came from your lying tongue  

Pressed against pink stucco
my face pitted scratched with
bits of gravel  

The easy way is your choice
 barrel pressed against the
back of my head as you cock  
your weapon  
  
Surprised--? as I take the barrell
holding  it to my forehead  "
 "look me in the eye" I say as
  you whipped my brains with
 its butt  

Blood pooling in the sand  
around my feet  
I feel like running  
As I begin to float  
Watching , falling  
back into myself I  see  blood
dripping  off my forehead  

I'm not afraid to die  
 
Written by Valeriyabeyond (Dhyana)
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anna_grin
ANNAN
Dangerous Mind
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fanbloodytastic val, we love to see it x

poetrician
Fire of Insight
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for angry Women

have i not apologized for my sex?
alpha, beta, omegas alike
please let me then take on your scowls
your tattered patience tested for ages
before Betty could alter
and preach Mystique
before Suffrage gave its first step to voices  
for which the universe is in such thirst
 
one moment at a time
my eyes downward
ego between legs
ears laid out flat across the land you traverse
let me hear your pulse
as your rhythm picks up speed
and your will
like mass applying its force
runs over our delusions so grand
we nearly drowned in our own pursuits
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anna_grin
ANNAN
Dangerous Mind
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thank you poetrician x

Valeriyabeyond
Dhyana
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The Flim Flam Man

 
Your persuasive stranglehold  
attaches , like a supplement
your psychological manipulation
derived from hell, its intention  
to intimidate  and confuse me,
the offshoot  of a mind fuck.

Your eyes,  show sick seedy
satisfaction at the sight of  my conformity
Skill and cunning from dark energy hangs , as if necessary for my survival
like a parasitic strand,
Again it  transforms mutates
dilutes me into a foul crumpled
 insipid person
 
This undying intention I have
To rid you of your torment
boils  inside me like an instrument
of death
It Dupes me like a cretin
As  I fall for you once again.
 
 
Written by Valeriyabeyond (Dhyana)
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anna_grin
ANNAN
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thank you val, too much empathy is a killer x

anna_grin
ANNAN
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would anyone like critique on their entries after closing, and how gentle or rough do you like it? x

poetrician
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uh yeah that would be incredible - i like it rough haha. no, i like it as it comes.

anna_grin
ANNAN
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poetrician said:uh yeah that would be incredible - i like it rough haha. no, i like it as it comes.

i feel ya I’m usually just happy to be included second question would you like it public or private?

oh no what have I said... typical

poetrician
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very easy to embarrass me...(im one of those sensitive types) how about private with no holds barred?

anna_grin
ANNAN
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done and done x

poetrician
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thank you i look forward to it!

anna_grin
ANNAN
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ew double post

Magdalena
Spartalena
Tyrant of Words
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another from the archives, true story...

simpleton

sorry to say no, but what makes you think
that you're so special that my no, doesn't really mean no
and you keep on like I'm not even talking
all you hear is yourself, without really hearing yourself
because if you were hearing yourself, you would shut the fuck up

stinking of booze and sleaze, you at my door
you hanging over the balcony calling my name
almost every time I step outside, like a shadow I can't shake off
like a creep up my spine, cold and spiky
too arrogant to even realise-
when I am running, I'm running from you

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