Triolet
DaisyGrace
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Dangerous Mind
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Joined 29th Mar 2017Forum Posts: 1365
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Magdalena
Spartalena
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Spartalena
Tyrant of Words
62
Joined 21st Apr 2012Forum Posts: 2993
I wasn't happy with my entry, so I edited it a little and tightened up the syllable count, as I found it a bit bumpy when reading. I hope it's okay to alter it after entered.
The_Silly_Sibyl
Jack Thomas
Forum Posts: 687
Jack Thomas
Fire of Insight
2
Joined 30th July 2015Forum Posts: 687
Still 11 days to go, guys!
MadameLavender
Forum Posts: 5598
Guardian of Shadows
87
Joined 17th Feb 2013Forum Posts: 5598
The Pause
Heaven paused and held its breath,
the Warrior stood to draw his bow
and sighted on the certain death ;
Heaven paused and held its breath.
The arrow sails, the foe's bereft--
for what they've reaped, is what they've sown.
Heaven paused and held its breath,
the Warrior stood to draw his bow.
O' hearken now, these words of woe,
the prophets' words upon the land;
the Red Sea swallowed Pharoah, whole,
O' hearken now , these words of woe.
The passage 'twixt the waves did show
a narrow road upon dry sand--
O' hearken now, these words of woe,
the prophets' words upon the land .
Heaven paused, the time is nigh,
the Warrior felled the Prince of Air.
Glory to the God most high,
the passage 'twixt the waves was dry,
the Promised Land, beholden, fair.
Heaven paused, the time is nigh,
the Warrior felled the Prince of Air.
the Warrior stood to draw his bow
and sighted on the certain death ;
Heaven paused and held its breath.
The arrow sails, the foe's bereft--
for what they've reaped, is what they've sown.
Heaven paused and held its breath,
the Warrior stood to draw his bow.
O' hearken now, these words of woe,
the prophets' words upon the land;
the Red Sea swallowed Pharoah, whole,
O' hearken now , these words of woe.
The passage 'twixt the waves did show
a narrow road upon dry sand--
O' hearken now, these words of woe,
the prophets' words upon the land .
Heaven paused, the time is nigh,
the Warrior felled the Prince of Air.
Glory to the God most high,
the passage 'twixt the waves was dry,
the Promised Land, beholden, fair.
Heaven paused, the time is nigh,
the Warrior felled the Prince of Air.
Written by MadameLavender
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The_Silly_Sibyl
Jack Thomas
Forum Posts: 687
Jack Thomas
Fire of Insight
2
Joined 30th July 2015Forum Posts: 687
Thanks for your entry, MadamL!
Northern_Soul
-Missy-
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-Missy-
Tyrant of Words
32
Joined 10th Jan 2021 Forum Posts: 5732
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Zazzles
Broomie
Forum Posts: 1781
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 23rd Nov 2013Forum Posts: 1781
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wallyroo92
Forum Posts: 1794
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 11th July 2012Forum Posts: 1794
Red, Blue and White
When red symbolizes passion, anger, danger and fire
Blue signifies cool, wisdom, stability and serenity
One glows hot like war and desire
When red symbolizes passion, anger, danger and fire
It can cause chaos to confuse and conspire
Losing the purpose of identity and integrity
When red symbolizes passion, anger, danger and fire
Blue signifies cool, wisdom, stability and serenity
In the struggle to maintain a true and fair democracy
Some secretly connive to achieve more power
They spread lies to establish an autocracy
In the struggle to maintain a true and fair democracy
They spread a venom throughout the bureaucracy
Hoping that the masses will grovel and cower
In the struggle to maintain a true and fair democracy
Some secretly connive to get more power
In the search for healing, decency, unity and peace
The truth will come out and shine a light
Though some will not quit or won’t cease
In the search for healing, decency, unity and peace
For some their hatred becomes a disease
They’ll fight and not see the flag also has white
In the search for healing, decency, unity and peace
The truth will come out and shine a light
Written by wallyroo92
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The_Silly_Sibyl
Jack Thomas
Forum Posts: 687
Jack Thomas
Fire of Insight
2
Joined 30th July 2015Forum Posts: 687
This was a tough one to judge and really the winner and two runners-up were as good as each other, so I went with javalini just because his entry gave me a chuckle. And I could relate to it as someone who hates deadlines
Thanks for all your entries tho, it's been a pleasure reading through them.
Thanks for all your entries tho, it's been a pleasure reading through them.
Zazzles
Broomie
Forum Posts: 1781
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
24
Joined 23rd Nov 2013Forum Posts: 1781
Congratulations to Javalin 👍🏻 and the runner ups.
Thanks for a fun competition Silly.
Thanks for a fun competition Silly.
Northern_Soul
-Missy-
Forum Posts: 5732
-Missy-
Tyrant of Words
32
Joined 10th Jan 2021 Forum Posts: 5732
Cheers for the runner up Congrats to all.
Magdalena
Spartalena
Forum Posts: 2993
Spartalena
Tyrant of Words
62
Joined 21st Apr 2012Forum Posts: 2993
Congrats winner and runners up. Great stuff.
DaisyGrace
Forum Posts: 1365
Dangerous Mind
17
Joined 29th Mar 2017Forum Posts: 1365
Thanks for the runner up spot! There were lots of good entry! Congratulations Javalini! And well done all!