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Technology and the Human Condition

Razzerleaf
Razzerleaf
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Ghost in the Binary

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Josh
Josh
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Thank you Blackwolf and Razzerleaf for your interesting entries to the technology comp.

snugglebuck
snugglebuck
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Artificial Existence

On my holodeck overlooking my hologram garden I shared a glass of synthetic wine with Synthia, my charming cyborg significant other.
Everything was beautiful and so wonderfully peaceful till the great Prime-Optim super computer crashed.  When suddenly I found my manufactured heaven reduced to an oxygen starved world called, Abaddon.

Josh
Josh
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Portugal
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Thank you snugglebuck for for an interesting entry into the technology comp.

Vamps
Vamps
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United Kingdom
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If i were there

If I were sitting  
Amongst forests  
Misted and mosses  
Wearing my skin  
And my soul  

Sitting in stillness'  
Call of  
First beliefs  
Hearing and heard  
Seeing and sighted  
By truth in green of  
Every shade  

If that were me  
Nested near and  
Telling to no man  
Only a listener of  
Honesty in  
Realness and tree bark  
 
Me and meanderings  
River and rock  
Walled only by clear  
And crystal roar  
Curtained quenching  
Poured into my  
Inner moment  
 
If that were me  
I would rejoice  
And dance a  
Spirited and celebratory  
Scene  
Feather wearing and  
Clay clad in  
Reds and earthy  
Wholeness  
 
I would sing to  
Myself and say  
An ever joyful song  
Repeating and  
Believing in all  
That held before  
And beneath me  
 
But  
I am not there  
I am here  
 
Concrete beneath  
My feet  
Walls of blocked  
Seclusion  
Barred and bound by  
Glass and plastic  
 
I am here  
Looking to tarmac  
Bitumen built  
Roads viewed and  
Reviewed by my  
Incompleteness  
 
Perpetual in it's pain  
Heart and mind  
Hindered and held by  
Sky lined lengths of  
Elongated and hanging  
Wire  
 
I am here with  
Metallic monsters  
Deviant drones warring  
There way through torrents  
Of impervious pressure  
Tunnelling crazed and  
Deprivation of  
Souls need  
 
Here I am  
False lit in  
Fake and frayed  
Sewn by less fortunate  
Lowly low dollar  
Earned and deserved of  
Being born in any other place  
 
I'm here and  
More fortunate  
Than most they say  
But deleted from  
Realness  
An imposter of  
And playing lead role in  
My own pathetic plasticity  
 
Looking for signs  
And a searcher with  
Lost eyed luminescence  
Playing at lives through  
Receptive ever trained  
From birth  
 
I am here hung out to dry  
Grey and ghostly  
Gaunt and felt never  
By anything other than  
Barrenness
Doubting and forever  
Doubtful lost and losing  
 
Nowhere to run with  
Sight or created belief in  
A ShangriLa  
Hurt and in all hurting  
Haunted by shrink wrap  
Clad and suffocating  
A desert of nothingness  
And everythingness  
 
Told from birth and  
Told this is me  
Here and  
Forever hinged to  
 
And the other  
A myth.
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Magnetron
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The Tenth Melissa

       
Five kilometers underground      
     manufactured in secret        
along with nine others      
     Shadow government facility          
       
Absent parents or brothers      
     a hive of sisterhood     
 
intentions far from altruistic      
     pretensed for the greater good        
       
plaus • i • ble   de • ni • a • bil • i • ty        
         
led to this little known story        
in which chaos erupted        
         
Cloning experiment gone awry-        
gene pool corrupted        
         
Siblings        
anywhere from deformed        
to downright psychotic        
full of rage, pent up violence        
to passive, quite robotic        
unlike her-        
         
perfect in every way:        
balanced, beautiful, intelligent      
     from conception      
       she was the exception        
         
The Tenth Melissa        
         
And then one artificial sun day        
she lifted a pistol from the security guard       
Shot him point blank range in the face        
Stole his Level 9 Access card        
         
Commandeered the control room       
Locked down each and every exit        
imprisoning everyone inside;        
if this was coming, no one ever saw it        
         
No matter how much praise        
was heaped upon on her        
she viewed herself as    
a monster      
an abomination        
and refused to go on living        
knowing the worst in her        
was manifest in her kin    
       
knowing the worst in them        
resided just below the surface of her        
skin        
         
Self Destruct Mechanism Activated        
         
Self Destruct Mechanism Activated        
         
Self Destruct Mechanism Activated        
         
Countdown To Detonation Sequence Commencing        
         
Ten
       
         
Pounded the shatter proof glass        
they begged her to let them in        
begged for their lives        
         
Nine        
         
Trapped    
Rats in a maze scurrying about        
No Cell Phones Permitted On The Premises        
Couldn't call husbands or wives        
         
Eight        
         
"Wait, Melissa - wait!        
"It doesn't have to be this way!"        
"Just open the door!"        
"Let's discuss this some more!"        
         
Seven, Six, Five        
         
They'd say anything to stay alive-        
anything to spare their hides        
but the Truth needed to come out        
       
The Truth would set her Free        
         
Five, Four, Three        
         
Not even Melissas Two through Nine        
convinced her to stop the countdown        
while Crazy Melissa Number One        
cheered her on just for fun!        
         
Four, Three, Two        
         
"Sister, please don't do this!"        
"You know we all love you!"        
"Why, Melissa, Why?!"        
         
Pleading was all they could do        
except kiss their asses        
         
One        
       
 
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Josh
Josh
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Thank you Vamps and Magnetron for your entries into the technology Comp

Kinkpoet
Kinkpoet
Fire of Insight
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Thank You Dr. S

Thank you
Dr S
 
for teaching me
that burn patients
are people
 
that their injuries
are just challenges
to teach us
different ways to heal
 
thank you
for teaching me
that
a short pencil
is more valuable
than a long
memory
 
thank you
for writing down
your affirmations for assimilation
and passing them on
to each of your students
 
thank you
for being
 
knowledgable
yet open
 
strong
yet kind
 
thank you
for honoring
the contributions
of every member
of the team
 
thank you for teaching me
to embrace technology
to use it
effectively and efficiently
 
and to drop it
 
when someone needs
a hand to hold
a shoulder to cry on
or a kind word
 
thank you
for helping me
get past
my mistakes
through
my prejudices  
beyond
my narrow vision
 
to see
the humanity
in every living being
no matter
how disfigured
or deformed
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Gahddess_Worship
Gahddess_Worship
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ODE TO A MODERN LOVER

I noticed
You were in a hurry
Not watching where you go
ear buds burrowed in too deep
head bowed to smart-phone glow

Pavement slick from morning downpour
Black Wingtips lost their footing
Witness a feat n’er seen before
Falling body still texting

Cue Samuel Barber’s
“Adagio for String”
As in slow motion,
phone slips from your grasp
From your mouth emits
A little girl scream
From the crowd an audible gasp

With a mighty splash
There it lay motionless
In a puddle deep and muddy
Kneeling down you pick him up
“I tried to save you li’l buddy”

Amid the crowd of somber faces
a barely audible whisper
“Oh come on, give me a break”
It’s just a stink’in device
Take it home, dry it off,
Put it in a bag of rice.
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takis1917
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Hero Of The Republic

On the large monitor  
he located the target's exact position.  
Remotely, he guided the drone  
precisely 2000 feet straight over it;  
the drone  
carrying a one thousand megaton bomb.  
He stated his readiness.  
Τhe go ahead was given.  
Firmly the button he pressed.  
On the large monitor  
the target and everything around it went up in smoke.  
He stated the hit.  
Thumps up were given in return.  
Next morning
the news' report on the mission, he watched.  
Five enemy military leaders were killed.  
Also mentioned, five hundred civilian casualties  
- babies, children, women, old folk -  
and more than double injuries.  
- Enemy used shield to protect its leaders -  
Later that day  
at a ceremony attended by his family  
he was awarded the highest honor  
-the Hero of the Republic Medal -  
bestowed on him by the President himself.  
Lunch followed  
and a merry time was had by all  
marred by his sixteen year old daughter's  
questioning and disapproving stare.  
A mental note, he made, for a father - daughter talk  
as soon as his schedule allowed...
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Josh
Josh
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Thank you Kinkpoet, Gahddess & Takis for your entries into the "technologyt" comp - which is now closed and give me a couple of days for figuring out the winner.

Josh
Josh
Tyrant of Words
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First of all thank you to all 12 DUPers who entered the ‘Technology’ comp. An interesting set of reads all round. Congratulations goes to Gahddess for the top-spot, a neat poem-story of how technology can become so easily a ‘replacement’ human in our lives. Runners-up Blackwolf for his rappy-style technology-word poem, and to Ely with the undertone suggestion of how the vagaries of Nature (which Technology is supposed to overcome) have merely been replaced by the vagaries of technology itself, creating the same security-anxiety as before.
Special mention to Snugglebuck for his sense of humour.
There were four poems which were very interesting and well on topic but were unfortunately way over the 250 word limit so I had to discount them in order to be fair to the others.

Gahddess_Worship
Gahddess_Worship
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FINE DINING

(Inspired by the "Your Social Peeve" competition)
   
Good evening  
It’s nice to see you  
Will you be dining alone?  
Oh forgive me  
I didn’t see your device  
Table for two then  
   
Our specials for today  
An 8 oz filet with spring vegetables and WiFi  
And for your electronic friend  
A nice OS upgrade  
Excellent choice  
And for your tablet?  
Coming right up  
   
Sorry about the delay  
The chef was preoccupied  
He just HAD to complete level 5  
The way you two look into one another’s displays  
mesmerized by love  
I can tell you don’t mind the wait  
One filet, medium rare  
And the latest app  
for your companion  
Bon Appetit!  
   
Hello, Don Ensimismados  
We do take reservations  
when would you like to come?  
I have a table for four at 8 o'clock  
We will see you then  
Listen up kitchen!  
I’ve got a four top coming at 8  
Mr. and Mrs. Jones  
and their smartphones  
It’s their anniversary  
   
What seems to be the problem?  
I am so sorry  
I didn’t realize it wasn’t compatible  
I’ll send it back to the kitchen  
Can I interest you in a charge  
While you wait?  
Free of charge...of course  
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Josh, thank you for devising this truly fun comp. This is our new reality that changes on a daily, nay, hourly basis. I appreciate the recognition and I sincerely pfeel that we are all winners because we got to pause from our, sometimes tedious, daily routine and ponder and write. I vascillated between two of my poems. I think you may enjoy this one as well,

Bravo to every participant.

Blackwolf
Blackwolf
I.M.Blackwolf
Dangerous Mind
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Many thanks , good sir Josh !

Just saw this most appreciated nod in my direction...

Your input as far as my output is most appreciated !

Thank you for your hosting this comp !

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