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DCLXVI_1989
DCLXVI_1989
Garrett Asa Hughes
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Poetry Contest

If you'd like a little hopeful bit of fun, i have an idea. Simplicity from complexation. (All that's subjective)

If you're outside, look up. If you're indoors, find the sky at this moment please.

I'd love to hear you describe it within unnecessary (but mandatory) confines of:

-2 STANZAS
-4 LINES EACH
-(8 LINES TOTAL)
-FIRST AND LAST LINES MUST BE 5 SYLLABLES

I'm just excited if this gets any entries and the possibilities of what your minds think up.

(I doubt if it may even be interesting enough, but please limit 2 entries per person)

MadameLavender
MadameLavender
Guardian of Shadows
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Hello--do you mean first and last lines of each stanza, being 5 syllables, or the first and last lines of the overall poem?  (I'm having a senior moment.... lol)

Jade-Pandora
Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
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Jade-Pandora
Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
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Sky-bound

 

singing in my hand
folded once, then once more
the simple origami
of a paper crane

a corner of sky
kiting all to myself
lighter than a lesser gull
reaching for the sun


 
Written by Jade-Pandora (jade tiger)
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Jade-Pandora
Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
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Home-bound

 
from a dragonís cage  
my spirit at the window cries  
to be set free and escape
where the sky awaits  

I see the moonís rise  
long before the sun relents  
behind clouds it will set  
in magentaís blush  
Written by Jade-Pandora (jade tiger)
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DCLXVI_1989
DCLXVI_1989
Garrett Asa Hughes
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Overall, I'm sorry.

DCLXVI_1989
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Dark Blank Night

Sadly untextured
Like a canvas awaiting an artist's idea
The moon, taking the night off
Far too clear

The stars untethered
Unattached from their ceiling to kneel
An abyss, not even a drop
There is nothing near
Written by DCLXVI_1989 (Garrett Asa Hughes)
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Benzy_420
Benzy_420
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The Sky Right Now

Absolutely black
Not a cloud to be found
nor a star from afar
Only planes spitting gas out the back

Polluted by lights the sky is diluted
Harder to see if there's an ET
Choppers with doctors, police helicopters
Back to my music
Written by Benzy_420 (BTheW)
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Benzy_420
Benzy_420
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A New Sky

Something to be changed
Not yet a realised potential
Hung in darkness
Waiting for the morn

When the day returns
I won't be witness to her transformation
But I know how much she changes
And so, I thank her
Written by Benzy_420 (BTheW)
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LunaGreyhawk
LunaGreyhawk
Fire of Insight
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Cloud Bound

cornflower edges fill my vision,  
hint of blue water in the interim;
Iím cloud bound to the hoping
in a cloudless sky  
 
sunshine hiding itís face from me
here, but not really here;  
chased away by icy winds,  
taking warmth with it
Written by LunaGreyhawk
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EdibleWords
EdibleWords
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Sky is Mind

Birds of a featheró  
flocks far and near
Poetry is atmosphere † †  
bringing kinds together † †
†† †  
Celestial vessels flying free †
art supporting me †
Poems are the greater †  
parts†of precious hearts † †
Written by EdibleWords
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slipalong
slipalong
Fire of Insight
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My sky

Night brings stars and moon
Day brings sun to refesh my temple
Jet trails cut its mantle
That canopy blue

Come aspirations
In the minds hot air ballons
Wing to the sky
Untied tangents fly
Written by slipalong
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Kinkpoet
Kinkpoet
Fire of Insight
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My Sky 01/20/20

powder blue
wisps of white fluff
drifting lazily eastward
held aloft by snow caps

obsidian raven
in contrast
wind whispering
earth mother at work
(C)2020 Raibeart Bruis
Written by Kinkpoet
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cabcool
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Fire of Insight
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firmament

wounded by my pride
looking up i see the sky
calling me from my predicament
beyond  the bounds of †the †firmament

earthís †deadly †scars †are †impermanent
for those redeemed by the sacrament
Jah-Jah children cannot die
death's been crucified

© Copyright 2020 January 22
Written by cabcool
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wallyroo92
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Radiant Skies

I saw this sunset,
And it reminded me of you,
Painted with pretty colors,
It made for quite the view.

In these radiant skies I see your eyes,
When the hues are vivid and picturesque,
I'm in love with splendor and loveliness,
I have to confess.
Written by wallyroo92
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