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LobodeSanPedro
LobodeSanPedro
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Sierra Leone
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lepperochan said:Lobo, welcome. epic stuff, shows a real understanding of things which I'm ashamed to say surprised me somewhat


best o luck, man


*Oglaigh


Did an edit to get it closer to the word count

slipalong
slipalong
Fire of Insight
United Kingdom
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That Mural

The heroine defined
She of everywoman kind
Tigeress emptied every magazine
 Flush of passion on her cheek
Mascara'd lid that did'nt blink
Outlined bullets rained
Written by slipalong
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_boybrains
_boybrains
Dangerous Mind
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index whip.

her
trigger
disciplined
violence.



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_boybrains
_boybrains
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petal drops.


her
rifle;
     made
           soldiers
    weep
         
peonies.


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MadameLavender
MadameLavender
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United States
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Graveside


Grandmother’s hand
commanded
her descendants, like
she did, the gun, so
long ago—

faded picture, stories—
keepsakes
near my heart;

she has my respect.

lepperochan
lepperochan
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Slip along, welcome, loved it, well done

besta luck

lepperochan
lepperochan
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Ethan, I think you're having way too much fun with this. I'm gonna have to start thinking about sending mi6 an alert

but, more than that, I like that the picture and / or story provoked. good stuff man

lepperochan
lepperochan
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fuckin A, Doc!. impressed

best o luck

circusmonkey
circusmonkey
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Impressive entries here

AEMelia564
AEMelia564
Y
Tyrant of Words
Norway
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SEERESS

Among ourselves
I fired
a pandemonium of uttering
pleading bullets
I chose silence
voicing dead poets
Bleeding wombed words
Drinking freudian wine
I am the murderous truth

lepperochan
lepperochan
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AEMelia, welcome

good stuff,  lady.  best o luck

inechoingsilence
inechoingsilence
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Regal unto Death -Eulogy

Killer queen
leather armor, polka dot gown
Your scepter an assault rifle
endurance your battle cry
Vengeance your holy mission
beloved by all your men
Written by inechoingsilence
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the5thRiddler
the5thRiddler
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Who Am i illness


Her head as well
as her hands would hurt
Was told only she could
find out both answers
so she wrote
“Don’t Arthur write this”

lepperochan
lepperochan
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InEchoingSilence, welcome and good stuff, Lady  best o luck

5th Riddler, welcome, also good stuff, man. best o luck.



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Kinkpoet
Kinkpoet
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Battlefield Tragedy

she died
not knowing
he survived

he survived
not knowing
she died
Written by Kinkpoet
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