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Jade-Pandora (jade tiger)
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Through the Alphabet —The Letter “P”

MadameLavender
Guardian of Shadows
United States 87awards
Joined 17th Feb 2013
Forum Posts: 5598

Poetry Contest

Use all the words in the list below , in a poem
Next up, the letter "P” ! Same rules as the other alphabet comps:

One poem per poet
Any style, length
Use all the words in the list in your poem
Two weeks to complete
Winner is decided by public vote


Here’s the list of words:

Paddock
Paradigm
Peasant
Perception
Pharisee
Picket
Pilgrimage
Placid
Pollen
Pretense

ReggiePoet
Reggie
Fire of Insight
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Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
United States 154awards
Joined 9th Nov 2015
Forum Posts: 5134

Quiet Reflections

 
It was an age upon a continent—
Where lived a Raja, loved by subjects all,
To be a paradigm of Paradise,
 
When he’d parade his wealth and fam’ily.
To have them all anticipate the day
They’d be invited to the Palace Grande,
 
And given, one by one, and made by hand,
The small sweet golden pollen honey cakes
By his belov’ed and beau’tiful wife.
 
The poor and lowly caste, they had a pride,  
As some would cultivate, some cook’d & clean’d
While tending to their master’s growing brood.
 
And some would graze & groom the Raja’s stock
Of prized thoroughbreds out in the paddock
Surrounded by a wooden picket fence.
 
Yet even though these were the happy times,
The shadow of a darker past would loom,
And crept the fertile fi’elds to the Grande.
 
At first of sunlight when his wife would pray
And fold her arms into a morning’s breeze,
She disappeared from off the balcony.
 
Abducted to the mountains far away?
No one would know her or where she was from.
The Raja’s lady’s on a pilgrimage
 
That’s what the grieving Raja told his flock,
As servants, slaves & staff all had their doubts.
They never knew him as the placid sort,
 
Nor a Pharisee to the peasant clan;
Who’d chastise the lowly as a pretense
To have them still believe he was their Sage.
 
They chose a one among of whom they knew,
A guru who would fast and meditate;
A holy man’s perception what to do.
 
He rose to visit by a quiet pond,
And met the grieving Raja kneeling there.
“She’s coming back a fortnight and is safe.”
 
The Raja looked up in astonishment.
“Do not lie to me, we’ve searched ev’rywhere!”
The holy man smiled, pointing to the pond.
 
“Gaze on and in the water till you see.”
So gentle did he speak, the Raja looked:
With joy, he saw himself next to his love!
 
Written by Jade-Pandora (jade tiger)
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Kinkpoet
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 9th May 2019
Forum Posts: 1033

The Road Of Good Intentions

along the road to perdition

pharisees
make pilgrimage
to holy lands

with the pretense
of protecting the peacock
(most flamboyant bird)

past paddocks
and cool placid waters

pickets of peasants
sweating slaving
harvesting wheat for the taxman
in the oppressive heat of summer

industrious pollen laden bees
visit flowers of yellow and pink
working diligently in parallel

hypocrites
bumpkins and drones
each outside
perception of the others
subconsciously
toil together

devising
universal truths
cosmic paradigms
and tragic comedies
Written by Kinkpoet
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MadameLavender
Guardian of Shadows
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Thanks for starting us off , Jade & Kink!

slipalong
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 41awards
Joined 1st Jan 2018
Forum Posts: 825

Shalom

The camp commander stood on a box
The prisoners trapped in paddock locked
loud hailer in his hand announced
Above the multitude and shouts
 
The picket line stood firm and square
Their spits like pollen filled the air
The agitators throwing rocks  
For that pretense it was designed to shock
 
The paradigm of abuse that makes you kick
For blooded hands a race on which to pick
That stoic pharisee he raved
"To the Wailing Wall and we be saved"
 
And in the end all placid was
The hail of bullets quelled the mob
A perception that all right will out
The peasant mass  massacred for nowt
 
That pilgrimage a riven holocaust of guilt
A feast when sacred blood is spilt
Swift bullet or the choking gases scent
Each chamber held unwelcome death
Written by slipalong
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MadameLavender
Guardian of Shadows
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Thanks Reggie & Slip, for your entries !

wallyroo92
Tyrant of Words
United States 147awards
Joined 11th July 2012
Forum Posts: 1794

Beneath The Surface

We have traveled across all these decades,
A pilgrimage of time and there’s no going back,
And yet my perception of us hasn’t changed,
Ever so placid when feelings never lacked.
But the emotions always felt so profound,
Locked in a bedrock paddock deep in the heart,
Beneath the surface silent without a sound,
Without pretense it easily falls apart.
And as we travel across all these decades,
Like golden pollen we’re scattered in the wind,
We look back and wonder how and why we’re here,
I reminisce of all the times I have sinned.
It’s a dream peasants and Pharisees have seen,
A zealous fantasy of a life longed and lived,
Like crossing picket lines and shifting paradigms,
From the depths, an echo still stirs unfulfilled.
Written by wallyroo92
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MadameLavender
Guardian of Shadows
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Joined 17th Feb 2013
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Thanks for your entry, Wally!

Heads up everyone:  We're going to be in the same boat as last comp--waiting for a spot for voting.  Shall we PM vote this like the last comp?  If everyone is ok with that, whoever wants to vote, send me a pm with you choice, after this comp closes then I'll assign the winner in 48 hours after comp close based on votes.  Thanks!

(will set up the next comp, tomorrow morning)

MadameLavender
Guardian of Shadows
United States 87awards
Joined 17th Feb 2013
Forum Posts: 5598

Winner : Jade, with 2 votes
Wally & Kink, tied for runner up with one vote each,

Thanks to all who wrote and voted & congrats !

Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
United States 154awards
Joined 9th Nov 2015
Forum Posts: 5134

Omgosh, thank you MadameL for another alpha opportunity.

For all who entered, and those who voted.  It’s such an honor.

Congratulations, Wally & Kink!

I love this series of challenges.  My best to everyone!

wallyroo92
Tyrant of Words
United States 147awards
Joined 11th July 2012
Forum Posts: 1794

Congrats Kink and runner up. Ms Jade congratulations on winning. Thank you MadameLavender, these comps are great.

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