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Man of my dreams or Lady in my Life?

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BeautyQueen00
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Poetry Contest

A love-based competition where male contestants have to say how they will win a woman's heart through poetry
1. must be a man
2. Must submit a/the poem
3. Must follow the/my criteria
* If it does not follow my criteria, you will not be crowned the winner*
Remember: It's all about originality and style. Think: If you were writing to me how would you want to steal my heart!


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DevlinDLC
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Well this sucks!
Title threw me off ... maybe next time
w/ ``Woman of My Dreams``


*good luck w/your comp, Lady!*

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BeautyQueen00
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Thanks. and why did it throw you off and why did you let it throw you off. I can give you some pointers. what do you need help with? I can't and may not be able to give you answers but i can at least give you some pointers. Just show me what you got so far! You don't know until you give it a try. I bet it's not even that bad.

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cold_fusion
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BeautyQueen00
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I don't know if you are talking to me or not but if you are it's because you act like you didn't know what to write and you froze. When you are about to write a poem you have to know what your talking about and what your gonna write about.

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cold_fusion
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BeautyQueen00 said:I don't know if you are talking to me or not but if you are it's because you act like you didn't know what to write and you froze. When you are about to write a poem you have to know what your talking about and what your gonna write about.

first of all welcome to DU dear BQ

Goodluck to your comp as well.

A disclaimer, no intention to intrude into your comp... your choice of title or anything i have no problems with.  As a DU member yo have a right to host the comp.

I'll go and delete my comment above as it is not appropriate to post anything but an entry i am aware of that.


Now coming back to your quip above to the the Poet./Artist you just mentioned your assumptions about dear Friend... i wish you knew a bit about her before those bold assumptions.

Goodluck to your comp...all the best!

and no further comments from me here...

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DevlinDLC
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BeautyQueen00 said:Thanks. and why did it throw you off and why did you let it throw you off. I can give you some pointers. what do you need help with? I can't and may not be able to give you answers but i can at least give you some pointers. Just show me what you got so far! You don't know until you give it a try. I bet it's not even that bad.


When I saw the Title of the comp posted on the grid, I just assumed
it was a comp about what a woman considers ``a man of her dreams``.
Then when I clicked on I realized it was a comp specifically for men; so
that`s what threw me off.  Didn`t mean to come off as rude
as i honestly thought I was being nice.

Also, and just FYI, I don`t know what the deal is/was between you & Fusion
but he`s been here since like forever (as many have been) and so
we`re pretty pretty close, and what offends him also offends me!

You take care now ... and again, Good Luck with your comp.



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BeautyQueen00
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Oh, tension and drama is the number one thing in poets these days. Its like you challenging me. Which I'm not mad at....... Keep It up! 🙏😍😍😇

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BeautyQueen00
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Oh I'm sorry Miss. For all that confusion. And I wasn't getting an attitude with cold fusion. I was just concerned you know. Cause don't get me wrong this is a competition.  You have to be the best and try to win. I know you don't want me on you like training wheels. And I know you don't wanna lose. 😯😕😢😥😦😧😞😖😫🙇🆒🆗🆙

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snugglebuck
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You're Beautiful

A maternal body full
You're a fluffy pillow
Inflated by a warm soul
That beckons, 'come cuddle'
 
When we make love
I feel like I'm riding
Upon a comfy cloud ☁
So sweet serine and mellow
You are the embodiment
Of an erotic angel 👼
 
Always know
That you're beautiful
And I love you so 💘
Written by snugglebuck
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drone
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I ache
to do this
with every fiber
of my being
for you to become
my rock
but I'm afraid
that you might
Change
and once again
I slide off
slowly submerging
with open wounds
into the sea
of my chaos
and pain





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You're Beautiful

A maternal body full
You're a fluffy pillow
Inflated by a warm soul
That beckons, 'come cuddle'
 
When we make love
I feel like I'm riding
Upon a comfy cloud ☁
So sweet serine and mellow
You are the embodiment
Of an erotic angel 👼
 
Always know
That you're beautiful
And I love you so 💘
Written by snugglebuck
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snugglebuck said:

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BeautyQueen00
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drone said:
I ache
to do this
with every fiber
of my being
for you to become
my rock
but I'm afraid
that you might
Change
and once again
I slide off
slowly submerging
with open wounds
into the sea
of my chaos
and pain





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BeautyQueen00
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BeautyQueen00 said:

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SatInUGal
Kumar
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ALL THOSE THOUGHTS

If I were a good poet
I'd make love to your mind
I would squeeze out all those thoughts
Right into you so you would know
Just where I come from
I would make you see that I am
Oh so different
And oh so genuinely just the same
And how the two create
Rhythmic poetics
And when we were finished
You would lean over and tell me
How big my ideas were
If I were a good poet
Written by SatInUGal (Kumar)
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