Thanks for your entry.
"Thrive" is a diamond in the rough, having the shape of a diamond.
Now you must cut and polish the seven jewels to refine your precious stone.
The attached image demonstrates your submission in relation to the requirements.
Can you fix your idea and resubmit?
Way to go!
In case you cannot read the detail of the image, here's what it says:
√“There” = one word (the noun or subject)
“Is a place where” ≠ two adjectives (describing line 1)
“I want to go to realize my dream” ≠ three –ing words (describing line 1)
“A condition in which I can achieve my goal and vision ≠ four nouns, in which the first two relate to line 1 and the last two relate to line 7
“But to get there I need to conceive” ≠ three –ing words (describing line 7)
“A road map and plan to” ≠ two adjectives (describing line 7)
√“Thrive” = one word (the other noun or subject)