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OH... Tainted Love!

Madbuttonhatter
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Poetry Contest

An exploration of the dark side of romance, the heart breaks, the unrequited loves, the betrayals, or even mediocre relationships...and that's not nearly all! Tainted loooove!
1.Up to three poems can be posted by a single author

2.Visual poems and spoken word are allowed.

3. Poems can be written in any style and format, so long as they include the theme of tainted love.

4. Doesn't need to be entirely depressing, if you want to write a poem that has something of a happy ending, get creative as long as it incorporates the topic in some manner

5. Must be original work, though collaborations are allowed.

6. Once I ran to you (I ran) Now I'll run from you, This tainted love you've given. I give you all a boy could give you...

MsRockyJackson
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Crazy On U

Crazy on you,
going crazy on you,
going crazy because of you,
let me go crazy on you,
Crazy on you.
Can't you see what you do to me?.
One minute I love you the next I want to choke you.
I can't remember who I am anymore,
I become a different person whenever we get into it.
I snap every time you say something stupid,
I feel like a half wit while at the same time I just can't get enough of you.
Crazy on you,
going crazy on you,
going crazy because of you,
let me go crazy on you,
Crazy on you.
Jealousy overcomes me as it electrifies my anger.
I snap,
Wait who's that chick?!, I slap her thinking the worst.
What are we doing?
Fighting and yelling in eachother's face then making love crazily while promising to never ever fight again, but it just keeps going in cycles.
You make me go psycho,
then you make me go mental.
It feels horrible, but at the same time it feels good.
Crazy on you,
going crazy on you,
going crazy because of you,
let me go crazy on you,
Crazy on you.
I love you, but at the same time I hate you.
You thrill me, but there are times when you kill me with your stupidity, but you're the only one that really gets me.
I know this is no good for us.
Maybe it's lust, maybe it's love, I don't even know, but it's torturous.
The hell is wrong with you?,
The hell is wrong with me?,
Why do we get like this?.
Crazy on you,
going crazy on you,
going crazy because of you,
let me go crazy on you,
Crazy on you.
But baby I must confess that you are really the only one that can put up with me and my crazy life.
You're so beautiful,
Wonderful,
And incredible, I love you so.
You pick me up when I fall,
And I guess if some other girl were to try to steal you away I'd probably never feel the same ever again.
Loving me isn't very easy and I know this.
But I want you here with me.
See you're the Peter to my Wendy,
You're the Aladdin to my Jasmine,
You're the Superman to my Lois Lane,
You're the Marshall Mathers to my Slim Shady,
You're the Simba to my Nala,
You're the insane to my crazy,
You're the disturbed to my weird,
You're the Michael to my Janet,
You're the sun to my moon,
You're the afternoon to my night time.
You're my doctor, I need your medicine,
You're my counselor, I need your guidance,
You're my lover, I need your love.
Crazy on you,
going crazy on you,
going crazy because of you,
let me go crazy on you,
Crazy on you.
What are we doing?,
having a shouting match till I start leaving then you start crying, begging for me to come back then I give in and stay once again, every day we do this as tears come and go constantly. When will we find some peace?.
Crazy on you,
going crazy on you,
going crazy because of you,
let me go crazy on you,
Crazy on you.
Written by MsRockyJackson
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MsRockyJackson
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So Done

So you broke my heart
You made me fall apart and did all the things you wanted to do.
You thought you were slick,
Thought you could get away with this shit and first it worked
I was crying and crying and crying and crying for you, but now here's what I think about you
Fuck you!

I'm so done with you
I'm so, so done with you
I am so, so done with you
So fuck, fuck you and that bitch too!
I'm so, so, so done with you!
F-U-C-K Y-O-U I am S-O D-O-N-E

I'm so done with you
I'm so, so done with you
I am so, so done with you
So fuck, fuck you and that bitch too!
I'm so, so, so done with you!
F-U-C-K Y-O-U I am S-O D-O-N-E

When things were going good things were going great, but when things got rough it turned World War III and you ducked when the bombs hit.
You weren't a man you were a boy that didn't really love me.
You laughed in my face and called me crazy well see how crazy I am when you watch me leave with that man over there.

I'm so done with you
I'm so, so done with you
I am so, so done with you
So fuck, fuck you and that bitch too!
I'm so, so, so done with you!
F-U-C-K Y-O-U I am S-O D-O-N-E

I'm so done with you
I'm so, so done with you
I am so, so done with you
So fuck, fuck you and that bitch too!
I'm so, so, so done with you!
F-U-C-K Y-O-U I am S-O D-O-N-E

Could've been something,
We could of been something, but now we ain't nothing so now you're just nothing to me.
Since you wanted to mess around and toy with my feelings I'll be fooling around and have my own fun.
I ain't losing my mind, I'm ok
I'm fine
I'm just so fucking fed up with this!
And I'm so over it and all of it!

I'm so done with you
I'm so, so done with you
I am so, so done with you
So fuck, fuck you and that bitch too!
I'm so, so, so done with you!
F-U-C-K Y-O-U I am S-O D-O-N-E

I'm so done with you
I'm so, so done with you
I am so, so done with you
So fuck, fuck you and that bitch too!
I'm so, so, so done with you!
F-U-C-K Y-O-U I am S-O D-O-N-E

I'm so done with you
I'm so, so done with you
I am so, so done with you
So fuck, fuck you and that bitch too!
I'm so, so, so done with you!
F-U-C-K Y-O-U I am S-O D-O-N-E
Written by MsRockyJackson
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MsRockyJackson
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Cheater

I wasn't gonna do this...but fuck it  
Let's do this...    
     
You had me fooled yeah that's true,    
Yeah you think out played me maybe so, but now I know all about you and what you did to me.    
Been actin' like a fuckin' man hoe who thought he could've tricked her, her, and her into your bed.    
Tried to sleep with me on the first date but you know I wasn't bout that thot life.    
I'm not dumb, but the stupidest thing I ever done was taking your sketchy ass back.    
Blame it on love,    
Blame it on lust,    
Blame it on the devil,  
but I'll take it all as the biggest regret 'cause you caused me nothin' but pain. Boy, you're so vain I bet you think this is about you don't you?.    
Bitch you guessed right,    
And guess what I'm bout ready to fight 'cause Rocky's fucking fed up with these bitches talkin' all this bullshit bout me and you.    
Claimin' I'm ya baby mama, got knocked up 'cause I wanted ya to stay?    
bitch please!      
I don't need you    
And      
I don't want you.    
I'm gettin' paid and doin' my own fucking thing,    
I got a family and friends that loves me and looks out for me when you only just wanted one thing from me.    
So don't act like a two faced, lying ass mother fucker when you know better since I remember when I found the Trojan in your room and all you did was joke about it like the player you were.    
I should've slit your fucking throat when I had the chance, but instead believed every fucking word you said now I'm sure all you wanted was to get into my pants and leave my ass behind like I was fucking trash.    
But I'll just spare ya unfaithful ass and get this cash.    
Let you see me pass on by as I slay better than any hoe you ever fucked around with.    
Love to hear you say you miss me when really I ain't the one that'll be missing you    
'Cause I'll be leaving with my ex tonight.    
Sex him and love him because he deserves it when all you tried to do was use me and abuse me emotionally. But I'll fuck you mentally and let you evaporate into shit,    
Hit every main vein till you feel each bit of fucking pain I ever felt, better yet take a machete to it and chop ya brain into pieces and eat it like I was fucking Jeffery Dahmer.    
Don't come back crying to me, beggin' on ya knees for me.    
I wouldn't take you back even if you were crawling on all fours, bleeding and screaming.    
I would just smile and put a bullet in your temple and pull the mother fuckin' trigger.    
He should of known better than to top it all off with hitting on two of my friends and neither of em wanted your scandalous ass.    
You could've had class but instead kept leaving with trash.    
Wanted to dog me out for some ass when at the start you would be talking about      
wanting marriage and kids,    
wanting me to play wifey in your home and live together like bitch really?.    
You only wanted to keep me under your thumb and make me out like I was the dumb one.      
But you ain't nothin' but a bum in disguise that tries to get in between every hoe's thighs like a gynecologist.    
Let's also talk about your behavior and how you won't even lift a fucking finger for a woman to help her out.    
You ain't a man,    
You can't even be a fucking gentleman for the one you said you cared about!.    
Now tell me were you just bullshitting all this time?    
Thought so!    
Now you wanna call me emotional and 'extra' just because all I ever did was try to show you my true feelings but you'd act like a robot that didn't have any at all.    
Now you're on a mission to make me fall but bitch one thing bout me is once I fall    
I come back up swinging so get ready to catch these fists like we were Floyd Mayweather vs Conor McGregor.    
Tried to fuck me over but I'll fuck you, make you take it till you can't fucking stand    
and tell me is it worth it being a cheater?.
Written by MsRockyJackson
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glutton

 
you cut your teeth on my innocence
honed your blade on my bones  
and with that same sharp edge
you carved strips from my soul
bleeding me dry of my beauty
and still...
 
I basked in the heat of your kiss
abasing myself for your twisted pleasure
as you savaged my most tender bits
gorging yourself on my sorrow
delighting in opening my veins
peeling back skin with your razored tongue
leaving me prostrate in my weakening state
and still...
 
I begged you to hold me
wept in silent shuddering agony
starved myself to fit in your life
abhorred my own broken reflection
slashed the canvas of my heart
you never took pity
so skilled in the art of deflection
it was always me at fault
until...
 
I built my fortress without you
dragged my shattered remains
behind walls engraved with your name
some of them are there still
a monument to a very dark past
where every nightmare is about you
and outside those cells of despair
I live
I thrive
I laugh
I care
and yes
I do still love you
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Tainted Love

All I wanted to tell you was that I loved you,
But that kind of love was really tainted and
Extremely dangerous. Where we once grew
Is where the weeds are now. Understand
That I used to bask in every hug and kiss
Because I did not know when our final end
Was going to come. I am not going to miss
Anything about this love. I am on the mend
From your tainted love. All of the emotions
Gets tossed aside because you did not care,
So why should I? I can follow all the motions
Of the rocky waves and breathe in salty air
Because that is where this took me. I hope
To be screaming, “fuck you” into the empty
World. Tainted love is let go of like a rope
Because it is feeling too heavy and hefty.
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Just Sign On Dotted Line

I'm Your Night Crawler With A Razor Blade , Dark One And Ace Of Spades  

You're My Catholic Girl , In Plaid Skirt And Braids , Just Begging To Be Laid  
 
By One Like Me From Hades Forget The Velvet Bed Just Use The Dirty Floor  
 
Now Get Down On The Ground And Suck Me Until I Fuck You On All Fours  
 
Want To Be The First One , First One Was My Best Friend Now She's Just My Whore  
 
You Say You're Just A Good Girl , You Don't Do That , Turn Around And See The Door  
 
You Will Be What I Want , My Sweet Little Cunt , For What You Are And Were Made  
 
Just To Be , Some Booty Bitch , With An Itch For The Right Player To Be Played ,  
 
Just Sign On Dotted Line And All You Prayed For May Now Be Implored For  
 
Just Know I Will Never Be Betrayed !
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From the Ash, you really captured how abusive relationship feels.  The debilitating sensation of feeling chained to a creature who only desires harm.  Very captivating.

Every post so far has been exquisite.

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Your Private Hell

 
The Things You Have Done , In Your Private Hell ,
The Words That You Speak , The Stories You Tell ,
The Ways That You Weave The Web Of Your Fate ,
Show All Too Clearly , It Is You That You Hate...

My Forgiveness Is Not What You Need ,
You Pierce Your Own Heart , Just So You Bleed ,
You Twist Your Own Knife Under Your Skin ,
You Beg For A Friend , Yet Let No One In...

You Cry Out To Enter , And Then Shut The Door ,
You Want Me To Be A Doormat On Your Dirty Floor ,
To Break All Hearts Is Your Passion Play ,
To Go Where You Will And Do What You May...

To Cut Off All Feeling , Do What You Must ,
For If All Is Betrayal , Then Who Can You Trust ?
Once You Are Hurt , The Fear Is The Pain ,
And Lies Become Real , Just To Stay Sane...

"I Ask You Now , You Talkin' To Me ?
Better Keep On A Walkin' , And Let Me Be ,
I Got A Razor Tongue And Empty Eyes ,
If You Get Hurt Don't Be Surprised..."

You Think You Scare Me , I've Seen Much Worse ,
Some Minds Are A Graveyard , Some Bodies A Hearse ,
Some Eyes Are Pure Darkness , No Soul Do They Keep ,
No Light Do They Shine , Nor Tears Do They Weep...

"I Ask You Again , To Leave Me Alone ,
To Reap What Is Mine , In All I Have Sown ,
To Tear , And Rip , And Cut , And Rend ,
I Cease To Begin , And Begin All To End"

And Yet Once More , I Extend My Hand ,
As Only An Offer , And Yet Never Demand ,
What Others Have Done So You Feel So Betrayed ,
The Cards On The Table , The Cards That Been Played...

I Ask You To Look Deep Within Your Inside ,
In All Those Dark Places You Play Seek And Hide ,
And Just To Own All Things You Have Done ,
Stand And Be Strong , No Need More To Run !
Written by Blackwolf (I.M.Blackwolf)
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