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Look At Me
Poetry Contest Description
Desired Comments Here
Comments are few and far between. Though, if you want something the little dropdown (honest criticism) never gave; then, here is where the most daring will post such works.
This thread is where you may knock down, hate, or love, anyone's post.
1. Burn it down, battles welcome. However, if you desire, give a nice comment if you feel warranted.
2. You may target any post above you.
3. Comments may also be targeted.
4. If you want to burn a Rembrandt, then do so.
5. This is a place for you to present your art, where comments come from both sides.
6. You may not defend your own piece.
7. More rules may (unlikely) be applied.
This thread is where you may knock down, hate, or love, anyone's post.
1. Burn it down, battles welcome. However, if you desire, give a nice comment if you feel warranted.
2. You may target any post above you.
3. Comments may also be targeted.
4. If you want to burn a Rembrandt, then do so.
5. This is a place for you to present your art, where comments come from both sides.
6. You may not defend your own piece.
7. More rules may (unlikely) be applied.
Example:
“Valuable Instruction”
Welcome,
I hope you are here to preview
my coming seminar on how to:
Fuck shit up, and continue.
The first point I will make is:
Always take things literally.
Don’t forget the rose glasses.
Calm down, get fucking quite.
Thanks; second, relay that to:
Mind’s voice of reason and logic.
To wrap up this brief preview;
I leave with; third: Don’t forget,
be a dick; now fuck off!
“Valuable Instruction”
Welcome,
I hope you are here to preview
my coming seminar on how to:
Fuck shit up, and continue.
The first point I will make is:
Always take things literally.
Don’t forget the rose glasses.
Calm down, get fucking quite.
Thanks; second, relay that to:
Mind’s voice of reason and logic.
To wrap up this brief preview;
I leave with; third: Don’t forget,
be a dick; now fuck off!
Plus I guess I will give you one of my real ones as fodder as well.
"Afraid You Are"
Afraid you are not to say
A thing at all, just shy away.
Why so timid, mild and obedient,
I’m telling you not to be lenient.
Is our voice long lost, and taken,
something gone and now forsaken?
Rise up, say something, subjectively
at least to me, speak out objectively.
Rated R, or more as I fall, and reel;
I can’t believe all the people that don’t feel.
What is it that tells you to look away?
I only wish I could fix it here today.
This is why we all are dying;
you turn your back to leave me crying
in these exhausting and murderous days;
please, just stand up only to say:
A meek and lonely phrase,
is powerful enough to praise.
Others likely feel the same;
to say nothing is just a shame.
"Afraid You Are"
Afraid you are not to say
A thing at all, just shy away.
Why so timid, mild and obedient,
I’m telling you not to be lenient.
Is our voice long lost, and taken,
something gone and now forsaken?
Rise up, say something, subjectively
at least to me, speak out objectively.
Rated R, or more as I fall, and reel;
I can’t believe all the people that don’t feel.
What is it that tells you to look away?
I only wish I could fix it here today.
This is why we all are dying;
you turn your back to leave me crying
in these exhausting and murderous days;
please, just stand up only to say:
A meek and lonely phrase,
is powerful enough to praise.
Others likely feel the same;
to say nothing is just a shame.
Poke holes, if only to say, that this shit I wrote is nothing but rhyme. Perhaps this is just shit in modest shine of mainstream mediocrity.
All comments or things to say may not be objected to from the writer, so spice it up.
Make this a top notch site where there are real comments and lifelike things to say.
All comments or things to say may not be objected to from the writer, so spice it up.
Make this a top notch site where there are real comments and lifelike things to say.
This one is meant to strengthen us;
Not to signify us as the easiest but,
create a place that we can have fun;
and talk shit on each other respectfully,
to poke holes in each other's words
in a sense of brotherly (sisterly) love.
A few friends, I call upon you
I think you may aid in creating some off the chart
hole poking art.
Not to signify us as the easiest but,
create a place that we can have fun;
and talk shit on each other respectfully,
to poke holes in each other's words
in a sense of brotherly (sisterly) love.
A few friends, I call upon you
I think you may aid in creating some off the chart
hole poking art.
Anonymous
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"Empathy"
A quite inspired relation to all those,
quarrels, and qualms, I let go my foes
live and treat the others all unrealistically;
unreasonably, respectfully, eventually
this hurts me, try to stay humble, really.
Darkness has given me a crash course
in empathy, helped to see others remorse.
This source, leaves me hoarse, subconsciously;
statistically, unbelievably, historically,
it’s left me sad, in melancholy.
Empathy, a great burden left on me,
many times I wish I could be free,
heavy things to carry, as I might;
conceit, might (have) respite
may not be right, just grit teeth tight.
A quite inspired relation to all those,
quarrels, and qualms, I let go my foes
live and treat the others all unrealistically;
unreasonably, respectfully, eventually
this hurts me, try to stay humble, really.
Darkness has given me a crash course
in empathy, helped to see others remorse.
This source, leaves me hoarse, subconsciously;
statistically, unbelievably, historically,
it’s left me sad, in melancholy.
Empathy, a great burden left on me,
many times I wish I could be free,
heavy things to carry, as I might;
conceit, might (have) respite
may not be right, just grit teeth tight.
