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OctoberArts (October)
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Timeternal
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 24th Feb 2018
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LibraSoul96
Fire of Insight
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Joined 1st July 2015
Forum Posts: 524

                          Slayage Shit

I'm solar laflare came from a planet called mars.
I spit kit kats and Hersheys all types of bars.
My flow be the shit bitch spray some febreeze (ew)
My wrist on cold look watch how my diamonds on freeze (bling).
I swear none of you got the juice
I Hawaiian punched it.
Pull up on you in that orange lambo I maid it in a minute.

I swear your pockets on slim fast bitch you hold no weight.
My money so afluent so I keep it on my plate.
Talking like you cardi saying you making bloody moves.
Meanwhile, you in the slums with yo momma catching the blues.
I swear I'm the original ain't no new editions.
No more hitting me up so stay the fuck up out my mentions.

I'm dead to the drama,
You mess we me its your karma.
All that regret is in your conscience,
I don't got time for the nonsense.
Your a cartoon mouse shout out to Mickey,
Have you running like Tom did Jerry.
Your a squeaker just like Minnie,
Imma a bear just like winnie.
Who can step to me shit not too many.

Y'all lyrics is wack I should be your ghostwriter,
Do some nip and tuck on your rhymes just to make them tighter.
Imma true Libra nahhh I'm not a fighter, but if you push me imma light you up like a cigarette lighter.
You don't want no smoke with me this ain't a hookah stick.
You can get blew down along with your side kick.
They say flare be humble sit down like kendrick.
Bout how imma stay calm when all these haters do is mimic.

I slay for a living you slay for a week.
Look at your teeth they playing hide and seek.
Before you look at me take care of your mouth.
Breath smelling like the part of your body that points down south ( like ass).
I'm a boss your the help go and dust something.
Get down on your knees and kiss my pinky ring.
Bitch I'm Solar laflare and I keeps a mean mug as my glare.











TLIFD
Rope
Thought Provoker
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my pens on fire
i just threw it into lava
now it stings like lazzers
and haters going down like elvators
woe woe woe
let me address soulflo
i fucked lin
your female twin
in china same time you ratted on ben larden
i sparked terror that 9/11
my verse grows like a bitch thats pregnant
i sin i shot the revren
beef with me only to repent
in your place of privacy
im the God
these boys and girls are under my design
october bends over for me thats just fine
i pack more skill in 1 line
then you would in your whole life
just read  this shit come with ease
"ghostwritter" that line started with me
dont let me send you the html links
dont let my unamed verses of death piss you off bitch
tell that fagot to go and suck dick
what you coming with
will get you whipped on the streets
oh you to suburban for the shit
why you certain you can win
cause the host said your old shit was savage as fuck
hard luck
im here making you look average as fuck
and dumb like trump
and my lifes in a slum
and thats that shit that makes me get up
makes me work hard
come on time eternal go get a job
how you expect a girl to feed you dress you and still suck you off
man i got this shit
you gone study it like a bible script
to many punchlines
you finshed way before round 9
these writers to odd like the number nine
man i got it
should sell this shit and make a profit
you think you gifted
your mom ant told you yet
the truth is always the hardest
cause what i come with
will make you cum first
these lines are too hot
oh god the worlds finshed



gazellemon
Bradley J
Fire of Insight
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Joined 6th Mar 2014
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- UPDATE -

great work people, thank you all for taking the time to throw down in the Rap Battle Competition.  Not much time left so if you got more savage bars, now is a good time to throw 'em down!

LibraSoul96
Fire of Insight
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Joined 1st July 2015
Forum Posts: 524

Slayage Shit -climax

I swear all y'all do is throw subliminals,  
I'm at the top of my pinnacle.    
Talking shit hey here's a diaper,    
My words sting like a fucking viper.    
I don't waist time on people that's irrelevant.    
Man you hating and that shit is evident.    
Y'all act like some fucking nazis,    
Imma drop bombs on y'all with an impact of a kamikaze.    
   
Must be the drugs or the alcohol got y'all getting outta pocket.    
My words and its meanings have dead aim like a fucking rocket.    
Don't be overdosing on confidence thinking you are my equal.    
This ain't no prequel to my slayage shit this a mother fucking sequel.    
My poetry is like pollen,    
Come take a sniff and get high off it.    
   
Yeah may I reiterate that I should be yall ghostwriter,    
Man y'all need my penmanship and it's dire.    
Spitting these pre school ass rhymes    
Thinking that shit can take me out my prime.    
Flowing this hard should be a fucking crime.    
I don't gotta throw shade cuz I have the whole tree at my disposal.    
Stop trynna explain yourself to me like a damn proposal.    
Y'all trying me with these disses that are a hit and miss.    
Didn't y'all teachers teach y'all that ignorance is bliss.    
   
They say flare you should keep quiet and turn the other cheek.    
That the meek shall inherit the earth.    
That you still are the best that you know your worth.    
Imma be humble and shout out my competition.    
Glad y'all tried to end me but failed the mission.    
But I ain't done I ain't finish it's just the intermission.    
   
   
   
   
   
   
 
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TLIFD
Rope
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beauty im the beast
i peg 9/11 24/7
fuck you think
im public enemy
hell sent me
christ sucking my dick
muhammeds about to do the same thing
im the king of kings
they say i lie through my teeth
let me pen something
you read it and weep
i cant be beat
you getting beat like im an abusive parent
in this comp im the threat
these other boys just a bomb scare
you can deny i rhyme tight
like virgin pussy on its last night
try twist my words when its flawless
like fuck it you just gonna forefit
or throw a tantrum
my lyrics soon to be your anthem
battling me thats a joke
theres no hope
roll this shit and have a smoke
gets you high without dope
dont give me a mention
my punchlines will send you to the dentist
you better pay attention
im killing every terrorist
and im coming for you right after i burry them
this is skill i hope your eyes listened



TLIFD
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Thought Provoker
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beauty you talentless
i dont need to script something backwards
to know you got this shit backwards
dont diss me if you gone come with that whackness
im the baddest
on the planet
i got october chained feeding of my maddness
going to fast for these hopeless bastards
if thats true ill be your dad here
walk you over to your casket
you half wit
coming with less skill then i present
and i cause anarchy like i killed your president
rap god dup's resident
is evident im not gone have children be championed

TLIFD
Rope
Thought Provoker
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i spit harpoons
like concrete i go way to hard dude
david rice? im not american
can you come with a better referrence
my words gets your ass kicked
my lyrics so the shit
smell it when you read it
another fool defeated
getting beaten period
you another male on his period
this ant brail but my words you gonna feel it
inwards
boy you not making sense
beat me boy i dont play pretend
dont play with yourself again
my shits the only script the host reads to the end
competitors read your end
demons in my mirror
possessed i bring you terror
bring you girl here ill fuck her better
what follows a vendatta
i make you wear vengence like a bandanna


Bobbyjimmy
Strange Creature
United States
Joined 5th Mar 2018
Forum Posts: 1

Long as hell had to stop 45 bars in buy good work

gazellemon
Bradley J
Fire of Insight
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Joined 6th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 372

TLIFD said:
you half wit
coming with less skill then i present
and i cause anarchy like i killed your president....


dayum

JohnnyBlaze
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 20th Mar 2015
Forum Posts: 5572

DEATH CHANT Three Point One

             
Oh no!            
What happened to            
DEATH CHANT Three Point Oh ..?        
       
Countdown's begun    
says Johnny Blaze            
from One from Thirty            
consecutive April days            
to be wordy for so called    
"rappers" and "poets"      
Out of all the ways        
to run?            
Jog!        
Avoid the all out blitz!        
       
Even if you're going on            
nothing but fumes            
because it's not for those            
prone to calling it quits            
or sociopaths with undeclared            
non de plumes            
Trolls with their multiple              
collective of halfwits            
             
In the NaPoWriMo            
you won't get very far            
as it swallows you up            
and            
SHITS              
YOU            
OUT            
a hole        
so tight            
you're transformed          
from unpolished coal           
into diamonds in the rough            
 
If drafting fresh JAMS            
just ain't yo thang            
then enough already            
Aight?            
             
Spittin' half assed beats            
and words mish mashed              
don't make you freestyle            
             
It makes you a blight          
               
on the field of dreams            
that is Poetry      
     
   
 
   
 
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LibraSoul96
Fire of Insight
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Joined 1st July 2015
Forum Posts: 524

Slayage Shit: The Grand Finale

Imma lyrical bastard there ain't no skill    
that I ain't mastered.  
You masturbated with the beat,    
my flow so vicious that it castrated you to defeat.    
There's a bunch of strange creatures trynna grind my gear ( who are you)    
Well Imma force on my own so fuck having a peer.    
Yeah Imma savage, like a gorilla in the zoo.    
Try me you go missing having Steve searching for Blue's clues.    
   
These babies crying to me what you need a rattle.    
Ya'll rhymes were sugar coated to say that this is a rap battle.    
Ya'll some leaches sucking off my style like a teething ring.    
Stay trying to piece me together, like a sleuth.    
Trynna mix up the perfect ingredients on how I spit in the booth.    
   
Imma put ya'll raps in a body bag and zip em up with a zipper.    
Leave em all bloody and decomposed like Jack the ripper.    
This one lame mentioned my name in a battle rap (do I know you).    
With that wack ass repetitive garbage it need to be scrapped.    
You post everyday like damn let the competition breathe.    
Trynna make an invalid message that no one will receive.    
   
Look I am your father shout out to Darth Vader    
Imma smoke ya'll out this battle bitch come catch these vapors.    
Damn you that desperate to get a name riding off other people's wave, what a damn shame.    
Comparing me to Hannibal Lecter, Imma Silence of the Lamb this motherfucker.    
   
Hey where's my machete, Imma Friday the 13th these fools shout out to Jason  
Ya'll act like ya'll ain't got no religion or no sense of direction.    
The tip of my pen cuts deep with great precision.    
I swear yall need to be in a mental aslyum    
Ya'll hate don't stop my momentum.    
   
So this has been fun loading up these bullets in my gun    
Shooting down the adversity and the belittlement.    
Put ya'll pens down and go into retirement.    
I been on this slayage shit no one can come close to it.    
Please don't ever put my name next to these peasants.    
No more free promo off my name you getting charged to represent it.    
   
Imma ghostwriter hey inbox me for a feature.    
I swear my sermons will reach your soul like a preacher.    
I'm the grim reaper, I'm snatching souls.    
Death is eternal, but the sunshine in the afterlife is bountiful.    
I got a librasoul that out weigh the zodiac    
Bitch I'm Solar laflare and I just led ya'll into cardiac arrest.
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TLIFD
Rope
Thought Provoker
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stop it
with all the garbage
my script good like cooked cabbage
like side chick included in the marriage
good for the health
beauty writes to diss himself
all my competetors aswell
getting fucked by me like the popular high school girl
and thats real like nat geo
these boys know im mister original
you boys miss's artifical
your verse way to britle
whats a kettle to a volcano
stop doubting
i turn this seed into a mountain
all these replies in the moment
how i get so potent
writting ant your calling
you get called in to be phoney
like a secretary
answering the phone for me
cause this
is boss shit



DeadEyesStarlight
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 6th Mar 2018
Forum Posts: 2

Spelunking through Wonderland

Riot grrrl, tilt-a-whirl
Let it all unfurl
PTA PTSD OPP PFFT!
A life sentence explained in acronyms, and one expressive noise.
Sorry to exhaust, apologize for the fumes
Running on, still running
See, I was married to a man who hated poetry
Can you imagine?
Once my greatest form of self-expression
Traded in for a toaster oven, a Crock pot
Never plug in anything with a frayed wire
Never fear desire
Wed into a canary cage
Moved to a town without dancing
But  
Now I can Mashed Potato
Cabbage Patch
And I’ll cream your corn, too
The housewife life
Such drudgery, inane
A tea party without any tea
Thirsty to my core
My lips so parched
The heroes of my youth
What would Susan B. Anthony do?
Tori Amos?
Siouxsie Sioux?
Maya Friggin’ Angelou?
Cataclysmic change throughout the catacombs
My only way out
Prayers and angels brought me here
Some have called me a devil
Sure
If that’s what it takes
Put on my horned helmet
As I make my
Descent
But you know I’m just going to rise again
Like sea foam
That Disney Little Mermaid
She found her cartoon voice
Not the Hans Christian Andersen wretch
I won’t be pitied
Leonian pride  
I’ll see them all on the flip side
As I make my
Ascent.
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J_A_S_O_N
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 18th Aug 2017
Forum Posts: 4

Call Me Poetry

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