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The Infernal Forest

gothicsurrealism
Daniel Long
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Poetry Contest

You are trekking through the woods with your poetry journal and come to realize that you have wandered into Hell. Write a new poem describing what you see, hear and feel in the infernal forest.

gothicsurrealism
Daniel Long
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The Infernal Forest

Amiss I crossed
unknowingly into Hell’s frost,

within a mortal’s journey in a dismal wood of sin,
little I knew a divine odyssey would begin.

I awoke off the True Path!
Lord! Dip this careless flesh in your bath of wrath!

In our infernal forest, I departed from the way of light!
Oh, Divine One, with anguish deliver to me a smite!

How to say how wicked,
such a place makes the saints justly livid!

Never witnessed so rank, so dismal,
the non-christened regiments abysmal.

So savagely untamed its rough growth twas’ in this woodland!
Behind every scorched timber hid a sinful band.

The chalice of Christ’s blood dry,
to my fear, gives eyes to the dead.
Written by gothicsurrealism (Daniel Long)
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gothicsurrealism
Daniel Long
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Non-entry submission

Vision_of_insanity
Tyrant of Words
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Hell ain't so bad

Within the depths, where dreams come true
Echoes of hope, where Lucifer loves you
Flames dance, a delightful sight
Inferno whispers through the night

Freedom to say, a care-free state
On tranquil paths, no room for hate
Each laugh, a happy story
In hell's release, heartfelt glory

Pleasant nights, dawn will arise
Cool whispering flames, blue clear skies
A realm of pleasure, you'll never want to leave
In these delightful depths of hell, always believe
Written by Vision_of_insanity
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Grace
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
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Journey through Darkness

I wander through the woods  
shadows dance just behind me
path once seen in darkness brood
my heart pounds in crippling fear
 
home maybe at the other end
warmth of my mother’s hearth
might be waiting to welcome
lonely journey fear stops heart  
 
I hear anguished cries of fear
the whispers of darkness intensify
harsh breathing around my feet
above the branches menacingly creaks
 
A ghoulish glow from above the trees
the moon wans as a dying man
its silver drapes a ghostly tableau
the forest is alive with death echoes
 
I hear them falter and creep
the unknown creatures, ghosts or ghouls
they cry whisper sob and weep
moaning that they lost their souls
 
Trembling with fear I run so fast
the meadow I see before me
I see my mother’s house at last
will I reach her door before they feast
Written by Grace (IDryad)
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PAR
PAULO ACACIO RAMOS
Dangerous Mind
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Topical Pain Forest

The forest breathes with a sinister sigh.
Branches grasp like hands from the sky.
Lost souls wander, forever to vie,
for fragments of truths in shadows that lie.
In hell's embrace where hopes slowly die.

Through the underbrush a path of pain,
tears of the damned fall like bitter rain,
visions of pasts that darkened remain.
Lost meanings echo in a mournful refrain,
a symphony of sorrow, eternal disdain.

In the heart of darkness an abyss profound
where lost meanings whisper without a sound.
Sins and regrets in shadows are bound,
the weight of despair a heavy surround.
In hell's forest, no solace is found.
Written by PAR (PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)
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gothicsurrealism
Daniel Long
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Excellent entries so far!

Anne-Ri999
Fire of Insight
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nymphaeum

thin sound where clarities begin
celebrant sacrosanct shadow
linger long linguistic shade
wipe this breaking brow

tearing off bridal and burial gown
o psycho pomp covet me with dark velvet
do not kiss these hyacinth lips
this blood is too spilled
to forget

rudiments ripple
dulcet tones
harlequin

alder wood anguish
androgyn shape
dueling duality
hate

dwells
among
o neurotic neutron star
your monochrome catastrophe
awaits me


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Written by Anne-Ri999
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Mstrmnd1923
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Even Shadows Are Afraid

It's a beautiful sunny day    
To embark on a forest fray    
A path awaits, a hidden trail    
The woods aroma I inhale    
A chance to set my mind at ease    
While searching for inner peace    
A rock upon the flowing creek    
Feeling nature I hear her speak    
Babbling water, calm and serene    
Refreshing moments in this dream    
Tranquil echoes, the chilling breeze    
Softly whistling through fallen leaves    
   
Then hell ensued, natures desire    
A rage of burning leaves on fire    
Dark secrets expose empty woods    
Souls etched in bark that never could    
Flee the darkness nor find the light    
Vulnerable prey couldn't fight    
Predators hunt, then they devour    
Victims that they overpowered    
Bodies hidden by dirt and mud    
Nearby rivers remove the blood    
Accomplices in this crime scene    
Tandemly working killing dreams    
   
Trees dying from the deepest cuts    
From nature hiding their secrets    
A world void and absent of light    
Heaven and hell are out of sight    
Perched on this observatory    
My reflective purgatory    
Here souls are lost and souls are cold    
Between the timelines getting old    
Haunted by my lifes masquerade    
Where even shadows are afraid    
To find redemption on this path    
By facing God and face his wrath
Written by Mstrmnd1923
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gothicsurrealism
Daniel Long
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Excellent work Anne and Mastrmd!

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