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Poetry Contest Description
Write a poem describing a person in triolets
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Entries must be written in either the first or third person, and in one or more triolets.
A triolet is a short form with an ABAAABAB rhyming structure, which closes on the same lines as the first two. Attached is a WikiHow diagram of the form.
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ooooooh! i love triolets!!!!!! now i must put my thinking cap on.
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o O! What she said! One of my favorite forms!
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COVID RELIEF NOW!
If you could eat words, then sure, thoughts and prayers-
But what of the thousands lined up for some food?
They need deed doers more than just sayers!
If you could eat words, then sure, thoughts and prayers-
But each day that goes by tells them nobody cares;
Cake-eating suits finding such hunger rude.
If you could eat words, then sure, thoughts and prayers-
But what of the thousands lined up for some food?
But what of the thousands lined up for some food?
They need deed doers more than just sayers!
If you could eat words, then sure, thoughts and prayers-
But each day that goes by tells them nobody cares;
Cake-eating suits finding such hunger rude.
If you could eat words, then sure, thoughts and prayers-
But what of the thousands lined up for some food?
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SatInUGal said:
Hi, Kumar! Thank you for your entry. However, to be considered, entries need to be three verses, each a triolet, totalling 24 lines. To illustrate:
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Also, it needs to be a description of a person. Physical, emotional, both, your choice. Therefore it ideally needs to be written in the first or third person, where your poem appears to be written in the second.
Hi, Kumar! Thank you for your entry. However, to be considered, entries need to be three verses, each a triolet, totalling 24 lines. To illustrate:
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Also, it needs to be a description of a person. Physical, emotional, both, your choice. Therefore it ideally needs to be written in the first or third person, where your poem appears to be written in the second.
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Ah, thank you for the clarification.
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AspergerPoet56 said:https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/405508-normalcy-in-strange/
Hi, AspergerPoet56, thank you for your entry. However, to be considered, your poem needs to be three triolets totalling 24 lines and be a portrait of a specific individual. Please see my reply to Kumar above for further clarification.
Hi, AspergerPoet56, thank you for your entry. However, to be considered, your poem needs to be three triolets totalling 24 lines and be a portrait of a specific individual. Please see my reply to Kumar above for further clarification.
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I've simplified the rules. Now the poem just has to be written in the first or third person and consist of one or more triolets, your choice. Please ignore the ”Poetry Contest” banner, the system won't let me edit that.
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