Your Sky
DCLXVI_1989
Garrett Asa Hughes
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Garrett Asa Hughes
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Poetry Contest Description
If you'd like a little hopeful bit of fun, i have an idea. Simplicity from complexation. (All that's subjective)
If you're outside, look up. If you're indoors, find the sky at this moment please.
I'd love to hear you describe it within unnecessary (but mandatory) confines of:
-2 STANZAS
-4 LINES EACH
-(8 LINES TOTAL)
-FIRST AND LAST LINES MUST BE 5 SYLLABLES
I'm just excited if this gets any entries and the possibilities of what your minds think up.
(I doubt if it may even be interesting enough, but please limit 2 entries per person)
MadameLavender
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Guardian of Shadows
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Joined 17th Feb 2013Forum Posts: 5727
Hello--do you mean first and last lines of each stanza, being 5 syllables, or the first and last lines of the overall poem? (I'm having a senior moment.... lol)
Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
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jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 9th Nov 2015 Forum Posts: 5134
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Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
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jade tiger
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Sky-bound
singing in my hand
folded once, then once more
the simple origami
of a paper crane
a corner of sky
kiting all to myself
lighter than a lesser gull
reaching for the sun
Written by Jade-Pandora
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Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
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jade tiger
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Home-bound
from a dragon’s cage
my spirit at the window cries
to be set free and escape
where the sky awaits
I see the moon’s rise
long before the sun relents
behind clouds it will set
in magenta’s blush
Written by Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
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DCLXVI_1989
Garrett Asa Hughes
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Garrett Asa Hughes
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Overall, I'm sorry.
DCLXVI_1989
Garrett Asa Hughes
Forum Posts: 88
Garrett Asa Hughes
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Joined 17th Aug 2017Forum Posts: 88
Dark Blank Night
Sadly untextured
Like a canvas awaiting an artist's idea
The moon, taking the night off
Far too clear
The stars untethered
Unattached from their ceiling to kneel
An abyss, not even a drop
There is nothing near
Like a canvas awaiting an artist's idea
The moon, taking the night off
Far too clear
The stars untethered
Unattached from their ceiling to kneel
An abyss, not even a drop
There is nothing near
Written by DCLXVI_1989
(Garrett Asa Hughes)
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Benzy_420
BTheW
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BTheW
Twisted Dreamer
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Joined 24th Jan 2016 Forum Posts: 53
The Sky Right Now
Absolutely black
Not a cloud to be found
nor a star from afar
Only planes spitting gas out the back
Polluted by lights the sky is diluted
Harder to see if there's an ET
Choppers with doctors, police helicopters
Back to my music
Not a cloud to be found
nor a star from afar
Only planes spitting gas out the back
Polluted by lights the sky is diluted
Harder to see if there's an ET
Choppers with doctors, police helicopters
Back to my music
Written by Benzy_420
(BTheW)
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Benzy_420
BTheW
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BTheW
Twisted Dreamer
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Joined 24th Jan 2016 Forum Posts: 53
A New Sky
Something to be changed
Not yet a realised potential
Hung in darkness
Waiting for the morn
When the day returns
I won't be witness to her transformation
But I know how much she changes
And so, I thank her
Not yet a realised potential
Hung in darkness
Waiting for the morn
When the day returns
I won't be witness to her transformation
But I know how much she changes
And so, I thank her
Written by Benzy_420
(BTheW)
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Cloud Bound
cornflower edges fill my vision,
hint of blue water in the interim;
I’m cloud bound to the hoping
in a cloudless sky
sunshine hiding it’s face from me
here, but not really here;
chased away by icy winds,
taking warmth with it
hint of blue water in the interim;
I’m cloud bound to the hoping
in a cloudless sky
sunshine hiding it’s face from me
here, but not really here;
chased away by icy winds,
taking warmth with it
Written by LunaGreyhawk
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EdibleWords
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Tyrant of Words
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Joined 7th Jan 2018Forum Posts: 3004
Sky is Mind
Birds of a feather—
flocks far and near
Poetry is atmosphere
bringing kinds together
Celestial vessels flying free
art supporting me
Poems are the greater
parts of precious hearts
flocks far and near
Poetry is atmosphere
bringing kinds together
Celestial vessels flying free
art supporting me
Poems are the greater
parts of precious hearts
Written by EdibleWords
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slipalong
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Dangerous Mind
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Joined 1st Jan 2018Forum Posts: 855
My sky
Night brings stars and moon
Day brings sun to refesh my temple
Jet trails cut its mantle
That canopy blue
Come aspirations
In the minds hot air ballons
Wing to the sky
Untied tangents fly
Day brings sun to refesh my temple
Jet trails cut its mantle
That canopy blue
Come aspirations
In the minds hot air ballons
Wing to the sky
Untied tangents fly
Written by slipalong
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Kinkpoet
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Tyrant of Words
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cabcool
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Guardian of Shadows
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Joined 27th Feb 2014Forum Posts: 783
firmament
wounded by my pride
looking up i see the sky
calling me from my predicament
beyond the bounds of the firmament
earth’s deadly scars are impermanent
for those redeemed by the sacrament
Jah-Jah children cannot die
death's been crucified
© Copyright 2020 January 22
looking up i see the sky
calling me from my predicament
beyond the bounds of the firmament
earth’s deadly scars are impermanent
for those redeemed by the sacrament
Jah-Jah children cannot die
death's been crucified
© Copyright 2020 January 22
Written by cabcool
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wallyroo92
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Tyrant of Words
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Joined 11th July 2012Forum Posts: 1871
Radiant Skies
I saw this sunset,
And it reminded me of you,
Painted with pretty colors,
It made for quite the view.
In these radiant skies I see your eyes,
When the hues are vivid and picturesque,
I'm in love with splendor and loveliness,
I have to confess.
And it reminded me of you,
Painted with pretty colors,
It made for quite the view.
In these radiant skies I see your eyes,
When the hues are vivid and picturesque,
I'm in love with splendor and loveliness,
I have to confess.
Written by wallyroo92
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