Poetry competition CLOSED 27th January 2016 1:49am
WINNER
dejure (vick)
dejure (vick)
RUNNERS-UP:
Danii
and Jade-Pandora
Deep Underground Creepy Valentine
Anonymous
MadameLavender said:A Date With Devlin
Devlin, be my Valentine
your morbid self, will be just fine
for when we dig our little graves
In the yard on Cupid’s Day.
We’ll fill them up with candy hearts,
lace and chocolate, then we’ll start
a song of “Pure Imagination”,
dressed like Willie Wonka’s creations
I’m Veruca, you be Violet,
and we’ll listen, very silent,
to see if anything comes to life
from the graves we dug tonight.
But first we’ll have to suck the juice
from blood oranges, or it’s no use
and we won’t get that bad ju-ju,
conjured up by me and you.
I have confidence—let’s begin
did you bring your VooDoo pins?
We’ll stick them in each other’s skin
let our juice flow out, then in
the holes with all the hearts and lace,
chocolate, smear it on our face
and when we’re covered, you and I
surprise, my love—it’s time we die!
Miss Lavender, I'll Be Your Valentine
!
And 'Oh, yes. . .I have plenty of pins.'
Devlin, be my Valentine
your morbid self, will be just fine
for when we dig our little graves
In the yard on Cupid’s Day.
We’ll fill them up with candy hearts,
lace and chocolate, then we’ll start
a song of “Pure Imagination”,
dressed like Willie Wonka’s creations
I’m Veruca, you be Violet,
and we’ll listen, very silent,
to see if anything comes to life
from the graves we dug tonight.
But first we’ll have to suck the juice
from blood oranges, or it’s no use
and we won’t get that bad ju-ju,
conjured up by me and you.
I have confidence—let’s begin
did you bring your VooDoo pins?
We’ll stick them in each other’s skin
let our juice flow out, then in
the holes with all the hearts and lace,
chocolate, smear it on our face
and when we’re covered, you and I
surprise, my love—it’s time we die!
Miss Lavender, I'll Be Your Valentine
! And 'Oh, yes. . .I have plenty of pins.'
Anonymous
~ One Step Closer to Krosgood
Allow me, please
to unzip
the essence of your flesh
for oh how I dreamt
of standing inside of your soul
breathing your same breath;
Today is "V" Day,
or in your case, "Violence"
and I packed a lunch for two
nothing strenuous
just a bottle of my best vino~venomous
and a salad of scarlet elegance;
As we dine in fields of
maggots & flies
I shall lament you a Valentine gospel
laced in the bloods
of a sacrificial sunrise ~
And when the sun sets
on our bodies humping
like rabies in the midst
of a mad cow death
I'll let you instead unzip
the essence of my flesh
but first you must begin
with your mouth upon my breasts...
for it should be you
breathing my same breath.
and a happy Valentine's day to me;)
My Bloody Valentine.....
Darksighs
To watch you i soft creeped in..
My mind ran off the deep end..
When i saw you left your panties in the bath room.....
You left a little red stain ..
Where your rosey bud had lain..
I knew you left the spot there just for me..
So the next time i was due for cotton..
I wore your panties on my bottom..
Turning pink lace into a soaked scarlett vision..
Now my pretty Venus..
We hang red together off my mans penis..
Cum suck them off and my rusty cunt will be spread for you......
Lol..T..love you..
.
Darksighs
To watch you i soft creeped in..
My mind ran off the deep end..
When i saw you left your panties in the bath room.....
You left a little red stain ..
Where your rosey bud had lain..
I knew you left the spot there just for me..
So the next time i was due for cotton..
I wore your panties on my bottom..
Turning pink lace into a soaked scarlett vision..
Now my pretty Venus..
We hang red together off my mans penis..
Cum suck them off and my rusty cunt will be spread for you......
Lol..T..love you..
.
forever mine
(a valentine sonnet... of sorts...)
for Jade-Pandora
I never thought that I would feel like this
that I would find you here with me this day
with me on knees before your naked kiss
a promising of your forever stay
so giving wet as hands begin their task
and soft yet wetter still as slow they move
that you may finally see behind my mask
that I in every way my loving prove
I am dripping with you, your gentle rain
my lips find yours as you will find the hole
you in the muddy place of your unpain
me soaked in muddy rain mud filling bowl
I spread leaves over you, forever mine
your shallow grave, forever Valentine
(a valentine sonnet... of sorts...)
for Jade-Pandora
I never thought that I would feel like this
that I would find you here with me this day
with me on knees before your naked kiss
a promising of your forever stay
so giving wet as hands begin their task
and soft yet wetter still as slow they move
that you may finally see behind my mask
that I in every way my loving prove
I am dripping with you, your gentle rain
my lips find yours as you will find the hole
you in the muddy place of your unpain
me soaked in muddy rain mud filling bowl
I spread leaves over you, forever mine
your shallow grave, forever Valentine
^^LOL--I'd like to dedicate this song to our host, the incomparable Mr. Hades:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EkwD5rQ-_d4
:D
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EkwD5rQ-_d4
:D
MadameLavender said:^^LOL--I'd like to dedicate this song to our host, the incomparable Mr. Hades:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EkwD5rQ-_d4
:D
LOL! I haven't heard this song in forever! Reminds me of those spring days by the boat house. Wait, was that too much information?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EkwD5rQ-_d4
:D
LOL! I haven't heard this song in forever! Reminds me of those spring days by the boat house. Wait, was that too much information?
Red hair and skull paint
(For DevlinDLC)
I love red hair
It's just a shame
That the fistfuls I get
Are taken from your shower drain
Still...
It pulls the same
I imagine it woven through my fingers
I can see it
Pulling hard, to scorpion your head
But I have to keep my arousal silent
Or you'll know hiding I'm under your bed
Finally, I'll wait for you to go to sleep
Did you know you snore?
Either way, that's the sound I'll be waiting for
After your last sip of wine tonight
Your head will spin to my delight
And a gritty powder coats your teeth
Find your sheets then lay your body soft and sound
My drugs work quick
And my oh my, how you drank those glasses down
Several minutes later you're unconscious, and I'm anxious
To tie your limbs, each to a bedpost with a black velvet rope
And run my fingers across your lips
"Shhhh, let's enjoy this"
When you wake you'll feel wet and
Violated yet unused
Stagger to the toilet
Hungover you'll puke
Look in the mirror
With your head pounding like ocean waves
And see that behind your red hair
Is a fresh skull in wet face paint
You let the Devil in
Miss Devil-lyn
You're my Valentine, like it or not
(For DevlinDLC)
I love red hair
It's just a shame
That the fistfuls I get
Are taken from your shower drain
Still...
It pulls the same
I imagine it woven through my fingers
I can see it
Pulling hard, to scorpion your head
But I have to keep my arousal silent
Or you'll know hiding I'm under your bed
Finally, I'll wait for you to go to sleep
Did you know you snore?
Either way, that's the sound I'll be waiting for
After your last sip of wine tonight
Your head will spin to my delight
And a gritty powder coats your teeth
Find your sheets then lay your body soft and sound
My drugs work quick
And my oh my, how you drank those glasses down
Several minutes later you're unconscious, and I'm anxious
To tie your limbs, each to a bedpost with a black velvet rope
And run my fingers across your lips
"Shhhh, let's enjoy this"
When you wake you'll feel wet and
Violated yet unused
Stagger to the toilet
Hungover you'll puke
Look in the mirror
With your head pounding like ocean waves
And see that behind your red hair
Is a fresh skull in wet face paint
You let the Devil in
Miss Devil-lyn
You're my Valentine, like it or not
You haven't heard the half of it
Due to circumstances
there's only one evil man left around me
plotting and scheming
Let's go somewhere beautiful like Ireland
and you can talk as if it will help to fight my demons
I'll walk on hot burning coal if you can take boiling water
because in my basement I do keep a kettle
It's like being hit with a taser gun
pulling the metal spikes off like "Fuck is wrong with you pussy"
when attacked by someone claiming to be the devil
so I just want us to get our freak on
I'd find it attractive us fighting
and you trying to put me in a submission
Due to circumstances
there's only one evil man left around me
plotting and scheming
Let's go somewhere beautiful like Ireland
and you can talk as if it will help to fight my demons
I'll walk on hot burning coal if you can take boiling water
because in my basement I do keep a kettle
It's like being hit with a taser gun
pulling the metal spikes off like "Fuck is wrong with you pussy"
when attacked by someone claiming to be the devil
so I just want us to get our freak on
I'd find it attractive us fighting
and you trying to put me in a submission
Valentine
You ignore my calls
Why?
You never answer your door
Why?
These men in uniform tell me to leave you alone
but why?
Is it really such a crime for me to love you so?
I just want things to remember you by
I have a small collection thus far
The napkin you threw away with the paper cup at the coffee shop
The receipt you dropped in the parking lot at the market
I even have a copy of the restraining order with your lovely autograph on it
I have some lovely red hairs from your hair brush
A shuttle from your tampon
I even took your cat (you thought he got out the house and ran away)
But its never enough my dear
For there is one thing I have yet to possess
Your heart
Your hands tied
My hands roam over your beautiful ivory skin
So soft, so beautiful
Why do you cry?
You should be happy
Because you are mine
I stick my fingers in
So moist, so wet
I shove the pills down your throat
Hold your mouth closed
It won't be long now
Your legs flail, I hold them still
You will give me your heart
Pull out my scalpel
Make an incision here and there
Pull out the saw
I cut through bone
Remove bone and reveal whats underneath
Oh you cover me in red
So romantic, the colour of our love
And there it sits nestled there
And I pull it out
Your heart
All mine
My sweet sweet Valentine
You ignore my calls
Why?
You never answer your door
Why?
These men in uniform tell me to leave you alone
but why?
Is it really such a crime for me to love you so?
I just want things to remember you by
I have a small collection thus far
The napkin you threw away with the paper cup at the coffee shop
The receipt you dropped in the parking lot at the market
I even have a copy of the restraining order with your lovely autograph on it
I have some lovely red hairs from your hair brush
A shuttle from your tampon
I even took your cat (you thought he got out the house and ran away)
But its never enough my dear
For there is one thing I have yet to possess
Your heart
Your hands tied
My hands roam over your beautiful ivory skin
So soft, so beautiful
Why do you cry?
You should be happy
Because you are mine
I stick my fingers in
So moist, so wet
I shove the pills down your throat
Hold your mouth closed
It won't be long now
Your legs flail, I hold them still
You will give me your heart
Pull out my scalpel
Make an incision here and there
Pull out the saw
I cut through bone
Remove bone and reveal whats underneath
Oh you cover me in red
So romantic, the colour of our love
And there it sits nestled there
And I pull it out
Your heart
All mine
My sweet sweet Valentine
Dear
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/images/uploads/avatars/mysteriouslady.jpg
Please stop feeding emptiness to my hungry soul
I blindly crave for the mysteriousness you show
You manipulate my desires, my control and me
I walked right into the center your abyss willingly
Locked myself inside and screamed your name
Freely I wandered inside your vivid frame
I wondered a million times that if you've noticed me
I would run another million miles to find the key
To open your heart and place a bullet with my name
Let it find me, splatter my head and end this game
Happy Valentines!
your creepy stalker
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http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/images/uploads/avatars/mysteriouslady.jpg
Please stop feeding emptiness to my hungry soul
I blindly crave for the mysteriousness you show
You manipulate my desires, my control and me
I walked right into the center your abyss willingly
Locked myself inside and screamed your name
Freely I wandered inside your vivid frame
I wondered a million times that if you've noticed me
I would run another million miles to find the key
To open your heart and place a bullet with my name
Let it find me, splatter my head and end this game
Happy Valentines!
your creepy stalker
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Anonymous
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Anonymous
Krosgood said:Red hair and skull paint
(For DevlinDLC)
I love red hair
It's just a shame
That the fistfuls I get
Are taken from your shower drain
Still...
It pulls the same
I imagine it woven through my fingers
I can see it
Pulling hard, to scorpion your head
But I have to keep my arousal silent
Or you'll know hiding I'm under your bed
Finally, I'll wait for you to go to sleep
Did you know you snore?
Either way, that's the sound I'll be waiting for
After your last sip of wine tonight
Your head will spin to my delight
And a gritty powder coats your teeth
Find your sheets then lay your body soft and sound
My drugs work quick
And my oh my, how you drank those glasses down
Several minutes later you're unconscious, and I'm anxious
To tie your limbs, each to a bedpost with a black velvet rope
And run my fingers across your lips
"Shhhh, let's enjoy this"
When you wake you'll feel wet and
Violated yet unused
Stagger to the toilet
Hungover you'll puke
Look in the mirror
With your head pounding like ocean waves
And see that behind your red hair
Is a fresh skull in wet face paint
You let the Devil in
Miss Devil-lyn
You're my Valentine, like it or not
Violence. . .*Wow!*. . .I am speechless & honored. . .I fucking love it! Thank you.
(For DevlinDLC)
I love red hair
It's just a shame
That the fistfuls I get
Are taken from your shower drain
Still...
It pulls the same
I imagine it woven through my fingers
I can see it
Pulling hard, to scorpion your head
But I have to keep my arousal silent
Or you'll know hiding I'm under your bed
Finally, I'll wait for you to go to sleep
Did you know you snore?
Either way, that's the sound I'll be waiting for
After your last sip of wine tonight
Your head will spin to my delight
And a gritty powder coats your teeth
Find your sheets then lay your body soft and sound
My drugs work quick
And my oh my, how you drank those glasses down
Several minutes later you're unconscious, and I'm anxious
To tie your limbs, each to a bedpost with a black velvet rope
And run my fingers across your lips
"Shhhh, let's enjoy this"
When you wake you'll feel wet and
Violated yet unused
Stagger to the toilet
Hungover you'll puke
Look in the mirror
With your head pounding like ocean waves
And see that behind your red hair
Is a fresh skull in wet face paint
You let the Devil in
Miss Devil-lyn
You're my Valentine, like it or not
Violence. . .*Wow!*. . .I am speechless & honored. . .I fucking love it
! Thank you. 
dejure said:Dear
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/images/uploads/avatars/mysteriouslady.jpg
Please stop feeding emptiness to my hungry soul
I blindly crave for the mysteriousness you show
You manipulate my desires, my control and me
I walked right into the center your abyss willingly
Locked myself inside and screamed your name
Freely I wandered inside your vivid frame
I wondered a million times that if you've noticed me
I would run another million miles to find the key
To open your heart and place a bullet with my name
Let it find me, splatter my head and end this game
Happy Valentines!
your creepy stalker
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/images/uploads/avatars_ft/dejure.jpg
BLUSH <3
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/images/uploads/avatars/mysteriouslady.jpg
Please stop feeding emptiness to my hungry soul
I blindly crave for the mysteriousness you show
You manipulate my desires, my control and me
I walked right into the center your abyss willingly
Locked myself inside and screamed your name
Freely I wandered inside your vivid frame
I wondered a million times that if you've noticed me
I would run another million miles to find the key
To open your heart and place a bullet with my name
Let it find me, splatter my head and end this game
Happy Valentines!
your creepy stalker
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/images/uploads/avatars_ft/dejure.jpg
BLUSH <3
