Poetry competition CLOSED 10th August 2013 3:51am
WINNER
shaunda
shaunda
RUNNERS-UP:
Kou_Indigo
and LobodeSanPedro
Crush Your Enemies
Anonymous said:<< post removed >>
for the love of God will you just STFU??? Seriously, everything you say is just damn stupid. Stop trying so hard to be flippant in your desperate attempts to fit in.
Ek is nou al net mooi fokken gatvol. [/quote]
i have been here for a lonnnggg time i dont need to fit in.[/quote]
Your "I've been here a long time" statement is invalid. Youve been here since 2011 and you're only thought provoker? Answer this...
WHAT THE FUCK HAVE YOU DONE?!
for the love of God will you just STFU??? Seriously, everything you say is just damn stupid. Stop trying so hard to be flippant in your desperate attempts to fit in.
Ek is nou al net mooi fokken gatvol. [/quote]
i have been here for a lonnnggg time i dont need to fit in.[/quote]
Your "I've been here a long time" statement is invalid. Youve been here since 2011 and you're only thought provoker? Answer this...
WHAT THE FUCK HAVE YOU DONE?!
Anonymous
Thank you for your words, but just leave it man, seriously. Let this thread die.
Just when you think someone is all for good and seem as if harm done to others bother him you find him and his minions on this hateful thread
You echoe Mr.Zimmerman
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/boil/read/3380/45/
You echoe Mr.Zimmerman
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/boil/read/3380/45/
ah yes, the racist thread, yep I took part in that, was a right dick, made some really offensive posts, saw the error of my ways, manned up, apologized, and moved on
I'm sorry you've been so affected by them posts, it was and is a shitty thread, I hope you can manage to get over it at some stage.
I'm sorry you've been so affected by them posts, it was and is a shitty thread, I hope you can manage to get over it at some stage.
anna_grin said:ehscuse meh
give me the licorice ones i like em they are dark like my soul
i would grin but i was saving them right next to the rabbit poop for my pot plants (which is just like my soul btw) and i think i got them mixed up.
i tried the taste test but still could'nt tell the difference.
but idc if you don't.......
give me the licorice ones i like em they are dark like my soul
i would grin but i was saving them right next to the rabbit poop for my pot plants (which is just like my soul btw) and i think i got them mixed up.
i tried the taste test but still could'nt tell the difference.
but idc if you don't.......
Anonymous
"Dragon Foot"
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs50/i/2009/325/e/a/Komodo_Dragon_Foot_by_Track_Maidens.jpg
In the
silence,
I heard the lambs
cry
the saddest song,
begging for
a deliverance
from weakness.
I will send
their relief
in lightning-fingertips,
my Komodo-kicks,
at a time and place
of my choosing,
not theirs.
Until then,
I will walk
on rice paper
through walls.
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs50/i/2009/325/e/a/Komodo_Dragon_Foot_by_Track_Maidens.jpg
In the
silence,
I heard the lambs
cry
the saddest song,
begging for
a deliverance
from weakness.
I will send
their relief
in lightning-fingertips,
my Komodo-kicks,
at a time and place
of my choosing,
not theirs.
Until then,
I will walk
on rice paper
through walls.
I killed my daddy today
So many years- I said and I said
don't touch me daddy- I'm out of my head
you use your lies- sharp tongue and wit
to get with me- be alone with me- SHIT
Go ahead daddy- you take and you take
one of these days- I'm a cut off your snake
go ahead daddy- rip my clothes with your knife
I'll steal it someday and I'll cut out your life
Get that pillow off my face daddy-cause you're blocking my air
Oh fuck it-get it over with-death is better than despair.
I plot, I plan, and then procrastinate
you used the pillow on my sister and sealed your fate
I've changed my mind daddy, I want you, I need you
I look in your eyes and I hope I deceive you.
Let's meet in the dark daddy- hind the big willow trees
I will lie on the grass and you'll get what you please
So I lay in the dark on my back in the grass
Let me touch you he says- cause you got a sweet ass
As you lean in real close and undo my top button
I pull out your knife and then I start a-cuttin
oh your screams sound so pretty-as I cut and I slash
your arterial blood sprays-on my face and sweet ass
then your body goes flying -cause there ain't no speed bumps
and i laugh, god i laugh, when you roll in the swamp
I'm feeling real smart and I'll not dig a hole
I hear the sound of the alligator doing his death roll
So many years- I said and I said
don't touch me daddy- I'm out of my head
you use your lies- sharp tongue and wit
to get with me- be alone with me- SHIT
Go ahead daddy- you take and you take
one of these days- I'm a cut off your snake
go ahead daddy- rip my clothes with your knife
I'll steal it someday and I'll cut out your life
Get that pillow off my face daddy-cause you're blocking my air
Oh fuck it-get it over with-death is better than despair.
I plot, I plan, and then procrastinate
you used the pillow on my sister and sealed your fate
I've changed my mind daddy, I want you, I need you
I look in your eyes and I hope I deceive you.
Let's meet in the dark daddy- hind the big willow trees
I will lie on the grass and you'll get what you please
So I lay in the dark on my back in the grass
Let me touch you he says- cause you got a sweet ass
As you lean in real close and undo my top button
I pull out your knife and then I start a-cuttin
oh your screams sound so pretty-as I cut and I slash
your arterial blood sprays-on my face and sweet ass
then your body goes flying -cause there ain't no speed bumps
and i laugh, god i laugh, when you roll in the swamp
I'm feeling real smart and I'll not dig a hole
I hear the sound of the alligator doing his death roll
This is the first competition, that I've hosted and insensitive retards decide to crowd it...
I feel really bad now .... I'm really sorry Miss Sub... I really am..
And Brandon,I hate insensitive bastards as you....
Now can we please get back to POEMS
I feel really bad now .... I'm really sorry Miss Sub... I really am..
And Brandon,I hate insensitive bastards as you....
Now can we please get back to POEMS
Anonymous
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