Poetry competition CLOSED 26th July 2012 8:15pm
WINNER
SupHomeboi
SupHomeboi
SUBLIME
Poetry Contest Description
Of such excellence, grandeur, or beauty as to inspire great admiration or awe: "ranging from the sublime to the ridiculous".
Write a poem about the above topic... For example write a poem about someone you feel sublime for... No plagiarism , other than that no rules... make sense?
sublime by the ladies that speak poetry hear
situations keeping cool
observations got me
double thinking
might as well
follow
acknowledging
their master piece
beauty written by poets
poets enchanted by beauty
history left at the making
poetry making its stand
all of you inspired my making
taking this stanza
showing you all
peace and love
and hope for a better creation
situations keeping cool
observations got me
double thinking
might as well
follow
acknowledging
their master piece
beauty written by poets
poets enchanted by beauty
history left at the making
poetry making its stand
all of you inspired my making
taking this stanza
showing you all
peace and love
and hope for a better creation
ph8t said:sublime by the ladies that speak poetry hear
situations keeping cool
observations got me
double thinking
might as well
follow
acknowledging
their master piece
beauty written by poets
poets enchanted by beauty
history left at the making
poetry making its stand
all of you inspired my making
taking this stanza
showing you all
peace and love
and hope for a better creation
Beautiful. I completely agree!
situations keeping cool
observations got me
double thinking
might as well
follow
acknowledging
their master piece
beauty written by poets
poets enchanted by beauty
history left at the making
poetry making its stand
all of you inspired my making
taking this stanza
showing you all
peace and love
and hope for a better creation
Beautiful. I completely agree!
Anonymous
SUBLIME
The Greek writer Longinus
Defined sublime as being
Excellence in language
The expression of a great spirit
The power to provoke ecstasy
In your readers
If the goal of writers
Is the perpetual production of ecstasy
Then I must confess to you
Your erotic poetry already has
Have I told you your poetry is glorious
It touches my zones erogenous
So that my biological response
Is by no means nonchalance
I sit at my computer
While I read your poetry
If I were standing
I would be weak-kneed
So virtual lover
Send me more poetry sublime
Take me to ecstasy
Just by the turn of rhyme.
somelikeithot said:
SUBLIME
The Greek writer Longinus
Defined sublime as being
Excellence in language
The expression of a great spirit
The power to provoke ecstasy
In your readers
If the goal of writers
Is the perpetual production of ecstasy
Then I must confess to you
Your erotic poetry already has
Have I told you your poetry is glorious
It touches my zones erogenous
So that my biological response
Is by no means nonchalance
I sit at my computer
While I read your poetry
If I were standing
I would be weak-kneed
So virtual lover
Send me more poetry sublime
Take me to ecstasy
Just by the turn of rhyme.
Nice. Thanks for joining the competition!
SUBLIME
The Greek writer Longinus
Defined sublime as being
Excellence in language
The expression of a great spirit
The power to provoke ecstasy
In your readers
If the goal of writers
Is the perpetual production of ecstasy
Then I must confess to you
Your erotic poetry already has
Have I told you your poetry is glorious
It touches my zones erogenous
So that my biological response
Is by no means nonchalance
I sit at my computer
While I read your poetry
If I were standing
I would be weak-kneed
So virtual lover
Send me more poetry sublime
Take me to ecstasy
Just by the turn of rhyme.
Nice. Thanks for joining the competition!
http://sarahstuartt.files.wordpress.com/2010/11/eternal_love_01-1.jpg
< eternal love >
eternal love
was all among us
til she saw
my toenail fungus
- - -
being happy
random quatrains of love expressed
binded by thought and longing
my hands the words that reach your heard
for the feeling of belonging
one person magnifies what i feel
but he requires much thought
perpetuates the longing in me
my addiction to him is sought
so grandure takes over
as heartstrings are played
he which is me
random quatrains of love expressed
binded by thought and longing
my hands the words that reach your heard
for the feeling of belonging
one person magnifies what i feel
but he requires much thought
perpetuates the longing in me
my addiction to him is sought
so grandure takes over
as heartstrings are played
he which is me
Polarity
You spoke to me
I heard the resonance
your polarity
a place of convolescence
a sound so easy and free
I could feel your presence
you pull the spirit from me
with your magnetic ,
angellical essence .
All those miles away
but you were here
in my ear
exactly where it will stay
tomorrow will be more clear
another day more whole
but you will remain
close to my soul
all my problems at bay
and closer to my goal .
Your in my colourful mind
where we can both unwind
the bind
and sip spiritual wine
for an atlantic always
in time .
To toast
the ghost
of torn yesterdays
and host
to everlasting of
all spacious glades .
Green of emerald
cut to a perfectional
jewelled in an all time
infinately and recommendable
a tomorrow of undeniable
and a reliable
source of unspendable
and undefiable
your my commendable
of an unknotted
all time tieable
for which I will always
stand
as defendable
as any lion would .
You spoke to me
I heard the resonance
your polarity
a place of convolescence
a sound so easy and free
I could feel your presence
you pull the spirit from me
with your magnetic ,
angellical essence .
All those miles away
but you were here
in my ear
exactly where it will stay
tomorrow will be more clear
another day more whole
but you will remain
close to my soul
all my problems at bay
and closer to my goal .
Your in my colourful mind
where we can both unwind
the bind
and sip spiritual wine
for an atlantic always
in time .
To toast
the ghost
of torn yesterdays
and host
to everlasting of
all spacious glades .
Green of emerald
cut to a perfectional
jewelled in an all time
infinately and recommendable
a tomorrow of undeniable
and a reliable
source of unspendable
and undefiable
your my commendable
of an unknotted
all time tieable
for which I will always
stand
as defendable
as any lion would .
