Dark Poems Seeking Honest Critique
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Evil poetry and morbid poems about death and horror
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It Whispers
You want the truth? Ha. Let me carve it in,
Like a twisted fucking blade through your skin.
You hide from the dark, but I am the night,
The devil’s got a grin, and it’s razor-tight.
You think you’re clean, you think you’re pure?
Lies, every fucking breath, you’re a walking blur.
Fools in the light, pretending you shine,
But you’re as dead as a god with a broken spine.
I’ll tear through the surface, expose the rot,
You don’t even know what you've already forgot.
Your prayers are nothing, your halos are fake,
A smothered scream...
Like a twisted fucking blade through your skin.
You hide from the dark, but I am the night,
The devil’s got a grin, and it’s razor-tight.
You think you’re clean, you think you’re pure?
Lies, every fucking breath, you’re a walking blur.
Fools in the light, pretending you shine,
But you’re as dead as a god with a broken spine.
I’ll tear through the surface, expose the rot,
You don’t even know what you've already forgot.
Your prayers are nothing, your halos are fake,
A smothered scream...
#dark
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3 Comments
Joining A Glam Metal Band Is Not Good
Racquel joined Nemesis on tour.
Everything was going okay before the drugs.
She's found dead in Miami.
Everything was going okay before the drugs.
She's found dead in Miami.
#art
#dark
#death
#drugs
#fiction
55 reads
0 Comments
Stay out of the darkness
As the days turned into night a shifting is taking place in the world in our lives as well, for sure it's getting to the point that it's becoming more darker by the minutes as time. Slowly passes by the like day into night, through this realm of what is happening to our very deepness of what is life. Now let's just a minute to analyze, what I'm saying as you read between the lines, through my unspoken words. ✍️ FOR when we are facing a situation, that we will have no real control over. THAT we start to feel some kind of way, feeling trapped in a place that only shows, us the...
#emptiness
#fear
#FeelingTrapped
#LifeStruggles
#suffering
73 reads
2 Comments
It's Getting Harder
It's getting harder
And harder
To face each day
The cards are all stacked against me
Each day an uphill climb
With obstacles and headaches
Paying for my ghosts
My past regrets
The consequences of my mistakes
I am reaping what I sowed
Its getting harder
To block out the noise
The voices are getting louder
And telling me what I should do
I already know the answer
But I'm scared
I'm afraid of the aftermath
I don't know if I have the guts
To set the world right
And pay my balance due ...
And harder
To face each day
The cards are all stacked against me
Each day an uphill climb
With obstacles and headaches
Paying for my ghosts
My past regrets
The consequences of my mistakes
I am reaping what I sowed
Its getting harder
To block out the noise
The voices are getting louder
And telling me what I should do
I already know the answer
But I'm scared
I'm afraid of the aftermath
I don't know if I have the guts
To set the world right
And pay my balance due ...
#emptiness
60 reads
4 Comments
Leave Him Alone Or Else

#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#husband
#sex
58 reads
0 Comments
"The Radiant Reckoning"
Countless beams of resplendent light. The illumination
of inescapable judgments.
The lustrous fires of a focused might.
The overpowering foreknowledge of fate and its purpose. Though an evil was unleashed.
The shackles that bind us unable to subdue its menace.
It glows with the light that would make us cower hiding all of are secrets.
Its blinding reckoning would make us fearful of its purpose.
The silence that would descend would overpower the winds that surround us.
The reckoning of that vivid test would ultimately prove ...
of inescapable judgments.
The lustrous fires of a focused might.
The overpowering foreknowledge of fate and its purpose. Though an evil was unleashed.
The shackles that bind us unable to subdue its menace.
It glows with the light that would make us cower hiding all of are secrets.
Its blinding reckoning would make us fearful of its purpose.
The silence that would descend would overpower the winds that surround us.
The reckoning of that vivid test would ultimately prove ...
#morality
#mythology
#pagan
#rebirth
#sacrifice
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She's Not A Baby Girl Anymore
As far back as even
I could remember,
Molly was just a baby
girl and Dad would
do nothing bad to her.
But that was before
she got older and Dad
took one look at her
naked which made him
want to hump her hard.
I could remember,
Molly was just a baby
girl and Dad would
do nothing bad to her.
But that was before
she got older and Dad
took one look at her
naked which made him
want to hump her hard.
#dialogue
#family
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#sex
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Drink me, kill me... (with Reading)
Especially cruel in the mouth.
You don't need to have mercy on me.
Sophisticated brain games
Make me forget my complaints
Cut my skin with a razor.
Like a hundred times before.
My soul is polluted
by a sadistic fantasy.
I have long been discouraged
by false emotions.
Broke all my dreams
Men's hands are sweaty.
Why do I need these...
sadists and animals! ...
You don't need to have mercy on me.
Sophisticated brain games
Make me forget my complaints
Cut my skin with a razor.
Like a hundred times before.
My soul is polluted
by a sadistic fantasy.
I have long been discouraged
by false emotions.
Broke all my dreams
Men's hands are sweaty.
Why do I need these...
sadists and animals! ...
#abuse
#BDSM
#conflict
#dark
#lust
220 reads
29 Comments
Obtuse
Please lord
Spare me of righteousness
Allow me NOT to save souls
Let me bathe in sin
I seek honesty
I worship trust
Yet I am a heathen
To be clear
Spare me of righteousness
Allow me NOT to save souls
Let me bathe in sin
I seek honesty
I worship trust
Yet I am a heathen
To be clear
#dark
#evil
#morality #pagan
#morality #pagan
133 reads
37 Comments
Sadness
Why allow people who are rude,
Have things your daughter rarely gets?
Why trust people who can't help,
Someone they've never met?
Why be friendly to a world,
That wallows in regrets?
Why destroy an innocent child,
So you can get ahead?
Why laugh when she's not around,
To hear what you said?
Why talk to people that are there,
When I constantly worry if she is dead?
Why wake up every morning,
And waste time making the bed?
Why smile if you're not happy,
After you heard the...
Have things your daughter rarely gets?
Why trust people who can't help,
Someone they've never met?
Why be friendly to a world,
That wallows in regrets?
Why destroy an innocent child,
So you can get ahead?
Why laugh when she's not around,
To hear what you said?
Why talk to people that are there,
When I constantly worry if she is dead?
Why wake up every morning,
And waste time making the bed?
Why smile if you're not happy,
After you heard the...
#depression
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8 Comments
Salem Road (The Right Side of Wrong) II
Light from the day feeds the hungry night
Manifesting dark mysteries considered by many not to be right,
“Salem Road is an altered short cut few have traveled
But be warned mind, body and soul may come unraveled,
“Turning right a gray gravel road veers off
Besides the tracks and into the woods where the end is lost,
“An ancient wooden dwelling phases in and out of a wavering space
If entered it will transport you in pieces throughout time to a dark place,
“The few that return are tattooed, blind and horribly burned ...
Manifesting dark mysteries considered by many not to be right,
“Salem Road is an altered short cut few have traveled
But be warned mind, body and soul may come unraveled,
“Turning right a gray gravel road veers off
Besides the tracks and into the woods where the end is lost,
“An ancient wooden dwelling phases in and out of a wavering space
If entered it will transport you in pieces throughout time to a dark place,
“The few that return are tattooed, blind and horribly burned ...
#dark
#horror
68 reads
6 Comments
Been had
The depths of deception
They keep on digging
and try and outpace the damned
and they'll keep on winning
dignity is deceased
and do it while grinning
devoted liars never let up
They'll murder sleeping dogs
before whistles blow
the pups can't come running
no bone to be thrown
defend till the last day is due
and still convicted
Deny, deny
and still in the face of truth
Exposed they're composed
The narcissistic face of stillness
Protecting the ego until dying days
Don't try to be a victor
Stay the f**k...
They keep on digging
and try and outpace the damned
and they'll keep on winning
dignity is deceased
and do it while grinning
devoted liars never let up
They'll murder sleeping dogs
before whistles blow
the pups can't come running
no bone to be thrown
defend till the last day is due
and still convicted
Deny, deny
and still in the face of truth
Exposed they're composed
The narcissistic face of stillness
Protecting the ego until dying days
Don't try to be a victor
Stay the f**k...
#betrayal
#honesty
28 reads
0 Comments
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