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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:46am
Yesterday 11:46am
Wake The f**k Up!
This democracy is so full of hypocrisy
The digital age spawned a cesspool of degeneracy
Repeating the cycle of stupidity
Taking a shit on our civil liberties
Divide the blind from those who see
They infect this nation with ideas of freedom
A false reality is what they give us
In their promise to "save" us
Terrorist-tic tactics feed the machine
We are all just slaves to corrupted authority
The CIA and the DEA burned the constitution of the USA
While Politicians in DC are never locked away
The controlled...
The digital age spawned a cesspool of degeneracy
Repeating the cycle of stupidity
Taking a shit on our civil liberties
Divide the blind from those who see
They infect this nation with ideas of freedom
A false reality is what they give us
In their promise to "save" us
Terrorist-tic tactics feed the machine
We are all just slaves to corrupted authority
The CIA and the DEA burned the constitution of the USA
While Politicians in DC are never locked away
The controlled...
#CallToAction
#corruption
#money
#politics
#rebellion
62 reads
14 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:12am
Yesterday 11:12am
Anti-Establishment
Just beyond the Verizon I foresee
Our veins will become circuitry
Mindless drones consuming the disease in denial
No original thought process in their empty minds
Just blind leading the blind
Not serving a purpose
Only purposely serving on their knees
Kill your gods
Kill your governments
Freedom exists only in the mind
The mind is a weapon you should wield
Should you choose to ignore the blueprint facade
You will succumb the the programing of a false god and government
They plot for total domination ...
Our veins will become circuitry
Mindless drones consuming the disease in denial
No original thought process in their empty minds
Just blind leading the blind
Not serving a purpose
Only purposely serving on their knees
Kill your gods
Kill your governments
Freedom exists only in the mind
The mind is a weapon you should wield
Should you choose to ignore the blueprint facade
You will succumb the the programing of a false god and government
They plot for total domination ...
#CallToAction
#corruption
#greed
#HumanRights
#politics
46 reads
14 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2025 8:05pm
3rd Mar 2025 8:05pm
I DONT GIVE A f**k!
Don’t give a fuck
What you want and how you want it
You will not get from me
Burger King is not my name
Not giving two fucks
If a march broke out
And you ass was there
I would gather all those
Sweet, daisies and rammed
So far up your ass. You would
See my manicured hand in your mouth
Three fucks not givin
This is not meant to be non violent
Martin is not my King at the moment
Malcolm said by any means necessary
How's a Sig Sauer P226 sound?
Necessary?
If this was just a one...
What you want and how you want it
You will not get from me
Burger King is not my name
Not giving two fucks
If a march broke out
And you ass was there
I would gather all those
Sweet, daisies and rammed
So far up your ass. You would
See my manicured hand in your mouth
Three fucks not givin
This is not meant to be non violent
Martin is not my King at the moment
Malcolm said by any means necessary
How's a Sig Sauer P226 sound?
Necessary?
If this was just a one...
#anger
82 reads
22 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2025 12:32pm
3rd Mar 2025 12:32pm
Disguised Dictatorship
Reign of corruption
Democracy came to an end
Money for justice
Blinded by the government
Vultures overflying
Waiting death of society
Death by the government
Maniac ideology spreading blood!!
Dictatorship disguised
Growing up on their lies
Brainwashing decadent minds
Hidden the truth of our eyes
Hiding the murders
Guilty without guiltiness
Rotten state
Rapist of justice and liberty
Bloodstained
Wrong-way of democracy
Ruling through fear
Amorphous equality painted with blood!!
...
Democracy came to an end
Money for justice
Blinded by the government
Vultures overflying
Waiting death of society
Death by the government
Maniac ideology spreading blood!!
Dictatorship disguised
Growing up on their lies
Brainwashing decadent minds
Hidden the truth of our eyes
Hiding the murders
Guilty without guiltiness
Rotten state
Rapist of justice and liberty
Bloodstained
Wrong-way of democracy
Ruling through fear
Amorphous equality painted with blood!!
...
#CallToAction
#corruption
#greed
#money
#politics
56 reads
12 Comments
drone
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2025 10:58am
3rd Mar 2025 10:58am
Experimental
When one Looks
At the Human cattle
Forced
To board the Trains
One must Understand
History
Fucking tells You
IT was a whole lot more
Then a mere race
You are All
Lab rats
You chose to play
You Let us be
And we Continue
To play
At the Human cattle
Forced
To board the Trains
One must Understand
History
Fucking tells You
IT was a whole lot more
Then a mere race
You are All
Lab rats
You chose to play
You Let us be
And we Continue
To play
#betrayal
#deception
#honesty
#lies
#TruthOfLife
52 reads
1 Comment
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2025 4:06pm
2nd Mar 2025 4:06pm
Upper-Class Low-Life
There's nothing I would do for you
You're a real scum bag
All you do is nag
Kiss my ass you goddamn fool
Go fuck yourself and I'll fuck your wife too!
The pile of shit is decorated for you to consume
Degradation
Accept the invitation
Your a shit sucking butt fucking disaster, now go to your room
Lick the dick you inherited between your ass cheeks!
Your nose is deep up corporate's ass
Are you his puppy?
I hate yuppies
Nobody gets a free pass
You look pathetic enough to...
You're a real scum bag
All you do is nag
Kiss my ass you goddamn fool
Go fuck yourself and I'll fuck your wife too!
The pile of shit is decorated for you to consume
Degradation
Accept the invitation
Your a shit sucking butt fucking disaster, now go to your room
Lick the dick you inherited between your ass cheeks!
Your nose is deep up corporate's ass
Are you his puppy?
I hate yuppies
Nobody gets a free pass
You look pathetic enough to...
#anger
#CallToAction
#corruption
#greed
#lies
78 reads
16 Comments
EleazarSwan
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2025 4:13am
2nd Mar 2025 4:13am
Theatrical Diplomacy
#philosophical
14 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
1st Mar 2025 11:03am
1st Mar 2025 11:03am
Corrosion of Conformity
I cannot escape, the frequencies penetrate
Decibels pound me into submission
Camera eye, forever the spy
Motions captured for the living impaired
Silicone dictators in plastic mansions
Fiber optic propaganda
Streaming fashion inflames the passion
To climax in the blink of an eye
Terabyte brainwaves, upload in progress
Eternally the master and server
2.0 human alien being
Forever existing in some random computer
Technocracy
Is it saving me?
Technology
Inside of me
Technocracy
Is it freeing...
Decibels pound me into submission
Camera eye, forever the spy
Motions captured for the living impaired
Silicone dictators in plastic mansions
Fiber optic propaganda
Streaming fashion inflames the passion
To climax in the blink of an eye
Terabyte brainwaves, upload in progress
Eternally the master and server
2.0 human alien being
Forever existing in some random computer
Technocracy
Is it saving me?
Technology
Inside of me
Technocracy
Is it freeing...
#CallToAction
#corruption
#manipulation
#politics
#technology
83 reads
13 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
28th Feb 2025 8:06am
28th Feb 2025 8:06am
Repair
Wish you weren't here
The mind still ticks
Thoughts unclear
Life unclicks
Pain in a glass
This lonely affair
Grey contrasts
In need of repair
The mind still ticks
Thoughts unclear
Life unclicks
Pain in a glass
This lonely affair
Grey contrasts
In need of repair
#emptiness
#sadness
94 reads
12 Comments
drone
Poem Published
24th Feb 2025 9:01am
24th Feb 2025 9:01am
How They Effect
If one cannot judge
Things
By how they
Effect things
Then
The only things
One can judge
Are opinions
Based on Theory's
Dressed by experts
As Fact
Things
By how they
Effect things
Then
The only things
One can judge
Are opinions
Based on Theory's
Dressed by experts
As Fact
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
66 reads
2 Comments
Nil
Nolan
Nolan
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2025 1:47am
23rd Feb 2025 1:47am
In my Mind I've Killed you Already.
#anger
#dark
#passion
33 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
21st Feb 2025 3:11pm
21st Feb 2025 3:11pm
Do Something Like This Behind My Back
Should have known that you would do something
like this behind my back! I come
home from a hard day at work
and find you naked and
getting it on with
some guy on the
living room
sofa
there!
like this behind my back! I come
home from a hard day at work
and find you naked and
getting it on with
some guy on the
living room
sofa
there!
#betrayal
#dialogue
#fiction
#home
#sex
62 reads
0 Comments
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