Anger Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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Poetry about angst, activism and hate
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drone
Poem Published
7th Dec 2024 1:26pm
7th Dec 2024 1:26pm
Doesn't Look Back
She looks up
To the man with the lens
Sir can you help me
I'm hungry no place to to sleep
A little humanity would help me
He closes his lens
Doesn't look back
Injoying his vacation
Not thinking twice
About his comfortable life
Just happy to have it
As she looks on
In sadness and grief
At humanity fading
As she listens to his Unconscious words
OH don't look twice
IT will ruin your vacation
In paradise
To the man with the lens
Sir can you help me
I'm hungry no place to to sleep
A little humanity would help me
He closes his lens
Doesn't look back
Injoying his vacation
Not thinking twice
About his comfortable life
Just happy to have it
As she looks on
In sadness and grief
At humanity fading
As she listens to his Unconscious words
OH don't look twice
IT will ruin your vacation
In paradise
#honesty
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oldmanG
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 2:18am
6th Dec 2024 2:18am
Poison Blood
Says they’re poisoning our blood
While he poisons American me and our history
Selling lies and gold sneakers
Says you’re not one of US
When he came from land of immigrants
Father Fred born of a German barber
Land of the free what does that mean to me
They turn around and tell you when and what
You can do with your female body
Talk about freedom but all they do is close you in
If you think forward not in the past
You’re too woke you communist
Wallowing...
While he poisons American me and our history
Selling lies and gold sneakers
Says you’re not one of US
When he came from land of immigrants
Father Fred born of a German barber
Land of the free what does that mean to me
They turn around and tell you when and what
You can do with your female body
Talk about freedom but all they do is close you in
If you think forward not in the past
You’re too woke you communist
Wallowing...
#anger
#apathy
#betrayal
#conflict
#deception
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oldmanG
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 1:16am
6th Dec 2024 1:16am
Insurrection Election
Insurrection to win an election
In times passed down a country tries for freedom
Give me tired and poor whatever the Green Lady says
Escaped from tyranny and monarchy
Spilled some tea into the Boston Harbor
Hopped on a horse said one if land two by sea
Crossed the Delaware in frigid conditions
Just to say we stand free among ourselves
Pen on parchment we declare we’re free men and women and we were born of immigrants
Civil wars and atomic bombs didn’t change us
We still breath to live free and...
In times passed down a country tries for freedom
Give me tired and poor whatever the Green Lady says
Escaped from tyranny and monarchy
Spilled some tea into the Boston Harbor
Hopped on a horse said one if land two by sea
Crossed the Delaware in frigid conditions
Just to say we stand free among ourselves
Pen on parchment we declare we’re free men and women and we were born of immigrants
Civil wars and atomic bombs didn’t change us
We still breath to live free and...
#anger
#lies
#politics
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Bsp4444
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 1:03pm
4th Dec 2024 1:03pm
Charmed Into Harm
The shiny words and fancy things
The indoctrinated choir sings.
From the pulpit he spews nonsensical views
To the rabid public that fill the pews
Pushing the lies that threaten humanity.
And disregard any notion of divinity.
But he does it with such panache and flair
That they follow his commands without care.
They forget their love for family and community.
Carrying out his plans with sadistic impunity.
His sole intentions are to divide.
To mock, to ridicule, to belittle, to chide.
Caring nothing about bringing people together ...
The indoctrinated choir sings.
From the pulpit he spews nonsensical views
To the rabid public that fill the pews
Pushing the lies that threaten humanity.
And disregard any notion of divinity.
But he does it with such panache and flair
That they follow his commands without care.
They forget their love for family and community.
Carrying out his plans with sadistic impunity.
His sole intentions are to divide.
To mock, to ridicule, to belittle, to chide.
Caring nothing about bringing people together ...
#hate
#hypocrisy
#lies #manipulation
#lies #manipulation
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 10:33am
4th Dec 2024 10:33am
Monsanto, the World & GMO's
You study, manipulate, you control, you create , you impose...
You study, manipulate, you control, you create, you impose, on the world
Biotechnology and manipulation of the living are a good way to improve your financial power,
We know the effects of genetically modified products on the lives of human beings
Development of diseases which are immune to antibiotics
Transferring animal genes into plants
Cross-pollination methods can cause damage to other organisms that thrive in the environment
You want us to be depending
But we don't want to...
You study, manipulate, you control, you create, you impose, on the world
Biotechnology and manipulation of the living are a good way to improve your financial power,
We know the effects of genetically modified products on the lives of human beings
Development of diseases which are immune to antibiotics
Transferring animal genes into plants
Cross-pollination methods can cause damage to other organisms that thrive in the environment
You want us to be depending
But we don't want to...
#corruption
#food
#greed
#money
#power
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2024 8:00pm
3rd Dec 2024 8:00pm
1999, the birth of the modern hipster
The hipster of the 21st century are a subculture of people who are already dominant.
They are not your underdogs carving out a place to breathe freely.
The modern day hipster aligns himself or herself with rebel subculture and with the dominant class.
Thus, the rebel consumer, who rebels against nothing.
The artist who creates no art.
The hipsters who flooded Brooklyn and the entire Western World in the 2000's might look like Bohemians, but they are not.
They are not anti-authoritarian, like other youth subcultures through history. They drink the Kool-Aid...
They are not your underdogs carving out a place to breathe freely.
The modern day hipster aligns himself or herself with rebel subculture and with the dominant class.
Thus, the rebel consumer, who rebels against nothing.
The artist who creates no art.
The hipsters who flooded Brooklyn and the entire Western World in the 2000's might look like Bohemians, but they are not.
They are not anti-authoritarian, like other youth subcultures through history. They drink the Kool-Aid...
#corruption
#culture
#hate
#lies
#money
51 reads
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oldmanG
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 10:24pm
2nd Dec 2024 10:24pm
Stop and Listen
Stop collaborate listen
IVF creates new ones
Family starving for a little life
She can’t do what her body requires
Doctor says this can spark a life
Back in the legislature man says
Why do IVF when we are all in pro life
Congressman or congresswoman says
I can rule your life and death until you’re no more
Momma just wanting to Mother
She just can’t deliver little ones
Without a little help welcome modern health
Living in a Red State trying to deliver voters...
IVF creates new ones
Family starving for a little life
She can’t do what her body requires
Doctor says this can spark a life
Back in the legislature man says
Why do IVF when we are all in pro life
Congressman or congresswoman says
I can rule your life and death until you’re no more
Momma just wanting to Mother
She just can’t deliver little ones
Without a little help welcome modern health
Living in a Red State trying to deliver voters...
#frustration
#morality
#relationships #sadness
#relationships #sadness
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 11:10am
2nd Dec 2024 11:10am
We're all just a f**king number anyway
Right, Left, Black, White, He Or She
Rich, Poor, Young, Old, You Or Me
I Don't Care
Killer, Heathen, Dumb, Smart or Impaired
Brown, Yellow, Beggar, Gay, Whore, I'll never care
Difference In Look Or Opinion, Makes No Fucking Difference To Me
We're All Equals
The powers to be divide us up.
They create the boundaries, the wars, the prejudices we have for each other.
They want us to hate, to kill, to destroy, for their gain.
Rich, Poor, Young, Old, You Or Me
I Don't Care
Killer, Heathen, Dumb, Smart or Impaired
Brown, Yellow, Beggar, Gay, Whore, I'll never care
Difference In Look Or Opinion, Makes No Fucking Difference To Me
We're All Equals
The powers to be divide us up.
They create the boundaries, the wars, the prejudices we have for each other.
They want us to hate, to kill, to destroy, for their gain.
#hate
#manipulation
#murder
#politics
#power
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drone
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 8:29am
2nd Dec 2024 8:29am
Weak Willed
Being feeble minded
Has been
Psychologicaly
And Scientifically
Stolen from the old
Now trending
Among the Young
Has been
Psychologicaly
And Scientifically
Stolen from the old
Now trending
Among the Young
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 9:11pm
1st Dec 2024 9:11pm
Shitheads of the world unite!
Opponent Philosophies
Malevolent Atrocities
Hypocrite Ministries
Brothers Or Enemies
You Gotta Die Because You're Different
You Gotta Die Because I'm Not
I'll Cast You Down
I'll Take You Out
A Legitimate Death
In A Legitimate War
Everyone's Right
Nobody's Wrong
Everyone Fights
Until We're All Gone
See ya!
Malevolent Atrocities
Hypocrite Ministries
Brothers Or Enemies
You Gotta Die Because You're Different
You Gotta Die Because I'm Not
I'll Cast You Down
I'll Take You Out
A Legitimate Death
In A Legitimate War
Everyone's Right
Nobody's Wrong
Everyone Fights
Until We're All Gone
See ya!
#horror
#hypocrisy
#philosophical
#religion
#war
43 reads
2 Comments
ExercisingDemons
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 5:42pm
1st Dec 2024 5:42pm
I am your cross
(I'll sever you in less syllables than you borrow, lest my tongue throw a fit when I read this over (First, you use "bold" letters and words in quotations, like this)
"I walk on peoples scars to gain an inch and pluck from precipice of my creators limbs, my touch goes all but unnoticed, they barely feel the pinch but my soul erodes when I let words, truly mine roll through some other man's uncreative ditch to be cursive treasure, to be seeds and beans to trade for what they wish, become the way in which they're measured when they use a drop of mine as a pond to...
"I walk on peoples scars to gain an inch and pluck from precipice of my creators limbs, my touch goes all but unnoticed, they barely feel the pinch but my soul erodes when I let words, truly mine roll through some other man's uncreative ditch to be cursive treasure, to be seeds and beans to trade for what they wish, become the way in which they're measured when they use a drop of mine as a pond to...
#anger
#funny
#steampunk
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oldmanG
Poem Published
30th Nov 2024 11:14pm
30th Nov 2024 11:14pm
No Way
No way there should be more guns than people
No way there should be
More guns than people
No way there should be
More guns than people
No way there should be
More guns than people
No way there should be
More guns than people
No way there should be
More guns than people
No way there should be
No way but we look away
No way but we look away
And send them off to school
Send them into the fire
With armor of innocence
Shrapnel in soul
Wake up...
No way there should be
More guns than people
No way there should be
More guns than people
No way there should be
More guns than people
No way there should be
More guns than people
No way there should be
More guns than people
No way there should be
No way but we look away
No way but we look away
And send them off to school
Send them into the fire
With armor of innocence
Shrapnel in soul
Wake up...
#anger
#anxiety
#apathy
#frustration
#GunControl
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