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Serpents Breath
A slithering spine seduces yours into mine, sensual satisfaction of unborn lovers. Touches that warm breast and breath, slowly pull the sheets of shame. Tugging at your existence are soft memories of the divine, leading this intrinsic prayer. A slow rise to silky blossoms, leaking from the physical soul, the embodiment of desire.
Published 1st Sep 2010
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22nd Jan 2011 9:24pm
Beautiful like your other poetry, but harder to understand. I love the use of 's' words. They encourage the image of a snake. The only thing I can derive from this poem besides, the imagery of lovers is the idea of a soul before birth. The loss of what our souls knew before thrust into this world. The idea of a snake and divinity is a good contrast. I will have to read this again later to see if I can get something else from it.
3rd Feb 2011 4:00am
That is a really good take on the meaning of this one. I'm interested in hearing what else you may derive from this piece, or any others for that matter.
16th Mar 2013 1:41am
